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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: naam11

Million miles awesome story. raghav helping kalpana so that she become stong,and face her family. He try to cure kalpana's walking in sleep.
Excelent.
One request please when ever you get time please write small stories which end in 2 or 3 shots.


Thank u so much , glad to know that you like this version of ragna ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ
As for your request - id clearly stated in the very first post of this thread , for me time isn't an issue that stands as an obstacle between me & my writing. It's just that thing that I had previously seems lost - i no longer seem to be satisfied with my work & neither do I enjoy it. But yes , if someday i again feel that I'd be able to write better & do enough justice then why not ๐Ÿ˜‰
This girl would be back in no time to bug you with her words๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Nice compression

Lively


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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Marieee I'm speechless!!! Touched!! Amazed!!
Brilliant!! Just brilliant!!
I have to express my feelings, you truly are an amazing author, girl you amaze me all the time with your originality!! To be continued... but busy but I had to finish reading this!! Million miles away


And I'm still waiting ...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: pratibhas5

Lovely stories n what about the shots Had he finally left did ragav has gone

Do update that to dear... ๐Ÿ‘


Thanks pratibha
Shots is gonna come very very soon ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: shoppingfreak1

Okay.. this one was so different! And the Raghav in here is so like.. I didn't like him lol. But the part where Kalpana outsmarts him was amazing. Was a nice theme.


Arey tu toh waapas first hai ๐Ÿ˜† Now I'm scared , you stalking me or something ๐Ÿ˜›
Yeah this one was very very different ...Hmm even I didn't like this Raghav ๐Ÿ˜† But then as I said I have this habit of making alterations in my story by taking in people's reviews. RRVSMI waise Hi toh bana tha ... Had started off aisehi without any knowledge of how the end would be. Jo story weave hote gayi was all the readers & their comments ki meherbani ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Girls are meant to be smart #We rule โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: maarushkaa


Hehehe ...Tune Kya thaan liya hai kya to always be the first one to comment on my overviews ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
U didn't know the track would be something like this , well I live to be unpredictable ๐Ÿ˜‰
Bohut se bhi zyaada glad to know that u liked the story... and their moments. Well , they can sit across each without saying a word and we'd still be drooling over their chemistry - so won't take any credits for that one ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Accha ji tujhe psychiatrist ke paas jaana hai ha ?? Lol ...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Secret lol. Good work ahahahaha. I agree.. they have magic. Le chal na.. jitna hot psychiatrist hai๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: maarushkaa


Arey tu toh waapas first hai ๐Ÿ˜† Now I'm scared , you stalking me or something ๐Ÿ˜›
Yeah this one was very very different ...Hmm even I didn't like this Raghav ๐Ÿ˜† But then as I said I have this habit of making alterations in my story by taking in people's reviews. RRVSMI waise Hi toh bana tha ... Had started off aisehi without any knowledge of how the end would be. Jo story weave hote gayi was all the readers & their comments ki meherbani ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Girls are meant to be smart #We rule โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜‰

I actually have this page opened in my chrome browser and I refresh it now and then to see if you updated.๐Ÿ˜†
That's both a good and a bad thing lol.
Seriously? Alterations and all ke saath?wah.. my talented Owliee.๐Ÿ‘
Exactly. #WeRule ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
It was Ekdum JHAKKAS dear.
And please keep writing yaar
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59


Hey Marushkaa! This fs was so different.. Loved ur compressed version. But would have been very happy if it was an full length story. Concept was different. Happy at least we got this.. Thank you dear.


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Posted: 8 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: maarushkaa



And I'm still waiting ...๐Ÿ˜ƒ



You know Miss Original, the thing you come up with hmmm amazes me, here I was thinking why the hell raghav forced himself on her only to realize he was only making her stronger and helping her to face up to the beast. Daaamn girl!! You're awesome, wat a plot!! After rags getting to know all kalpis secrets through her sleep walking, gosh it was so sweet of him to do his darndest to help her in every way he saw fit!! It's a good thing he studied psychiatrist ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜‰ BRAVO...
And then her apartment ๐Ÿ˜› knew he was behind it all ( I mean after him getting to know her likes and dislikes he knew exactly wat had to be done) ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ gosh such a wonderful individual he is ๐Ÿ˜› your plot mariee, everything u came up with and how you made it look so real ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ allowing us to get all wrapped up in the plot only to realize it was all just to heal kalpi and to make her strong, BRAVO ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ you know I really don't expect anything less from you MUAH ;) and OMG!! The song!! A million miles away, you know this one is very dear to my heart (sigh) the story, and now this much, this song, so appropriate and having the words a million miles away in it (emotionally touched) salute!!

And I read that I am only gonna give you 3 more replies
๐Ÿ˜ฒ plz plz pleeez don't stop writing!! I beg you ๐Ÿ˜ญ whenever u can, and u have the time, do give us a shot or two ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜‰ Miss Original wen you update again d send me a PM and thank you for this wonderfully creatively plotting this amazing story. Nicely done ๐Ÿ‘
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