FF: ~Crashed~ This is my First: Preview of Chp 26 Pg 76 - Page 56

Originally posted by: -Red-Rose-

U deserve all the love darling!!😃⭐️

Endless love & hugs!!⭐️

Originally posted by: najialuv88

So freaking cute!!!!!🤗

Originally posted by: reetnoor89

Updated my comments...ab mein godde(horses) bech kr sleep karoongi 😆

Originally posted by: reetnoor89

res for chapter 20 *unres*

Oh god i didnt even commented on chapter 19...how could i forget ...thankgod i did res for emergency 😆...btw its so long when i talked with u on one on one basis...we will talk but first let me comment on each and every chapter...today im on unres spree 🤣

Comment on chapter 19

As usual i loved reading this chapter and who will not love it when writer like u is writing...i enjoyed this to the core...this chapter had everything...it had hilarious moments, embarrasing moments,romantic moments, caring moments all in all it was perfect chapter as usual 😊...i love shraddha and kunal double meaning talks 😳😆...Turtle neck 🤣...kunal carrying shraddha downstairs ☺️...talks at breakfast table were too hilarious...even now when im commenting im just laughing...74 degrees 😆...puruji saying these days different 😆 but after reading this line

"You know these days' children wear less clothing during the winter and cold seasons and it seems they are overcompensating during the summer and spring."

I was actually rolling on floor with laughter🤣...too real dialogue...Puruji forced toast into kammos mouth 😆...Kammos rxn after puruji tell about her dance with Zor were out of world...Kammo worried about her so called samaj was too too hilarious...then puruji teasing kunal about neck mark 😆...kunals answer really cracked me but i could except this from kunal 😆...Shraddhas rxn were mindblowing...indeed this one is one of my fav scene from this story...i really loved the scene...best part of writing is that u explained peoples reactions really well...in real world u observe peoples rxn really well or its just ur natural talent to explain rxn so well 😕...i love how Shraddha was worried about Dhruv...in the show also Shraddha was awesome mother and i loved it and in ur story its same...i really love way u incorporate every character in your story...awww shraddha was really cute whenshe didnt tell about dhruv to kunal as she dont wanna give stress to him...i love kamini nd dhruvs bonding...so wanted to see this in the show but show ended but im not sad as when u are here im never gonna miss MB 😃...now coming to shranal romance what should i say...even now my expression is ☺️...Shraddha is not well...u explained her pain really well 👏...after reading i just felt like 😭 but i love how even in pain shraddha thinks about kunal nd doesnt wanna give him stress...i love this shraddha more than shraddha which u describe in past scenes and ofcourse shraddha is ur story is more cute than shraddha in show atleast for me...im really loving her character...Kunals worry about shraddha again described brilliantly 👏...it actually made me sad nd worried...u described it so well that before reading chapter 20 i was worried that what happened to shraddha...i even thought of Yoona angle 😆...🤪me but totally loved this chapter...a big 🤗

Comment on chapter 20

Kunals caring so much for shraddha...totally loved it...oh god kunal really love shraddha so much...finding someone like kunal is too hard...love the way he was adamant not to goto work...Liked the flashback scene...i just like the way shraddha keep on remembering these scenes...i like these scenes as ur just at ur best when u describe shraddhas pain and fears after these flashback scenes...seeing shraddhas pain and fears i also feel like 😭 but i love this...i really love reading things which generate some emotions in me...ur brilliant writer... ...i was 😊seeing that kamini was also worried about shraddha...but i couldnt forget how kamini blamed shraddha after kunals accident in earlier chapters ...dont know when nd how their relation will become better and whether it will become better or not but i really want to see kamini accepting shraddha but not in hurry like it was shown in serial 😆...Kunal is no doubt worlds best father...loved his scene with dhruv...nd dhruv is worlds cutest child...loved the way he made drawing for shraddha...nd the way he said sorry papa ill make for u also...too cute nd innocent...i dont like kids in shows nd stories tht much but dhruvs character is different...he was damn cute in show and damn damn cute in ur story ...shranal scenes just left me blushing...shraddha wearing kunals suit and kunal still finding her sexy...kunal is seriously too much...but i love how kunal selflessly love shraddha...scene where both shraddha and kunal were appologising each other was really cute...it shows how much they love nd care for each other...loved reading it...kamini bringing tea for shraddha 😲...i know she was worried but this was beyond my imagination but honestly i loved this scene and the scene where kamini assures shraddha tht she is and will take care of dhruv...it was really heart touching...u really write kamini nd shraddha scene well i love the way u maintain tht awkwardness..hats off to u for doing this 👏...omg last scene of kunal, kamini and shraddha was really hilarious 😆...but i liked tht scene 😆...all in all lovely update..totally enjoyed it reading 😃

