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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anish17

Glad his true face is exposed in front of all
Swarna is a brave girl
That slap was superb 😉
Gayatri suspect is right on laksh parents .they are faking [:X]
Awesome update deep
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the pm

Thanks so much sissy
so glad you loved it.🤗
my pleasure.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Deeps, Awesome update loved it

Glad that Lakshraj's true colors came in front of everyone.
Swarna is a brave girl, she gave it back to him.
They slapped him and he deserves it.
Continue soon, waiting for the next update.
Thanks for the PM dear

Thanks a lot dear...😳so happy you loved it.
sure will cont.soon..
my pleasure.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dharsii

Nice update deep..
Swarna is so bold..
He didn't expect this from her..
Tight slap...He needs more...
He likes to hurt her.
Waiting for his punishment..
Update soon.
Thanks for pm.

Thanks so much Priya..😳
my pleasure dear..thanks for coming.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: abba12

Finally Laksh is fully exposed, that beast of a man 🤔

Liked swarna's courage in this part, she gave back with strength ...
I want rana ji to beat him like he did to swarna, he should beg for mercy ..And ban him from kingdom forever 😡

Thanks a lot Amna ..😳ya he will be banned ..😡
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ..neelanjana

Super like update

I loved the slap part most😃 but he need more and more 😉 brave Swarna❤️
Finally Laksh got what he deserved !
Waiting for next
Update soon Deep🤗

Thanks 😳so much Niks 🤗
yup he needs more..
sure will update soon 👍🏼
thanks for coming dear.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks a lot friends..🤗
few parts left of this story ..😳
keep giving your love to this story ❤️
and hope you like these parts too
posting part 11-12 today.👍🏼





scroll down for part 11 in next post and part 12 in third post.😃
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Ranaji declared that Laksh will be in prison till hearing of his case..

Kunwarji and Kunwar Raniji were very sad coz of Laksh but they couldn't do anything directly ..Ranaji after few days ..when Darbaar was all set ..called Laksh..and told subjects of Ameerkot that what he has done ..and he can't do this to anybody again ..for that he [Ranaji ]will make sure..Laksh will regret what he has done ..and will beg for life.

Ppl of Ameerkot became so angry and they wanted a hard punishment for him..they love and respect Princess Swarnalekha and want justice for her..

Ranaji calmed them down and said ..he will have to pay for it and from now on he will live life like other prisoners does..and also he has been banned from entering the kingdom and he will be sent to prison in the outskirts of Ameerkot..he is no more a prince and his princely status and luxuries will not help him any more..he has not have any share in the Ameerkot now ..any facilities will not be given to him ..he will be in prison till final judgement in his case will not come..as of now ..investigation is on so as to find out ..what else he did wrong ..there is info about him being involved in some illegal activities too..

Rajmata too agreed to all this and Kunwarji and Kunwar Raniji couldn't do anything despite of feeling helpless for their own child..

Gayatri as always with Ranaji and his decision and that Laksh has to pay for his wrong deeds.

~~~~0~~~~

After some days..things were getting back to normal and Ranaji too was busy in kingdom's work..

But he didn't forgot Swarna and neither Gayatri forgot ..she went to meet Swarna and she was happy to know that she is trying to move on in life..she came back and told Ranaji about this too..Rajmata too was happy hearing this.

~~~~0~~~~

Ranaji picked up the book ..he was reading currently but now from some days ..so much stress and tension coz of Laksh and Swarna ..now after some days he was sitting in his room with his fav book..

Rani Gayatri came and Ranaji stood up.

"Ranaji kya hua?"

[Ranaji what happened ?]

"Raniji aayi hain ..toh hum.."

[Raniji has come ..so we]

"Aap yaha k Raja hain.."

[You are the king!!]

"Aur aap Rani..waise Gayatri ..aap ab toh khush hain na ..Swarna ne nayi zindagi shuru karne ka faisla kar liya hai.."

[And you queen ..btw Gayatri ..now you are happy na ..Swarna trying to move on and she wants to start new life..]

"Haan Ranaji ..main bahut khush hoon.."

[Yes Ranaji I am very happy..]

