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vivkriti

@vivkriti

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#531

Awesome . I am lost in shranal dreamland while reading. Shranal scenes were amazingly written. Lovely writing. 👏 👏 love you dear 🤗

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Nikita

@niki_2293

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#532

Lovely update as usual!!!

So its baby time for Ishaan and Malika!!

Awww. the way Ishaan held his baby...it was so heart warming!! Dear dear, he was almost a college guy in the show and here he becomes a daddy!! So cuteee!!

Mallika-shraddha scenes were also lovely!! The whole "I-have-a-baby-but-I-still-dont-know-what-to-do-with-him" conversation was so close to reality. After all, new mothers are pretty clueless abt how to handle a newborn. Can actually imagine Mallika's fears.

As for ShraNal phone convo!! Omg!! It was an awesome blend of cute and sexy!! They both are just too hot handle!! See am blushing ear to ear after reading the convo..

Kamini-kunal scene was also really cute. For the first time in your updates so far, I thought somewhere down the line Kamini actually acknowledged Shraddha as her DIL and Kunal's wife. And awww she misses Dhruv!! Kamini here is so much tolerable than in the show!

So three cheers for you for the update!! Loved reading it!!👏

Edited by niki_2293 - 11 years ago

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Antreesa Jose

@Nobody27

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#533

Wonderful update😃

Everything👏... Ishaan's tension and Malika's pain was beautifully portrayed...Loved the family tension and happiness and Aashish-Anand-Ishaan convo was lovely...So Mailika also had a bitter past...she could easily relate with Shraddha...that convo between Malika and Shraddha was so sweet specially Shraddha consoling her...My fav parts were one Shraddha's excitement and happy tears seeing her little brother become a father and him not ready to left Malika and handover baby...soo cute for me...Kittu-Shraddha talk was lovely...mother-son duo was always funny as usual😆

Then my most fav Shranal phone convo...although it was a phone convo I blushed like a tomato...uff this Shranal their small I love you too making be blushing like hell...So Kunal now couldn't stay a moment without her and he kept forget everything...Poor Shraddha if this was his situation when she's not with him what would he do if he's near her hahaha dreaming...

Totally lovely dear...and welcome for ur thanks😊...no need to say anything more about ur writing it's simply awesome⭐️😃😉...love u loads🤗❤️🤗❤️🤗

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NaijaLuv88

@NaijaLuv88

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: Reshma4lyf
Wow lovely update!!! especially the last part with the Shranal phone call. That phone kiss was too sweet. I want to see that sleeping pic of Kunal 😆. I think we have never seen him sleep on the show.
Take ur time with the updates. The wait is always exciting and can't wait to read the next. Take care 😊

So sorry for the late reply and thank you. The phone call was a last minute idea as i did want to have some type of shranal scene so...hehe😆😆😆

I want to see that sleeping pic of Kunal as well...i don't know how or when it can be available...but i want it. The most we ever got from Kunal was either in deep thought while laying down but never actually closing his eyes...😆😆😳

Thanks dear and will definitely make it worth ur while.

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NaijaLuv88

@NaijaLuv88

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: Nazzyx8
Brilliant FF!!!👏⭐️
Loved how you concentrated on every character.. their tease.. mischief.. Dhruv-Kamini beautiful bond!!👏👏

Loved how you showed the bond between Shraddha & Malika!!⭐️

ShraNal phone scene left me blushing!! Magical scene!!☺️☺️

Love you endless Jumoke!!🤗

Will be waiting for your next update!!😃

Awww thanks Nazzy🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

I wanted to and was afraid everyone wouldn't like it because there wasn't enough Shranal moments...but there are times that i need to progress the story so i have to focus out of them😆

Shranal phone scene was a last minute thing but im glad that you loved it and awww it caused u to blush...hehe😆😆😆

Love you sooo much Nazzy as well and thanks for all the praises...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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NaijaLuv88

@NaijaLuv88

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#536

Originally posted by: virmanxyz
totally lovd ur update i was dieng to read smthng on shranal t hospitaly scene was really nice lovd ishaan dnt want to leave malikas side,lovd naughty shradha cld him dog he sent a pict of hm lovd it i wish kunal should have came tere cntnue sn thanks 4 t pm

Thank so much dear and its been a while since i have read ur comments so thanks dear. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Love writing about naughty Shraddha because i loved seeing her playful and naughty side on the show😆😆

Wish i could catch a glimpse of that picture as well and thanks dear and yes i will continue as soon as something pops up into my head and get the motivation to write something. No problem dear and thanks dear🤗🤗🤗

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NaijaLuv88

@NaijaLuv88

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: Duggukede
lovely update as always
love the siggie

continue soon

thanks for the pm

Thanks niki and the siggi was done by -chamkilli- so the credit definitely goes towards her.😛😉

I will dear and no problem at all about the PM, more than happy😆😆😛

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NaijaLuv88

@NaijaLuv88

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: vivkriti
Awesome . I am lost in shranal dreamland while reading. Shranal scenes were amazingly written. Lovely writing. 👏 👏 love you dear 🤗

Thanks dear and spend ur time in shranal land and don't come out😆😆😆

Thanks dear and thank you so much...love you too dear❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Rosie

@-Red-Rose-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: reetnoor89
res for emergency 😆

When are u gonna unres?😆😆

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NaijaLuv88

@NaijaLuv88

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: niki_2293
Lovely update as usual!!!
So its baby time for Ishaan and Malika!!

Awww. the way Ishaan held his baby...it was so heart warming!! Dear dear, he was almost a college guy in the show and here he becomes a daddy!! So cuteee!!

Mallika-shraddha scenes were also lovely!! The whole "I-have-a-baby-but-I-still-dont-know-what-to-do-with-him" conversation was so close to reality. After all, new mothers are pretty clueless abt how to handle a newborn. Can actually imagine Mallika's fears.

As for ShraNal phone convo!! Omg!! It was an awesome blend of cute and sexy!! They both are just too hot handle!! See am blushing ear to ear after reading the convo..

Kamini-kunal scene was also really cute. For the first time in your updates so far, I thought somewhere down the line Kamini actually acknowledged Shraddha as her DIL and Kunal's wife. And awww she misses Dhruv!! Kamini here is so much tolerable than in the show!

So three cheers for you for the update!! Loved reading it!!👏

Your pictures and emoticon is so freaking cute

Yep baby time for Malika and Ishaan...😆😆😆😆

Ishaan is just so cute and i think he does have what it takes to be a good dad. Sure he is immature at times, hot-headed, rash, and whole bunch of other angsty emotions but he will fight for to protect the people around him...whether its always the most rational route or in the most rational manner...i might wholly agree with. 😆😆😆

Now the whole Malika and Shraddha angle...i wanted to make her happy...but knowing me it wasn't enough. Why always show a mother always happy and always know what to do. I feel i could relate to Malika because if i was in the position, its basically i have another human's being life in my hands...that is way too much.

Shranal convo, as a mentioned before, was a last minute idea...lol😆😆 and yes those two...lol😳😛

I've been giving lil hints here and there but i think in the most part it was more of a slow growing process for Kamini to accept Shraddha as DIL. Has she fully? Who knows😆😆 But Dhruv was such an easy access for her to slowly accept Shraddha. Kamini here is a far cry more sweet and understanding than in the show😆😛

Thanks dear and im glad you loved reading it as i really loved writing it for u guys🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