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RM14

@RM14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma
Superb OS...
Lovely pics..
Keep up the great work,dear..
Loved it..

Thank you so much..😳so glad you loved it.😃

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RM14

@RM14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: abba12
Happy new year DEepti 🤗
Congo on new OS haan🥳
..I like reading these OS on particular scenes.written in a better way ..
Dialogues r very well written . .
Now coming to part , avdesh won by tricking rana g and he was shamelessly confessing to gayu 😆 ... And here gayu is smarter from serial ..she brought the teams with her .. Aur avdesh ko mila thullu 🤪
Rana g and raj mata heard it all 🤡
Wese rana g b kabhi khali dimag rehtay hain ..pe kar chonsar khel rhay the .
Confrontation is well written .. Gayu is strong in both serial and story ..
Last portion is cute .. Rana g and gayu ka sweet romance which is no where in serial now a days .. Except for few running here and there scenes ..
I started cribbing here 🤣 u will through me out 😆 ..but next time romance wala portion lamba likhna 😆

Enjoy writing ... And keep writing ;-) .

Thanks so much Amna..😳and happy new year to you too dear..🤗

so glad you loved it..😃

i wanted something like this to happen in the show..

ya me too miss Raga sweet romance..and hope we get it now in the show..👍🏼

no no ..why i will through you out ? 😆 sahi toh kaha tumne.⭐️

and ya sure next time more romance will be there..😉

ya i am enjoying writing.😃

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..neelanjana

@..neelanjana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Superb OS !
Very well written !! 👏
I love everything about it ! Queen Gayatri ..the way she handled the whole situation,she was calm & compose...not to forget her intelligence ! Loved it !! ❤️
Rajmata ..as always she supported Gayatri & Ranaji...
Lovely ending !
Deep 🤗 you are an awesome writer !
Keep writing...
Thanks a ton for PM...
Waiting for another one...

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RM14

@RM14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: anish17
Superb os deep 😳
Written nicely
Thanks for the translation deep 🤗
Gayu and ranaji both slapped avdesh 😆
Haha I loved this sentence " ur childhood friend came on right time " 😆

Thanks so much Ani dear..🤗so glad you loved it..😃oh! translation..its my pleasure..😳ya both Raga slapped Avdesh..he deserved that.😆

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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Hey awesome os

But write raga romantic os

Happy New year

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RM14

@RM14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Geetdrashti
Amazing os Happy new year

Thank you so much..😳and happy new year to you too.🤗

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vandy28

@vandy28

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Superb dear...i toatlly loved it

u hv written scenes so well...wish something like this would hv happen in serial n given proper exit to avdesh character...

but i totally like gayu n her atty...

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RM14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37
superb os

Thank you so much..glad you loved it Shruti.😳

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RM14

@RM14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Drashtilove
Amazing os wish that happened in show also avedesh admits his crime n ranaji heared all now he will give punishment loved the line of gayatri i have not married to everything i married him superb os

Thank you so much Sabina..so happy you loved it..😳ya me too want something like this in show.