A veeba story part 50 (last part)

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sana2511

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

lovely ballu veeraq ko miss kar raha hai...haaiii...nice work...👍🏼👍🏼

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overactor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Part-19

Veera went to baldev's house with everybody else for the mehendi ceremony.

All the men stood outside while the ladies were inside, singing dancing enjoying.

Bfriend1: paaji..ithe to kuch maza nhi a rha..andar chalen

Baldev; bg ne maar maar k bharta bana dena he..andar jayega

Bfriend2; aapne parjai ji ko vekha

Baldev; o nhi oye..inni bheed he kuch nhi dikha menu...ab bahar to wo ane se rhi

Bfriend1; paaji kuch karo hamen andar jana he

Baldev made a face and started thinking.

He knocked at the door. Veera opened it..and his jaw dropped..she was wearing a green lehnga and looked stunning

Veera; baldev! saans le

Baldev; huhn..ki..o..wo..wo menu pait me dard ho rha he andar jane de menu

Veera; mere saamne bahane nhi chalenge...chal ja ab yahan se

she was about to close the door..but he caught hold of her hand and pulled her out.

Baldev; chal mere naal

Veera; chod baldev...menu andar jane de menu mehendi lagani he

Baldev; to laga lena na mene kab roka he

he took her into the bushes.

Veera; ki kr rha he

he came close to her and held her from her waist

Baldev; chup bilkul chup..tera masla ki he aakhir qn tadpa rhi he menu..ki bigada he mene tera

Veera; mene ki

Baldev; kaha na chup...poori raat meri yaad me jaagti rhi aur mujhe jhoot bola...aur ab bina mujhse mile hi andar chali gai

veera's heart raced.

Baldev; aaj to veera baldev singh bht ziada khoobsurat lag rhi he.

she blushed and lowered her eyes.

Baldev; oye hoye meri veera sharmati bhi he

Veera; chod menu mehendi lagani he

he kissed her cheeks

Baldev; ja pr mera naam zarur likhana mehendi wich

veera ran away; nhi likaongi.

after all the naach-gana..all gents were called in for dinner.

Baldev entered with ranvi..it was over crowded so they had a small clash

Baldev; oye dulhe raja dekh k chal

Ranvi; maaf kr de baldev

Baldev; han han theek he

he made an irritated face

Ranvi; baldev dek us din k liye menu maaf krde wo menu galat fehmi hogai thi..veera ne sb btaya menu..ab use kb tujhse pyaar hua ye to menu nhi pta pr ab uski ankhon me wo pyar nazar aya menu.

Baldev; koi gal nhi...(he smiled at the pyar dialogue)

Veera came to them.

Veera; e dekho veerji meri mehendi

she wanted some1 else to see but it was too public

Ranvi; bht changi he veera, kis ne lagai

Veera; moti chaiji ne...dekho veerji kinni vadhiya design he...aur kisi fazool bande ka naam bhi nhi isme

she looked at baldev, he raised his eyebrows

Ranvi; changa..bg aariyan

he left.

Baldev came close to her and held her wrists.

Baldev; dekhun to...hmm..han kisi fazool bande ka naam nhi isme...bas tere...(he came very close...and whispered in her ear) pati ka naam he...baldev (he traced his name on her hand)

she blushed.

Veera; chod menu

Baldev; kal shaadi k baad tayar rehna tere liye kuch khas...u khende ho tum log...han surprise he.

He left then veera kept on blushing

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overactor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

ok guys im planning to end this one but i love this one alot so tell me do u want me to end it aur shall i continue?

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sparkle2985

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

cont cont cont sonu dont end it yaar acha hein

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Siya N

@monumolu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

ki bol rahi hai... Mainu heart attack aandhi hai... Pls pls stop mat kariyo... Do continue... Kinna acha hai yeh... New yeatr hai humein thoda khush rehne dena... Ek to screen mein kuch hota nahi hai... Veera n her infatuation infuriate me a lot... I am more addcited to ur ff than the serial... Arey yaar Sonu iss se vadda kya complimet doon bolo... Thank u so much for the FF yaar... It was a treat indeed to watch their journey ... Word picture...

Edited by monumolu - 11 years ago

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sonal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Ohh please yaar don't end it
And nice part continue soon

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sana2511

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: overactor
ok guys im planning to end this one but i love this one alot so tell me do u want me to end it aur shall i continue?

no yaar plz continue...it was an awesome story...👏i loved it nd abhi toh ranjan shaadi ho rahi hai aur veeba ke beech pyar vyar ho rahi hai.😳😳..tu aise kaise khatam kar sakthi ho...😭im expecting more yaar...ur writing is just awesome make more na..😃sorry im soo selfish na...😕