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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
lovely update
waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
to be continued
person: dad
vitthal: kalpi, u listened?
kalpi slightly nod her head with tears in her eyes
vitthal: how I tell to pakhi that raghav don't love her
kalpi: raghav don't tell dee about this,I will talk to raghav
vitthal: what's necessary of that he already told
kalpi; no dad I will try bye
vitthal watch kalpi with confused

kalpi call raghav and told meet me immediately at the park
raghav as your wish with dreamy tone
at park
raghav was full in romantic mood,when he saw her immediately hug her
kalpi; you got engaged still in his embrace
raghav broke the hug and stares kalpi with shocks
raghav: u know
kalpi; yeah
raghav: yes but don't worry angel I broke the engagement just now ,now we are out of any trouble
kalpi: she loves you raghav
raghav: who
kalpi: pakhi
raghav: angel pls concentrate on our future happiness, we will marry
kalpi: I can't
raghav: why angel because of that pakhi why you care about her I don't know why ? with frustration tone
kalpi: because I am her sister,I am KALPANA JADHAV ,VITTHAL JADHAV YOUNGER SISTER AND PAKHI'S SISTER
Raghav shocked by hearing this
raghav: kalpana jadhav,angel pls listen to me I don't love her pls understand
kalpi: raghav you have to marry her only its promise on me
raghav stares kalpi with unbelievingly
raghav: shouts at kalpi are you out of your mind
kalpi: if you not listen to me then you will she my dead body
raghav try to say something but kalpi not let him complete
kalpi: plsvcall dad and say now your ready to marry pakhi and say sorry for morning talks
raghav do what kalpi say because he have fear what if kalpi do something wrong to herself that's why
kalpi: OK,pls forget me and accept pakhi as a your wife( kalpi control herself she never try face raghav if she do then she loss her control on other side raghav understand kalpi situation)
kalpi about to leave
raghav: angel come I will drop you at home
kalpi: no I'll manage
raghav: I done what you said everything pls for me you don't do this
kalpi accept raghav lift and full journey silent enclosed the car
out side of jadhav mansion
raghav open car door for kalpi
kalpi; thanks,will see you in day after tomorrow at mandap with pakhi dee
kalpi about to leave raghav held her wrist and pull her towards his chest within a fraction of second raghav crush his lips with hers and she respond immediately and raghav thought she love me too but then he lost their first kiss( rest you can imagine)
they break the kiss for air kalpi run to her room raghav left with sadness unknown to them someone silent spectators for this and thought they love each other
Edited by vanajaragna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83
kalpi kept crying in her room suddenly
vitthal: so you're sacrifice your happiness for your dee's happiness
kalpi run and hug vitthal and sobs I love him dad but dee happiness is more important to me
vitthal: no kalpi it's wrong I break this engagement and let me talk to pakhi about this
kalpi; no dad don't do this dee happiness is lies on raghav if she know about this she will die,who knows may be after marriage raghav accept dee pls
after several insists finally vitthal agree to kalpi
on other side raghav drunk himself as if his life comes end Sammy and Maya try to console him but it's all vein and raghav thought if you not my bride then I will end my life at the mandap itself
dinner at jadhav mansion
pakhi: I can't imagine day after tomorrow my marriage am so happy dad
vitthal about to tell but kalpi hold his end and nod her head negatively

one day after marriage
prem comes to know about marriage but he assumes kalpi as a ragna's bride
and he thought I will kill you kalpi
rest of the one day went by marriage celebration
marriage at mandap
raghav is sits in mandap and hold poison bottle in his hand and others busy with celebration didn't see that
and raghav about to sip the poison but when she saw bride walk downstairs her face covered with veil and he imagine his angel and automatically he stares from head to toe and he saw something and smile with excitement and through poison bottle side
bride sit beside raghav and pandit ji asked them complete the vows and other rituals all family members through the flowers on them as a blessings
pandit ji asked to raghav put mangalsutra around bride neck raghav smilingly do what pandit ji asked and mumbles in bride ear
raghav I KNOW IT'S YOU ANGEL BECAUSE I KNOW ONE SECRET ABOUT YOU (birthmark on her tummy)
angel smile behind the veil
Edited by vanajaragna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84
sorry for any mistakes

precap: flashback ( final part)

thank you for your likes and comments Especially (magicalmadness) sorry I don't know your name dear
Edited by vanajaragna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
😊wow awesome update .how come bride chsnge at the mandap how it happend .can't wait to read .Thanks for update,why u ending the story too soon .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Omg 2 updates in a row lucky us

I feel sad for KALPI but vithal is ready to break the marriage so she should have let him it's not fair for all 3 of them

Rags didn't drink poison because he thinks it's KALPI

Is it really her? Or did she make the birthmark on pakhis tummy

Will prem kill KALPI

Continue soon

Can't wait

And thanks for the mention
🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: kinnapatel

😊wow awesome update .how come bride chsnge at the mandap how it happend .can't wait to read .Thanks for update,why u ending the story too soon .

thank you for your lovely comments but sorry the story have end soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: MagicalMadness

Omg 2 updates in a row lucky us

I feel sad for KALPI but vithal is ready to break the marriage so she should have let him it's not fair for all 3 of them

Rags didn't drink poison because he thinks it's KALPI

Is it really her? Or did she make the birthmark on pakhis tummy

Will prem kill KALPI

Continue soon

Can't wait

And thanks for the mention
🤗

thank you dear, you deserved the mention,when I write the update i mind thought about you only I don't know why may be because of your lovely comments thank you once again dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Awesome update. Who replace the bride.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: naam11

Awesome update. Who replace the bride.

thank you dear, you'll know about this at next part may be tomorrow dear thank you for you lovely comments

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