"Aur aap Laksh k liye yahi soche k usko uske kiye ki saza milni hi thi..Swarna bach gayi ..yahi khushi ki baat hain ..wo hamara bhai hai phir bhi hume afsos nahi hai ..kyuki uski harkate hi aisi thi .."

[And you just think that he got punishment for his wrong deeds..he deserved it ..Swarna is safe ..that's good ..he is my bro but than also I am not feeling bad ..as his deeds were like that ..]

"Haan Ranaji ..aap sahi kahte hain.."

[Yes Ranaji ..you are right!]

"Jo hua ..so hua ..ab hume aap par hamla karne wale ki aur sara dhayn lagana hoga.."

[OK so what happened ..happened ..but now I have to focus mainly on your attack and on this that who are the attackers ?]

"Ranaji aap hamara kitna khayal rakhte hain.."

[Ranaji you care for me so much..]

She buried her face in his chest..he embraced her in her arms..

"Raniji hum aapka aur bhi khayal rakhna chahte hain.."before embracing her in his arms ..he kept the book on table ..which Gayatri saw and she smiled naughtily..

[Raniji I want to take care of you more and more ]

"Ranaji aap hamar aaur khayal rakhna chahte hain toh kripya hamara gyan badaye aur hame ye angrezi pustak padh kar sunaye ..aur mana mat kariyega .."

[Ranaji if you want to take care of me more than pls increase my knowledge and read for me the English book..and don't say no pls..]

Ranaji was like now how to say no ..

"Gayatri woh ..dekhiye .."

[Gayatri ..look..]

"Hmm hume dekhna nahi ..sun na hai ..aur wo bhi abhi ..aap chahte hain na k hum pichli pareshaaniya bhool jaye toh bas hume kuch accha sa is pustak se sunaiye .."

[I don't want to see ..i want to listen ..and right now..you want na that I will forget all worries so pls read some thing good from this book for me ..]

"Gayatri hum ..accha ..theek hai.."he picked up book again

[Gayatri ..ok all right ..]

But Gayatri snatched book from him and searching something ..

"Ye dekhiye ..ye jo panna muda hai na ..yehi sunaiye .."

[See ..read this page which is folded..]

"Par ye toh hum padh chuke ..kai baar.."

[But that I have read ..many times..]

"Haan hume pata hai ..aap yehi panaa kai baar padh chuke hain..humne ye nishaani yaad rakhi thi..toh is panne main kuch toh aisa hoga na..bas hume yehi sun na hai .."

[Yes I know ..you have read it many times and I have noticed this mark ..so there must be something in this page ..so I want you to read this only..]

"Uff ye Gayatri ko kaise pata chal gaya ? ab hum kya karein?"he thought.

[Uff how Gayatri knows about it ?now what will I do ?]

"Ranaji main intezaar kar rahi hoon ..and she sat on the couch near by ..

[Ranaji ..i am waiting for it ..]

"Wo isme nayak se pr..pre..prem ..prem.."

[See ..in this ..lo..lo..lov..love..]

"Ranaji ..prem nivedan ..hai na!! humne aise kai prem nivadan padhe hain..hum toh pustak haath main aane k baad chorte hi nahi the.."

[Ranaji ..love confession ..is there na ..!! I have read so many love confessions..and I never left the book if once started ..]

"Accha Raniji..toh phir hume padhne ki kya jarurat hai? Ye bhi waisa hi hai " he smiled and tried to escape..

[Is that Raniji ? so than no need to read ..its same like that ..you know .."

"Aree ..aap padhiye ..chup chap .."She almost ordered..

[Aree ..you just read ..]

"Chup chap kaise padhe Gayatri .."he made baby face..

[How can I read quietly Gayatri..]

"Lafzo ko na pakde ..bas padhiye..hamara matlab tha k itni ghabrahat kyu ho rahi hain? Aisa kya likha hia isme..hum aapki patni hai ..hume nahi suna sakte aap?"

[You just not focus on my words ..i mean to say that why are you so nervous ? what's written in this book ..and I am your wife so you can't read it for me ?]

"Ji bilkul Gayatri ..bilkul..Nayak prem nivedan kar raha hai ..[his expressions were like ..now no way to return back.]

[Ofcourse Gayatri ..ofcourse ..hero is confessing ..]

"Nayak nayika se.."

