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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Waiting for ur update as always 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4

Night at singhania and kapoor mansion

in prem room

prem is thinking about his angel( kalpi), and mesmerized by her beauty and simplicity but today I saw her in different side of it but she always look like angel as usual, finally i find my unknown feelings towards kalpi its nothing but LOVE ,my life smilingly he welcome his sleep

Raghav room

I saw some pain in her eyes,but what's this?and why jadhav's shifted Paris to India, they didn't have any happiness in their life oh!! raghav why are you thinking too much ,may be you're overreacting, if she is have any pain what's problems in it,you even not friend her and I didn't speak to her oh!!!! why are playing in my life fine I made my mind I don't care about her past and pain NO NO NO i care about her so i find answers of all my questions MISSION start

jadhav mansion

kalpi room

she is silently cries her heart out her tears made its way to her cheeks and its dropped her ring that she wear in her left hand side ring finger ,she keep staring her ring and her night went by without sleep

morning

kalpi drove her car to her office and she saw some of few peoples rounded by something and she went yo sre this ,she is shocked by seeing her view,8years old girl have injured in her head seems like the car hit her,and her parents argued with the person but the person didn't show any interest in that and he keep insulting them

boy: don't you know how to cross the road damm people low class mentality

kalpi: don't you dare to insult them,you have to say sorry to them and take the girl to the hospital

boy: who are you saying this?

kalpi angrily its not your business do what I say

boy: am I your servant? now I got it its all your low class peoples cheap plan for gain money from me you low class peoples before he could complete

kalpi: don't forget that you're talking to KALPANA JADHAV THE MILLIONRIE daughter

hearing jadhav the boy get fear and say guiltily sorry mam forgive me I will do what you say ,saying that he take the girl in his arms and take her to hospital.
without saying anything kalpi drove her car to the office,

unknown to her prem,raghav saw this ( because same way to their office) and impressed by her gestures both of them,

few days passed by this ,prem and raghav didn't have chance to see her but they didn't removed her memories in their heart
on day

raghav and prem went to kalpi office for some professional issues

in kalpi cabin
they entered in kalpi cabin with knock and mesmerized seeing beauty in front of them, kalpi wear formal dress and keep her hair has bun,
kalpi, raghav, prem discussed about meeting, and suddenly kalpi eyes widened with shocks,and immediately she have feeling restless and tears made its way to her cheeks,prem and raghav confused by kalpi sudden restless.

note: friends give your honest comments to my stories if you find it boring pls tell me I will discontinue my all stories

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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
its fabulous
my doll criticism come with talent be it good or bad.
You know you have the ability to write and project a story line while some without having such ability will criticize your effort.
Always remember whatever you do people always critize...
so take it positively and write for us . for mee more koz I love love it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sweet1308

its fabulous
my doll criticism come with talent be it good or bad.
You know you have the ability to write and project a story line while some without having such ability will criticize your effort.
Always remember whatever you do people always critize...
so take it positively and write for us . for mee more koz I love love it.

thank you dear for your support it means a lot to me and I always try to update regularly
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Very nice update. Thank you very much your regular update.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: MadhuGupta

Very nice update. Thank you very much your regular update.😊

you welcome dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Well I like ur stories and think u are doing really well

I appreciate the regular updates

So coming to this update

Both Prem and Raghav have set their sights on kalpi

Kalpi is very good at heart and seems to want to help people in trouble

But y did kalpi start to cry when raghav and Prem came to her office

Continue soon 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: MagicalMadness

Well I like ur stories and think u are doing really well

I appreciate the regular updates

So coming to this update

Both Prem and Raghav have set their sights on kalpi

Kalpi is very good at heart and seems to want to help people in trouble

But y did kalpi start to cry when raghav and Prem came to her office

Continue soon 😛

thank you for your support dear,Wii try update soon dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Awesome update dear
Why do u think urs stories r boring
Ur sories r awesome i loved it very much
So pls update for us
Waiting for next update dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: meenukansal

Awesome update dear

Why do u think urs stories r boring
Ur sories r awesome i loved it very much
So pls update for us
Waiting for next update dear

thank you for your support and will try update soon dear

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