SS: The Suhaag Raat of Broken Dreams (An apology and a new start p.43)

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Dedoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

I like this gayatri..not a bechari types..I'm loving ur updates..eagerly waiting for the next..

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abba12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Loving gayu's behaviour towards rana .. What does he think ..she don't have feelings ..

Though u feel bad for him sometimes lolzz.. Bechara he is in love with first wife .. Kuch nahi ho sakta 😆

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Syaza

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Woww.. please update soon! I love how the story is going and its storyline. Its interesting

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Amina...

@Amina...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Awesome 👏
Loving Gayatri so much ...😳

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chinkidrashti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

To b frank ur story is way much better than serial's story ' fantastic dear

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Shruti_0505

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

SOLID

This was AWESOME

maza as gaya

I just wish something like this happens in the serial as well

Gayatri me toh Rana ko utha ke patak diya

And the way she replied to badi rani maa

THIS IS TOO GOOD

Update soon

Am dying to read further.

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BelleFilleDD

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Gayatri shows him the mirror and the gravity of what he has done . Pagphere rasam gets over with Gayatri's quite nonchalant attitude. She expects nothing from Rana and even tells he can stay in his previous wife's room and she herself can have another chamber knowing everyone in his family knows about the deal .For the first time she cries in front of him telling him on face how she felt about this exchange for benefits . Lovely update❤️👏

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giyadd

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Wonderful updates

ll parts are too good

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Shailaja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Just read all the parts in one go. Very engaging. But I felt that Gayu was reacting like what a girl of the present day would do in the 1940's itself. Really very much ahead of times. Looks like she has stuffed a lot of books on feminism along with those books on dreams that she used to read before marriage