[Hero said to heroine..]

"Unka kuch naam bhi toh hoga na.."

[They must have some name ..]

"Haan bilkul hai .."

[Yes they have ]

"Par wo toh angrezi main hoga ..rahne dijiye ..aap padhiye .."

[But that will be in English na ..ok leave it ..you just read.]

"Nayak nayika se -Priye tumhare kesh jaise raat ka andhera ho..tumhari aankhe jaise

Jheel jaisi gahri ho ..tumhar chehra jaise chand ho ..aur tumhare ..tumhare .."

[Hero to heroine -love ..you hair are just like the darkness of night ..your eyes are deep like lake ..your face is like moon..and your..your..]

"Kya tumhare ? Ranaji itni der main kabhi nahi lagati..aap rukiye mat ..aage badhiye.."

[What your? Ranaji I would not have taken so much time ..don't stop ..read further..]

"Tumhare adhar jaise koi raseela phal .."Ranaji read it so fast that Gayatri laughed at it ..

[Your lips are like a juicy fruit..]


"Ranaji aap toh aise sharma rahe hai ..jaise kabhi aisa padha na ho..hmm itni baar ye panna padh chuke hain par hamare saamne nahi padh sakte?aap na toh khud nayika ki tareef karte hain ..na hi bechare nayak ki man ki baat hume suna rahe hain..jayiye ..hume nahi sun na .."


[Ranaji ..you are blushing like you have never read anything like this ..hmm..you have read it many times ..yet not able to read in front of me ?you neither praise heroine yourself and nor you able to read hero's feelings for me..leave it ..i don't want to listen ..]


"Gayatri aap kaisi baat karti hain..hum aise kaise?theek hai ..padha hai humne ye panna baar baar..toh..aur aap suna deti agar aapko padhna aata toh?"he said in low voice but he was embarresed too while Gayatri was enjoying teasing him..


[Gayatri what are you talking ..how can I ? ok ..i have read it many times but if you have to read it ..would you able to read it ?]


"Haan toh kaunsa hum kuch karne k liye kah rahe hain? Padhna hi toh hai.."she said like that what' the big deal is he is reading..


[Yes so when I am saying to do as per the book ..only said to read it]


"Aap Raja log bas ladhna jaante hai..prem pyaar aapke bas ki baat nahi ..aap..!!"before she could complete she found Ranaji near her ..she was lying in bed closing her eyes and listening to Ranaji..and now talking to him but with close eyes only..when she sensed him near her ..she stood up and just than Ranaji came close to her more..now her heart was beating fast ..


[You kings only know to fight ..you can't o anything in these love and love related matters..you!!]


"Kya baat hai Raniji ? a kya hua ? hum sunate hai na aapko..aayiye.."he whispered in her ear..

[What Raniji ?what happened ? I will read for you ..come na ..]

"Ranaji who hum paani leke .."

[Ranaji I ..just ..bring ..water..]

"SShhh ..aap kahi nahi jayengi ..jab tak hum apni baat poor nahi kar lete .."he hold her hand.

[Sshhh ..you will not go anywhere ..till I will complete ..]


"Bilkul sahi likha hai..Aapke kesh jaise raat ka andhera .."he opened her bun and started playing with them ..Gayatri who was in fun mood prev.now she was all shy ..

[So true ..your hair is like darkness of night..]

"Aur aapki aankhen jaise jheel si gahri ho.."he kissed her eyes one by one..

[And your eyes ..deep like a lake ]

"Aur aapka chehra jaise chand .."

[And your face is like moon..]he cupped her face and she tried to escape but couldn't

He kissed her cheeks also one by one making her blushing hard ..with eyes down ..

He than added "Aur aapke adhar .."he didn't completed the sentence and came more closer ..and brushed his lips with his fingers ..

[And your lips ..]

"Ranaji !!"she was breathing fast and finally spoke.

"Ranaji ye aap kya?"

"Aap hi ne kaha na ..kaunsa karke dikhna hai? Toh humne socha kyu na karke hi dikha de ..aapko acche se samajh main aayga.."he smiled naughtily..

[You said na ..who's saying to do it ? so I thought ..why not I will show you rather than read for you ?you will understand fully and more effectively..]