Originally posted by: reetnoor89

res for chapter 21

*unres*

Comment on chapter 21

I was really happy seeing that u continued from last scene of chapter 20 as i always wanted to read kunals and shraddhas reaction 😆...shraddha pulling kunals leg...😆...kunal without shirt just reminded me of mahaepisode scene ☺️...jumoke the way u do transitions in your story are really mindblowing...they are really smooth...like kunal shraddha were teasing each other nd then talk shift to dhruv, then shraddha remembering flash back scenes, then shraddha lost in thoughts nd kunal noticing it huging shraddha and shraddha again lost in her own world and then story turning back into normal situation...it never seems tht u turn story abruptly and i miss any emotion...i dont know how u explain so many emotions in microseconds nd tht too without ending any scene abruptly...even in shows sometimes we feel tht scene ended abruptly but so far in ur story i never felt like that...i really love this thing in your stories...coming back to chapter...im always at verge of crying when shraddha remembers flashback scenes nd when she question herself whether she deserve kunal or not...u write so beautifully tht always when shraddha ask this ques i always saying in my mind no shraddha no u deserve him as ur doing so 😆🤪...Kunal is such a gem...he loves and understands shraddha really well...im really amazed how everytime when shraddha thinks about accident and gets worried...he finds out...although he might not know reason for shraddhas fear but her efforts to make her feel better are commendable...loving kunals character more nd more...love how shraddha on one hand want to meet dhruv but on other also worried tht dhruv might not get infection...really cute...kunal even find sick shraddha sexy ☺️...loved shranal scene...Ramdeen coming in 😆...jumoke ur really cute u never forget any character...love u for tht...just love the way kunal care for shraddha...it was really cute how he was convincing her to eat dinner...Jin and Shraddha scenes are my fav...Shraddha teasing Jin was freaking cute ...liking tht shraddha is trying to trust Jin and loving tht they are bonding together...omg Jin told shraddha about her sister Sin mui...i never thought this will happen so soon...u always surprise me...Shraddha was really cute in making Jin happy...loved the update...big big hug to u 🤗

Originally posted by: reetnoor89

res for chapter 22 *unres*

Comment on chapter 22

First a big thanks to Rose,Treesa and Nikki 😊...and Jumoke sorry for not responding on time...*Holding Ears*

Coming to the topic...so Ishaan is now father of baby boy...😊...u described everything really well...starting from ishaans fear nd nervousness,Malikas pain, Kittu, anand and Ashish trying to calm down Ishaan to Ishaans happiness while holding his baby...well done...i smiled reading how family was happy, how Anand nd Ashish were teasing Ishaan...i loved the scene where happy tears flowed down eyes of shraddha...it really touched my heart...kunal is freaking cute he even become conscious at shraddhas happy tears 😆...and still worried about shraddhas health...saying her to u need rest...tooo cute...my love for kunals character increases manifold with each chapter 😃...Dr srivastav 😆...Jumoke ur genius...okay okay coming back to story...shraddha and mallika scene was really heart touching...i found mallikas fears really genuine...nd u also have justified her fears by giving hint how she might have grown up seeing her parents fighting nd getting divorce...like the way how shraddha try her level best to calm her down by giving her example of her past...always love reading trios scene ie scene of kittu,shraddha and Malika...malika lost in her fears...shraddha noticing it and trying to help her out by saying things in way tht malika understands and at same time kittu didnt come to know...loved the way kittu sense something is fishy...after all kittu understands shraddha really well...always love their bonding...it was really nice to see how shraddha was worried about malika but at same time assuring herself tht everything will be okay..really well writen scene 👏...Kunal forgetting tht Shraddha not at home😆...oh god this guy is too much...loved his conversation with kamini but Shranal phone convo was icing on the cake...totally loved the way he admitted tht he forget shraddha was not at home...the way he said he missed shraddha and then diverted the convo was just mindblowing...shraddha teasing kunal by using kunals words im strong as mule 😆...(.jumoke ur mindblowing u connect chapters really well)...kunals double meaning talks ☺️...phone kiss was awesome 😳...loved kunal sending his sleeping pic nd shraddha kissing it...in short phone convo was mindblowing...totally enjoyed reading chapter 😃...Jumoke i just love the way u never forget any character and show shranal bonding with each character...im just in love with this story...even after reading i think about this story like i used to think about show 😆...like i used to wait for show i wait for ur updates 😃...eagerly waiting for next update...never want this story to end...a big thanks for giving us this story...thanks for sending PM everytime 😃

Note : I eagerly wait for ur updates but u can take ur time as I can wait for years for such awesome updates...so no probs from my side.And i think u dont have need to say sorry for errors as do you think while reading such dreamy story people would concentrate on errors...as far as im concerned i never found any error.

Originally posted by: reetnoor89

res for emergency 😆 *unres*

First im sorry

I know its really hard to wait and i genuinely feel bad as u make so much efforts to make these updates and i dont even give feedback at time...im really really sorry...should i say more or u are convinced 😆...just joking im genuinely sorry...if u forgive me let me tell u something which will again make u angry...i read ur updates as soon as u post...as this story is so addictive tht i cant wait...sometime i even read from phone...but im always late in replying back ...actually im really scared and nervous to reply back and im not joking this time...im scared as u write so beautifully tht im always at loss of words...as i have told u earlier i always try to make u smile by my comment as atleast u deserve a comment which makes u smile becoz u make so much efforts for all of us...im not sure im able to do tht or not but just in trying to do that i always get late...seriously speaking after reading i just keep on thinking what to reply which just make u smile once...jumoke i dont know how to appericiate u and ur talent...just wanna say tht we are too lucky to have u in this forum...a big thanks to u for giving me MB back...MB is not over its still alive for me in your stories...Jumoke i read ur blog...ur taking break from writing after u finish Anki SS...im really sads but i can understand...i hope u will not take break from forum 😊...nd ill be eagerly waiting for some new stories from u ...i know im too demanding but then fans are always demanding 😆...love u tons❤️

Originally posted by: reetnoor89

Finding the update 😆



But seriously jumoke soon update this story dear...really missing this story...and all my fav characters..please dear this is bestest story and my favourite too...please update soon
cant wait...really missing your writings