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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Keepdreaming

lovely update
raga sweet moments ...
he taught her riding horse...
gayatri is really different from sulukshana...
hope gayatri and swarna talk soon...
happy new year...
thnx for pm

Thanks so much dear..🤗
My pleasure ..glad you came.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anish17

Awesome update deep

Beautifully written
Raga scenes were so cute and lovely
Especially riding on horse ,touching cheeks 😉
He realised that gayu is best as wife when compared to his late wife
Poor swarna didn't get a chance to talk with gayu
Hope raga will help and save her from that monster
Thanks for the pm 🤗

Thanks a lot Ani..🤗
Ya Raga will defo help her..my pleasure dear.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: abba12

Happy new year deepti :)

this is one cutiee update :P
i love how rana is acting around gayatri and she is lovely too .. i hope they uderstand the problems in swarna's life and try to solve them ..
i so wished there was horse riding scene in ETR but there was none :P ... it fulfilled here ..
keep writing...
waiting for next :)

Thank you so much dear ..🤗
Ya me too want horse riding scene but didn't happened..
Thanks Amna.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Going to update .😳
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Soon.😃
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Thanks so much friends for reading this story and giving your valuable comments⭐️
for this.🤗
here's posting next part 😃

hope you like this too..❤️
scroll down for update.😳
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Ranaji and Gayatri reached palace.They were welcomed there so warmly..


Rajmata were there for their welcome..


Kokila and kunwar ji were also there ..but Laksh and Swarna were missing..Gayatri wanted to meet her so she thought to ask about her ..and she asked Kokila ..and she get to know that she is in her room..


Gayatri went to her room after meeting with all..she wanted to share so many things with Swarna


And also wanted to know about her ..


When they came in room..




"Ranaji I am going to meet Swarna .."


[Ranaji main Swarna se milne jaa rahi hoon..]



"Sure Gayatri ..i will also want to meet Rani bhabhi if you don't mind !"he smiled ..

[Jarur Gayatri ..hum bhi Rani Bhabhi se milna chahte hain..agar aap buran a mane..]



"Why should I mind? Its very good if you will come with me ..why did you think like that?"



[Par main bura kyu manugi..aur accha hai agar aap mere saath aaye..apne aisa kyu socha..]



"Coz I thought that you might want to talk to her alone as you might complain about me to her.."



He said naughtily..

[Kyuki humne socha k shayad aap unse alag main baat karna chahe ..aur hamari sikayat karein..]


"Ranaji aap bhi na!! bahut who hain!!"


[Ranaji you ..you are ..]



"Ye woh kya hota hai Raniji !! hum samjhe nahi .."



[What are you saying Gayatri ..i didn't understood ]



"Toh mat samajiye ..main toh jaa rahi hoon..aur ab sach main aapki shikayat karungi.."


she laughed and step ahead..just than Ranaji hold her hand and come closer to her

[Than don't understand ..i am going now..and now will defo complain about you..]


"Arre rukiya toh zara ..itni bhi kya jaldi hai!!..waise aap kya shikayat karengi hamari"hum bhi toh sune.."he hold her waist ..



[Arre stop Gayatri ..why in so hurry ..btw what complain you will do ?]



"Ranaji ..aapki shikayat kya karungi ye aapko kyu bataoon? "she hardly could say as he was caressing her face and she shivered with his touch...


[Ranaji ..its complaint about you so why should I tell you about it?

"Accha mat bataiye ..waise hum toh aapko tang karna nahi chornege ..chahe aap kitni bhi shikayat kijiye.."he smiled and cupped her face..


[Ok don't tell me but I won't stop teasing you..whether how much you complain about me !!]

"Haan magar aap hamara faisla apne darbar main hi kijiyega ..jo bhi saza dengi hume manjoor hogi.."



She could feel his breath on her face...


[Yes but you pls give judgement in your Court only ..what ever punishment you give to me ..i will accept it..]



"Accha ya baat hai toh phir aapki saza ye hai k aap hume woh kitab hai na jo aap aajkal raat din padte hai..woh hume sunayenge ...woh angrazi main hai na ..ye aapki saza hai.."


[Ok if it is so ..than your punishment is that that you will read book for me ..the book you read day and night now days ..as it is in eng ..this is your punishment ]


And she released her form his grip and he gave shocking expression thinking that how can he


read that book for her..how can he explain her ..he will feel awkward..

"Kya hua Ranaji !! hume sataane chale the ..ab kya hua ? aap hamare liye ek kitab ..kya kahte hain..book ..book tak toh parh nahi sakte ..aap aur kya karenge .."



she said raising her eyebrow..


And gave a angry look..which was fake but Ranaji got trapped ..



[What happened Ranaji ..you were going to tease me and now what ..? you can't even read a book for me ..what else you will do for me ?]

"Aisi baat nahi hai Gayatri ..woh !!"

[Its not like that Gayatri.]


"Kya woh Ranaji..?? hum samjhe nahi.."

[What Ranaji ? I didn't understood?]

she gave expression like she was confused and started laughing

"Gayatri bas aapki inhi baaton par hum fida hain.."

[Gayatri I am flat over these styles of yours]


he hold her arm and pulled her towards him..

and again said

"Accha Gayatri hum aapko sunayenge .."he took a deep breath ..

[Ok Gayatri ..i will

read for you ]

And said to himself "Rana Indravadan ..be ready.."

"Sacchi ..!! Aap sunayenge !!" she became so happy..

[Truly!!]



"Ji hum sunayenge.."

[yes I will read]

"Theek hai..aap aaj hi hume sunayiega .."

[Ok than today only you will read for me..]

"Toh ab aapko humse shikayat toh nahi.."he was looking at her so lovingly ..

[Than now you don't have any complain ?]

