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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
part7
morning at the park
raghav waiting for his angel and also thinking about his confession" how am I going to proposed her yesterday itself i know about her,what will she think about me?"
angel: raghav what are you thinking about?
raghav: how I am going to proposed my angel still in the dreamland not realizing his angel standing next to him
angel: what?
raghav: sorry I just don't know its you sorry
angel: its OK,if you busy with your dream I will talk to later
raghav: no,its fine
angel: shall we? shows guitar to raghav
raghav: yeah sure,anyways don't you go tell your name?
angel smiled about say her name again interpreted but this time raghav's phone call but raghav reject his call because unknown number ( its pakhi call)
raghav; where we left? in your name don't you think when you are try to tell your name its always interpreted by something angel just smiled and say
angel: so?
raghav: so I don't want to your name?
angel; then how will you call me?
raghav immediately says: angel
angel: what?
before raghav would say anything
angel: OK its nice,you can call me like that
raghav and his angel stares each other its angel who broke the stares
rest of the time went by guitar teachingteaching
on other side pakhi stares her mobile and thought why he rejected my call I. will tell this to dad and she went vitthal room and told about this
vitthal; pakhi he is business man may be he is in meeting when you call him,call him night just 5 more days then you will be his wife
pakhi smiling shilly and say dad OK dad
on other side at the park raghav and his angel finished their guitar playing then
raghav: angel how about have coffee with me?
angel; OK
they went near the coffee shop
raghav placed coffee for them
raghav; angel can I tell you something?
angel: OK tell me raghav
raghav: last two years i always dreamed about one girl may be she is angel to me
angel smile fated by this she thought raghav is going to tell me that she loves someone else
Edited by vanajaragna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Another sweet update

But when will Raghav know her name

And poor KALPI thinks he loves someone else lol

Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
Lovely update kalpi is sad she thinks raghav love some one else nd pakhi also love to raghav very interesting plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Lovely update. Thank you for this beautiful story.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice dr. Tis story reminds me an south indian movie
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepu_kutty

Nice dr. Tis story reminds me an south indian movie

which movie dear?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's Ninaithen Vandhai .

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Read all parts on the go.. U have written very well.. Plz do continue yaar.. My like button is not working. I will like ur post later.. Thank you for sparing ur time for us.. U r lovely writer too..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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😊AWESOME when raghv wil know her name and how will they both confess their love .aww pakhi HOPE she will not be stone FOR ragna .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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to be continued
angel is sad because she thought raghav loves someone else
raghav: but I didn't she her face,its always covered by the veil,but I know one secret about her
angel: what's that ( because she have no interest in talk about raghav so called dream especially his dream angel)
raghav: she have birthmark on her tummy
angel: OK suddenly what did you say?
raghav: I am saying that she have birthmark on her tummy
angel surprised by hearing that ,then she hesitated sometimes then say
angel: I have that
raghav: so with smile
angel: so with curiously
raghav: your my angel ,I love you angel I am waiting for you last two years
angel heart jumping with excitement before she say yes to him she stop" if I say yes to him immediately what will he think i am desperately waiting for this only, i know its right but I am not going to say yes to him then she masked her feelings
angel: can i tell you tomorrow
raghav: sure,but it must be positive
she just smile shilly for this
rest of the time went by chatting and finally they exchange their numbers
at jadhav mansion
kalpi: dee are you talk to my jiju
pakhi: no kalpi he always busy with businesses
kalpi: dee,give some time for him to businesses after marriage he will be busy with his beautiful wife you know?
pakhi: kalpi this is too much
kalpi: its true dee

pakhi thought I will call him tonight
at singhania mansion
raghav told everything to Sammy
raghav: she will tell yes to me,then i am going to talk vitthal uncle about this
Sammy: your happiness is important toe
at night
raghav call his angel she pick his call within two rings
raghav: seems like someone waiting for my call
angel: shilly may be
raghav: then why you not call me?
angel: as I thought you were busy with some work
raghav: I always free for you at anytime
angel; acha
they continues talkies suddenly angel call got disconnected raghav about to call her back but stop what will she surrounded by family members then he wait for angel call
suddenly raghav phone starts ringing without see caller id he attend the call
raghav: angel why call disconnected?
person: raghav now only I call you
then raghav saw caller id its unknown number
raghav: whose this?
person: raghav its me pakhi
Edited by vanajaragna - 8 years ago

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