"Hatiye ..humne ye thore hi kaha tha ?aap .."

[Leave ..i haven't said like that ? you ..]


"Gayatri aap jaanti hain ..hum ye panna baar baar kyu padte the ? kyuki ye sab hum aapse kahna chahte the..aapko batana chahte the k aap hamare liye kya hain ? aur ye k hum aapko poori tarah se apna maan chuke hain..aur ye toh sirf hamare rishte par hamare pyaar ki mohar laga rahe the hum ..lagane dijiye na.."he again bring his face close to her ..but she hugged him tightly and her face turned red ..


[Gayatri ..do you know ..why I read this page again and again ? coz I wanted to tell all this to you ..i wanted tot tell you that what you meant to me ?and this that I accepted you fully now ..and by doing this I was just stamping on our relationship with love..so let me na ..]


"Ranaji .."

"Ab toh maan gayi na ..hum bhi prem karna jaante hain..par aapne toh adhura hi rahne diya..poora toh karne dijiye ..

[Now you accept na ..i also know about love ..but you didn't let me finish..let me complete..]

They were talking to each other ..just than they heard a voice of something broken..and when Ranaji saw ..there was a stone lying with a paper wrapped around it ..it was thrown form outside and window's glass was broken coz of that.

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Ranaji picked up the paper and saw the msg and read it ..

"Now this hide and seek will end with end of your life.."

Who can do this ? He thought..

He ordered soldiers to search each and every corner of palace.

Gayatri was scared but Ranaji assured her that who ever done this will be caught just like prev.one and also the real evil behind this will be arrested soon ..he was planning something and now will implement the plan ..


Gayatri rested her face on his shoulder. He hugged her tight and took her in arms and make her lay down on bed.

Lying beside her and again said ..no need to worry ..he is with her ..

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Part 12 in next post.😳





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Kunwarji -Kokila in his room.


"Kokile I told you to control Laksh ..now see what happened? "


"Don't say anything about my son ..my blood is boiling ..and Ranaji and Gayatri ..

what they think of themselves ? If they won't let my child live than I will also not sit quiet ..I will not let them live happily.."she said gritting her teeth ..

Kunwarji put hand on her shoulder and said ..he too agree with her and they will do everything possible for Lakshraj and on the same time they will show Ranaji ..what they can do.

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Next day Ranaji was so busy whole day but they took Gayatri with him too ..

Gayatri too helped him in work..he than along with Gayatri to a near by lake which was a picnic spot too..

He told her that ..it was his best hiding place when ever he was depressed or felt low ..he went there..

and Gayatri too admitted that it was such a lovely place..

Her mood was good to see such b'ful scenary .. and cool water in lake ..b'ful greenry..

Everything soothing to eyes..

Ranaji went in a hut ..it was in shape of hut but was fully furnished and decorated ..

He told her ..that after becoming king .. he renovate this place and now its his private rest room in forest ..she can say..

Gayatri found it so unique and praised it so much ..

She was so happy to be there ..she was scared last night but now Ranaji again told her and said that Kings and queens always live under pressure but the main thing is to not take pressure so much that they can't even breath freely..yes they have been attacked and infact Gayatri been attacked many times yet they should not live in fear always..his soldiers are searching now in outskirts of Ameerkkot too ..so cheer up and enjoy the moments..

"Ranaji ..aap mera itna khayal rakhenge ..main socha na tha ..:"

[Ranaji you are so caring ..i never thought ..you will take care of me this much .."

"Why not Rani sahiba ? matlab kyu nahi rakhenge.."

"Ranaji is jagah main baar baar aana chahungi"

[Ranaji ..i would like to come at this place again and again .."

Gaaytri shared her feelings but Ranaji lost in thoughts ..his first wife Sulakshna didn't like this place at all ..she always complained when ever he brought her here ..she loved only palace and being pampered and he was also like arrested in her love so much that he never say no to her for anything ..but she inspite of all his love many times say him no or complain if anything not according to her ..and that's why she didn't


attend any functions /celebrations of villages and subjects ..coz she didn't want to go to such places ..but Gayatri is so diff and in all means have all capabilities of being a good queen ..he sometimes thinks this too that why he was so in loved with Sulakshna? and it seems he missed so much in all these years ..being with Gayatri is always so refreshing and so good ..she help in work too ..she want to understand his prob too ..she wants to share his work..listen to subjects ..never hesitate to go anywhere and to do anything ..when needed ..she is an ordinary girl but no after becoming queen ..no tantrums at all ..she even respects servants very much ..not order like Sulakshna did mostly..