"Hume aapki koi shikayat karni hi nahi thi.." She said and looked down ..blushing..

[I had no complain about you ..]

Just than a sevak came and ask permission to come in ..they parted ..

He came to tell them that Rajmata has invited special guests on dinner so they must be there..he went and Ranaji cont.


"Gayatri aap"

[Gayatri you!!]

"Ab main jaa rahi hoon.."

[Now I am going ..]

"Hum bhi chalte hain .."

[I am also coming]




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Both went to Swarna's room ..she was reading something ..Gayatri entered in the room and Swarna saw her ..she was surprised as she didn't knew Gayatri was coming and Ranaji too..



"Gayatri -Ranaji aap !!"

"Rani Bhabhi aap kaisi hain?"he said

"Swarna ..tum kaisi ho? You didn't came when we reached here ..are you alright ? I was waiting to meet you .."

But they could not see her full face as half was still hidden in pallu..

She embraced her in her arms ..and suddenly she heard Swarna's voice

"Aah!"

"Kya hua ..Swarna ..you ok??" both Ranaji and Gayatri asked her

"Gayatri ..Rana bhai sahab ..woh.!! woh!! Kuch nahi .."Gayatri saw tears in her eyes ..just than Laksh came

"You both don't have to worry about Swarna ..i will take care of her very well .."he spoke lil rudely.."



"How are you talking Lakshraj ..have you forgetten how to talk ? and if you are taking care than why there are tears in her eyes..tell me ..i am asking you something.." he spoke lil loudly..

Laksh understood truth will be out if they will enquire more so he changed his tone..and said after seeing Swarn alike he was warning her to not say anything..

Swarna scared more..Gayatri noticed it and thought there is something wrong but its not the right time..let Laksh go and than she will enquire..

"Ranaji I respect you so much ..but I am sorry if by my behaviour you thought like that...it just that she is injured ..but the wound is not so deep so she will be alright soon..that's why she is having some pain..i will take care ..sure .."

"Ok if you say so ..but remember nothing should happen to Swarna..call the best doctors available and treat her well ..call them now .."

"Ranaji let's go na..he will call doctor ..we should leave now..and Swarna you pls take care ..and I will keep asking you ..you take proper rest ok.."she hold her hands and assure her not to worry ..

"Ok Gayatri let's go ..but we will keep asking.."

"Laksh you better take care..ok"

Laksh nodded in yes..

Ranaji and Gayatri came in their room and Ranaji asked Gayatri that why she came soon from Swarna's room so early..they went to met her than why?



Gayatri replied him that she has doubt on something and she is waiting for right time andshe will go there again ..may be Laksh is doing something wrong and if they were remain there for long time ..he might be there also and they could not get to know any details so she is waiting for night ..generally in nights he goes out so she will go there than..



Ranaji liked the idea and also agreed with her coz he also doubted on Laksh and his changed tone..so he said that he will send Laksh for some kingdom work and than Gayatri can talk to Swarna and find out if anything happened more than an injury ..Gayatri also liked the idea and said that she will go in night..

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Meanwhile Laksh came near Swarna and twisted her hand which was already in pain ..moreover he was about to touch the cheek which was wounded when she started crying ..


"Pls leave me ..i said leave me .."


"I won't leave you unless you assure me that you won't tell anybody ..and if you will tell anybody than you will be..."


Before he could complete ..she again said and was crying.."I won't tell anybody ..you know that ..o/w I would have been told Gayatri by now..pls trust me and don't beat me again.."


Laksh from her looks and talks got assured somewhere that she will not tell anybody ..but inside he was also scared that what if she will tell than Ranaji and Gayatri will not leave him..so he was torturing he rmore in anger..


"Ok I won't beat you my dear Swarna but remember my words ..o/w like last time I threw glass on you ..this time I will do more than that and this time only you are lil bit injured ..next time ..ha ha ha ..you can imagine.."


Swarna saw him with hatred in her eyes and in her heart she was thinking that Gayatri do have a doubt and she and Ranaji will defo come by some or the other means so she was not scared anymore but she was pretending so that Laksh will go from here leaving her alone..

And as Ranaji's order came Laksh have to go .. after sometime Gayatri came and knocked on door asking for Swarna ..Swarna opened the door and seeing Gayatri she bursted out into tears ..


Gayatri wiped her tears and let her sit on bed ..

and asked what happened ?


Swarna's voice was chocking as she was sobbing and crying ..Gayatri for once shocked seeing her condition..but she understood she is hiding something till now..


She gave her water and make her comfortable ..

She told her all from start to end about Laksh's torture and his plannings..and Gayatri was shocked more when she listened all ..she couldn't imagine he can stoop this low..she became furious hearing this and she understand Swarna's condition..


"Swarna how are you bearing this for long? I understand why you couldn't told us but you must stop this now..no more torturing ..today only I am going to tell Ranaji and he will take the decision and punishment


For Laksh ..he is a moron..a beast .."


"Gayatri I wanted to tell you but couldn't ..thanks God you came and doubted and not trusted Lakshraj..


I don't want to live with him.."


Gayatri assured her again and wiped her tears ..


"Don't worry ..from now on he can not harm you ..and he will be punished for sure but before that ..you have to do something to make him understand that you are not weak..you will do what I will tell you ..ok..

Just don't worry and take care..we are with you and you are not alone..

Swarna was relieved by this and Gayatri made her drink some juice and she stood up so that she can tell Ranaji about all this..




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P.S- Only Raga convo are in subtitles..


Thanks friends.❤️
take care.

Deepti.😳




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Updated.😃
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Replied to all of you friends.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow so glad swarna told gayu about laksh behaviour
Hehe so ranaji gonna read English book for gayu 😉
Superb update deep
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the pm

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