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utopia88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

@sufidox loved it!👍🏼

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sufidox

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Sad the story didnt progress further. Hey i am not that bad writer 😭

Well i guess i will have to cont myself.😆

The more he avoided the more he wanted to look at her. Gayathri on the other hand was not understanding what is wrong. As she tried to thank him twice he purposefully avoided her by either on the phone or talking to some of the celebrity guest. Finally the moment everybody was waiting for came... the DJ. Some random guy asked Gayu for being his partner. She reluctantly agreed since she saw Rana dancing with some other girl. She felt bad and she told herself this is bound to happen since Rana never ever has seen her and she had a huge crush on him. She was dancing with him when the guy in the pretext of dancing was making her uncomfortable. Finally she had enough she was about to move out of his reach when he gripped his hold on her. she was struggling for an escape and this was witnessed by our Rana. Instantly he felt rage all over him.

Please cont further 😆

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utopia88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

@sufidox awesome continuation! 🥳

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abba12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

rana who was purposely dancing with other girl to shrug off the hidden attraction he felt in her eyes , saw another guy approaching her for dance .. she was so comfortable standing alone , in her dreamland , which indirectly satisfied rana ..but now , the presence of other guy made her uncomfortable .and seeing that. the rage in rana increased ten folds .. the guy held her wrist ,squeezing his hand on her waist ...

that was it !! rana left the girl and marched like a tiger towards gayatri 😉

Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago

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utopia88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

@abba Fantastic job! 👍🏼

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loveall16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Lovely post 😛

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abba12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

No one continued 😳 ???

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Tenzin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: abba12
rana who was purposely dancing with other girl to shrug off the hidden attraction he felt in her eyes , saw another guy approaching her for dance .. she was so comfortable standing alone , in her dreamland , which indirectly satisfied rana ..but now , the presence of other guy made her uncomfortable .and seeing that. the rage in rana increased ten folds .. the guy held her wrist ,squeezing his hand on her waist ...
that was it !! rana left the girl and marched like a tiger towards gayatri 😉

But in his anger, Rana Ji didn't forget that he's also a Raja, who has to maintain his behaviour intact and be respectful like a gentleman, even toward a scroundrel who had make lustful approach toward the lady he got enticed to, and to whom he also doesn't exerce any right ! He entightened his both hands in each other to struggle and focus all his rage out on it !

Then he made cautious steps toward the aadmi who was pleasantly peeling a timid face of Gayatri ! His hand reached his shoulder as a 'pat', but the man won't turn, Rana Ji's BP was increasing by time but he remained tranquil and patted a bit more bitterly to make his presence evident ! The man turned around shocked to face upon a cold and stern face Rana Ji !
Rana Ji got alarmed by it and immediately had his stern face turn into a grinning one that too with an obvious sarcasm 😆 He rebuttoned his toxedo and demanded teasingly :"The tune has already changed so gentleman I think it's time we exchange our partner !"

The man became red as if he was red handedly caught in a shameful act ! Just a time to pay him a reverence and he got dispel into the crowds of guests !

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Tenzin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: abba12
No one continued😳???

I continued Ammi 🤗 Ammi it's your name right 😆 ?

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MBfan01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

u people are doing well 👏👏👏

mine will be short

now Ranaji was not ready to take any more chances, leaving his reservations he approached gayatri for dance. Gayatri was all shocked and delighted .. this she never even dream of.

they started dancing, the song on play was

kuch na kaho kuch bhi na khao, kys sunnsana hai kya kehana tumko pata hai

mujko khabar hai

they danced as if they were in their own world. when every one others stopped dancing they did not know lost in each other eyes ...