KaSak SS 'Like A Whisper'

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue


Laptop was kept on the pillow and she was lying down flat on her stomach with the support of her elbows... The light of screen was make her face glow in the dark... Keeping her chin on her one palm, she was working with other on the touchpad of the laptop...

Her long, straight black hairs were open and were falling till her waist... Her eyes were too of the same color, Black! Big Almond shape eyes which were sparkling in the dark... Her milky white skin looked flawless adding more to her beauty...

She was humming a song at the moment and was busy in internet surfing when suddenly her eyes widen up and she started jumping on the bed...

"Karan k bache!!! neeche ao..." Feeling a hit on his back, Karan looked down to see and find one of his friend throwing a stone at him...
"Kya hai???" Karan frowned...

"Tumhari he hone wali biwi hai!! ab neeche ajao aur kitna ghooro gay???" Nitin glared at Karan...
"A raha hun naa..." Making a face, Karan looked inside the window for the very last time where the girl was still jumping on her bed and then slide down the pipe to reach the ground...

"Bachpan se jaante ho usse... now what was so special about her jo itni raat ko choron ki tarah uski khidki se chipak gaye???" Nitin asked arching his eyebrow...

"Tum nahi samjho gay!!! Wo buri tarah chirti hai mujhse..." Karan smirked...
"Lekin mujhe to lag raha hai k tumhara dill agaya hai uss pe..." Nitin chuckled...

"O Shutup!!! Ek minute nahi jhel sakta mein issko... aur iske saath shaadi???" Karan held his head in his palms...

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So how is it???
Want me to continue??

Love,
Sameera
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AAAHHH first ss ever! lol it was amazing I really loved it please do continue!!! and do pm mee!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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first ever story on Saran...
its grt..
I just loved the whole update!!!
u wrote everything with detailing tht was so grt...
I loved it...do cont soon!!
waiting fr it eagerly :)

-Millee
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Posted: 11 years ago
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1st SS!
It's good! Do continue 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The First SS on SaRan ..
Sounds Interesting..
Continue Soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congoss first on saran!! Loved it! Do continue dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome..!! The 1st ever SS on KaSak..!!!
OMG..!! Loved it..šŸ‘šŸ¼

Pls continue soon..
Edited by rupzgal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats on starting the train of the first SS on the forum! Hope there are many more to come in the near future! This was superb...liked the way you started it and the way you crafted the storyline it looks very interesting! Cant wait to read more! Update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wohooo first SS on saran
its good continue soon!!!!!
i loved it!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AmazingšŸ‘šŸ¼
Please do continue😊

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