Don't know why he is compairing but the thoughts keep coming into mind..why was he so blind in love that he sometimes denied to listen Rajmata too ..and after her death ..Rajmata ..BRM tried a lot to make him comfortable but he wasn't getting peace ..he was addicted to her and after her death ..nothing looked good ..

He didn't find peace and he wanted to be with her ..yes he was in love with her so much ..but how can he avoid imp kingdom work and be with her even in work time..what happened to him then?

Now also he is doing work too and he spent time with Gayatri too ..so what happened than ?

"Ranaji..Ranaji...koi tapasya kar rahe hai kya ? kya hua?"

"Hmm..no no Gayatri ..koi meditation ..koi tapasya nahi kar rahe hum ..i was just thinking something ..kuch soch rahe the .."

"Ok Ranaji..dekha main "ok " bolna seekh gayi "

She smiled ..

"Too good Gayu..bahut acche .."

"Gayu ..ye kya bula rahe hain?"

"From today ..aaj se ..i will ..hum tumhe ..call you Gayu ..Gayu bulayenge .."

He said in both eng and hindi ..

"Gayu ..wah Ranaji ..kya irade hain? "

[Gayu ..Ranaji ..what is the plan?"]

"Hum bataye ..i will tell you ..wait .."

He caressed her face and started playing with her bangles ..than he kissed her forhead and said

"Raniji ..yaha hume disturb ..matlab tang karne wala koi nahi hai ..no one is here ..so can we .."

She understood half but when he brought his face near her ..she blushed and turned her face..

"Gayu ..idhar dekhiye ..see here ..ye aapka pyaar ka naam hai..we call It nick name ..so I will call you Gayu..hum aapko Gayu bhi kahaenge.sabke saamne nahi akele main ..in private I will call you Gayu.."

"Ranaji ..aap itne shararati hain ..hume nahi pata tha .."

[Ranaji you are so naughty ..i didn't knew that]

"Gayu ..toh aayiye hum bata dete hain.."he hold her hand and lift her face than by making her face towards her ..

And was about to kiss her ..when some sevak screamed ..

"Ranaji !!"

Ranaji ..Gayatri heard the voice and parted ..they went to the door ..opened it and sevak told them that there was a man roaming around her and he was planning to harm you both it seems .and he was near the hut and hiding himself in long grass and trees but their team caught him and now he is fainted ..

"Oh no! why this all happening ? who was he ? let me see "

"Ranaji main bhi chalungi"

"Haan Gayatri ..come ..lets see ..dekhte hain ..but its good ..ye achha hua ..jaisa humne socha tha waisa hua ...koi hai jo hamesha hamari nigrani karta hai ..someone is behind us ..that's why we were extra careful and see he is caught ..no one can harm you Gayu ..i am with you ..koi aapko nuksaan nahi pahuncha sakta ..hum satark the aur hum sahi the..humne use pakad liya .."

He embraced her in his arms..and Gayatri was thinking that who is doing this and now who wants to harm her and who don't want Ranaji and her meeting..?

~~~~~0~~~~~

somewhere in forest near Ranaji's resting place..someone was saying.

"I will not leave you and I will not let you become one Ranaji and Gayatri ..Sulakshana was my weapon to destroy you Ranaji ..but Sulakshna is no more now ..and this Gayatri I thought ..she will not able to make you come out of grief but she did and you are happy which I can't see and you are in love with her but this time I won't do any mistake ..wait and watch ..

And on the other side in sane forest Ranaji and Gayatri were searching more about the attacker and Gayatri thinking god to keep them safe.

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Thanks Friends.❤️

Deepti😳




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Now updated.😳
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Deeps awesome updates, loved it.
Who is RaGa's enemy and who wants to destroy them apart from Kunwar Chacha and Kokila.
Laksh is in prison for his misdeeds and he will be punished after the investigation.
Thanks for the PM dear.

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