|| Raga OS - The Realisation || - Page 2

Originally posted by: Snow_Angel

First of all Congratulations for new and your very first RaGa OS🥳 I love the total sequence u wrote here. Gayatri's all dialogues are perfect, something I want to see in the show and Rana for the first time I able to relate with this character through ur OS. My favorite part of Rana's dialogues is last two paragraphs. U r a awesome writer deepti, Keep writing more 😊

Originally posted by: anish17

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Congrats deep for ur first os on RaGa 🥳
And I'm reading first story on RaGa here 😳
My sweet sissy deep wrote an emotional and beautiful os ❤️
U have brilliantly merged the gun shot part here 👍🏼
Very well written 😊
Loved the os very much ❤️
Finally ranaji realised his mistake good
he called her gayatri 😳 I want him to call her the same on serial too ❤️ not gayatri ji or rani gayatri devi as if he is teacher calling his student in school 😆
Keep writing more deep 👍🏼

Originally posted by: abba12

Congo deepti for ur first OS to this couple 🥳

I love this scene as it is shown in show but liked the way u showed it in ur OS 😉 ..

Rani gayatri did tell him everything and he realized what mistake he has done ... Gun shot scene is manipulated in an awesome way ..even I expected that it would be rana on target in show 😉 but u typed it in ur OS .. I love rani who is determined to not let him touch 😛

Awesome one ..keep writing ..😉

PS: I m on time for the first time 😆😆