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PERSONAL INTRODUCTION

PART 1


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CHARACTERS


MAIN CHARACTERS

  1. RAJBIR SINGH
  2. RANI GAYATRI DEO
  3. JEEVAN SINGH
  4. BINDU SINGH

OTHER CHARCTERS

  1. BADI RANI
  2. RAJA MATA PRIYAMVEDA DEVI
  3. KAAL
  4. MINU
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PERSONAL INTRODUCTION

HEY READER

I AM NEW HERE (ETER FORUMS)

MY NAME IS KANIKA



ZEE TV

JODHA AKBAR

1. HSBK (DICONTINUED)
2. CHANGING WORLDS (ON GOING)

EK THA RAJA EK THI RANI

  1. RaGa SS (Discontinued)

DEKHA EK KHWAB (SONY TV)

  1. HIS ONLY LOVE (Discountinued)


SWARAGINI (COLORS TV)


  1. DIL DHADADKE DO(Discontined)

YEH HAI MOHABBATEIN (STAR PLUS)

  1. COLLIDING WORLDS (Editting)
  2. MAA (ON HOLD)
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Hi Kanu ,,,,😊 (Sorry but this is written in your profile) I'm archi. I'm also from DEK forum.🤗 Do I know you?😕 I mean If you changed your profile name then I won't recognize you. 😊
Anyways all the best in advance for your story

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Originally posted by: Archi02


Hi Kanu ,,,,😊 (Sorry but this is written in your profile)I'm archi.

Hi

I'm also from DEK forum.🤗 Do I know you?😕 I mean If you changed your profile name then I won't recognize you. 😊


I am not sure if you read my story there the story is called HIS ONLY LOVE

Anyways all the best in advance for your story

Edited by Kanu_TV - 9 years ago
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PART 1

J (Jeevan) tries hugging G (Gayatri) she hues her away "I am Jeevan remember matu.."

G (Gayatri) "That was 12 year ago things have changed now."

R (Rajbir) "Chipkali listen to me please forgive me."

G "Let me go."

B (Bindu) "Dovey let her go I am here."

Minu (Gayatri's friend) "Listen to Sir once he looks he is genuinely sorry."

R "Please Chapkali"

G "My name is Gayatri Singh 7 years ago you finished everything."

Rajbir holds on her and pulls her to his car.

G "Where are you talking me.Why have you got me to the jungle."

R "Chipkali how easily you said our friendship got over 7 years back. (Gayatri looks on) I lost everything I lost everything because you were numb I was send away I lost I even lost everything. I lost everything."

G "You think you only lost everything. Dedo has become mentally unstable. Baba is no more. When i need someone I had no one and you think you lost everything."

They hug.

R "Please forgive me."

G "Raja I can't."

R "You can't forgive your Raja baja."

They go back to collage. In the class Bindu brings in bucket of water and broom.

G "What is this."

B "Introduction. She was a servant in my Dovey's palace."

Gayatri runs out Rajbir comes there bring her back.

R twisting B' hand "She is my best friend if any one hurt her I am not going spare them."

B "Dovey."

Gayatri goes from there Rajbir goes behind her. He tries getting forgiveness from her in every way possible she ignores him. She leave the college that night for home.

B "Dovey why are so worried,

Jeevan and gayartri come there.

R "Chapkali what are you doing with him."

G "Jeeven and i are friends you have forgotten he helped me win the competition."

R "Chipkali you only my friend."

J "Lets go Rani we will be late for class."

They leave for class.

R pulls G into a empty class room and locks the door.

G "What are you doing."

R "Jeevan since when have you two become friends."

G "Let me go for class."

R "Answer me now."

G "We have been friend when we were children."

R "Chipkali we were friends, best friends I am your Raja Baja how can you do this Jeevan him that fat idiot. (with tears in his eyes) I found you after 7 years why are you doing this."

In fustration hits the wall.

G "Raja what are you will hurt yourself."

R "Chipkali today also you can't see me hurt but you are hurting even me Jeevan why. Please forgive me I beg you.

He falls on his knees crying. G picks him up.

G "Raja (hugs him tightly) i thought las so many you would have changed but you are my Raja Baja."

R (Hugging her back) "Chipkali your Raja Baja can never change you were the most important to then and you are are still the most important person."

They go to class.

J "Rani what happened?"

G "Nothing he wanted to talk."

B "Dovey,"

R "Chapkali come here sit here with me."

Minu (M) "Rani."

G "Minu sit here with me."

Gayartri and Minu sit in front. Jeevan sits next to her on the other side. Raja sits behind her.

R "Chipkali"

Gayatri ignore him. After classes get over she goes. In the night she is calls. Jeevan finds her worried.

J "What happened."

G "I have to go home but I will go home. Will you drop me to the station."

Jeevan "Don't worry I will drop you the station."

G "Thankyou."

She leaves. Next morning. Raja looks everywhere for her he doesn't find her.

Jeevan (smriking) "Rani has gone again she left last night.

Raja finds Jeevan on the phone.
J "Rani you reached don't worry I will take care of everything you take care of yourself."

Raja "Where is she give the phone."

B "Dovey she left you again I have been with you always."

Raja shrugs Bindu off. He calls the operator.

R "Where was the las call from?"

Operator "It was a hospital."

Raja is very worried he leaves.

Bindu "Where are you going."

Raja "Mind your own business don't interfere in my life you are no one question me I not even answerable to my own father you just get lost."

Bindu "Dovey."

R "Rajbir is my name you understand."

Rajbir reaches the hospital he very worried hearing that Gayatri is in that hospital.

G "Raja Baja"

R "Chipkali (hugs her) why didn't you tell me i would have come with you."

G "Dado"

R "What happened... You are fine Chipkali."

G "I am fine. Dedo."

R "Let's go."

They go to Priyamdveda (P) room. Rajbir see her and is shocked to see her state. Rajbir and Gayatri come out of the room.

R "Why did you tell me when I got to know you are calling from a hospital I was so worried."

G "When I received the information I couldn't find you and Jeevan was with me so I told him to drop me to the station. I couldn't wait Dedo."

R "Shhh... Don't worry I will take care now she not only your she is my responsibility also."

They hug. Rajbir get Priyamdevi discharged from the hospital and takes them to there home.

P "Raja you that kid who were friends with Rani in the childhood you are from the Royal family."

R smiles "You remember Dedo yes I am Prince Rajbir Singh."

P "Rani here your Raja Baja is back."

G "Yes Dedo when we were small he would irritate me he didn't leave one chance to irritate me in college if it wasn't for Jeevan I wouldn't have survived the college he befriended he was the first one out these Royal Dedo not Raja he was too busy with Lovely his dear lovely."

Priyamveda smile. Gayatri goes to the kitchen. Raja follow her.

R "Chipkali what did you just say."

G "The truth why you didn't like it."

R "Jeevan is your first friend."

G "Raja are you heard of hearing yes he is my frist friend the truth always hurts."

R "Chipkali you are only mine you understand you my only friend. My best friend."
Edited by Kanu_TV - 9 years ago
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nyc start dear...continue soon😛
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Part 1 updated completed on page 1
Edited by Kanu_TV - 9 years ago
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nice start... hopefully they realise love soon and their past..
thanks for the pm..
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lovely start dear😛 continue soon

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