RagnaFF:Bittersweet love Part-14b - Page 2

Amazing start... clear character defn of kalpi, sammy and priya... raghav kissing kalpi( but why... give his pov)... kalpi slapping raghav ... curious to read more

Thanks nimmy for your suggestion

Part-4

In the canteen, after Sammy and Kalpi left

Guy1: What was that, how dare she can slap you? She should have thanked you that you have kissed her.

Guy2: Yes yaar all college girls simply die to have your one look, look at her this middle class girl (guessed by seeing her dress)

Guy3: Aur yeah Sammy , you use to say him your best buddy and see he also ditch you and he is doing with that girl, look like he know her very well.

Raghav (was still in shock, it was first time somebody has treated him like this babaji ka tullu and more his friends adding fuel) She has to pay for that

Guy3: But how?

Raghav: Just wait and watch. But guys Sammy should not know anything about this

Guy2: Are you sure?

Raghav gave a confused look and ask what they want to say

Guy3(mockingly) I had a strong feeling that you are planning to get another slap doosre gaal par

Guy1: Yes Raghav leave it, we don't feel she is your cup of tea.

And the last nail in coffin. Now Raghav made decision by hook or crook he is going to make for Kalpi for him. Raghav was nice guy eventhough he is little cassanova type but he had respect for all girls in his eyes. But this time his male ego overpower his heart.

In evening in Parking area

Kalpi was taking her scooty out. When Raghav came infront of her

Kalpi: What you are doing here, that slap was not enough

Raghav: Bend on his knees. I'm really sorry for morning incident. I should have not done that. If you want you can give any punishment but pls. accept my apology pls pls

Priya: Ab jaane de bhi yaar, see for his mistake you slapped him and now he also realised his mistake leave it.

Kalpi: Ok

Raghav (by extending hands) : So, friends

Kalpi: Excuse me ( thinking ungli di toh haath pakad na chahatha hai ) I don't make friends so easily, today is first day we met let see

Priya : (smiling and extending her hand) But I don't have any friends

Kalpi:(glared at her) Are you coming with me or going with your newly found so called friend

Priya: Coming with you only, ab chaal

Raghav Pov: ( Where you will go, you have to come back to me smirk)

Loving this college going Ragna.. First day with kiss and slap treat.. Protective bro Sammy. Plz continue yaar.. All 4 parts are really so good.. I'm waiting for our next update.. Eager to know what was that Raghav up to and what will Sammy do after knowing Raghav plan??? Who is going to fal in love first??? Waiting yaar.

Originally posted by: abirami_shankar

Loving this college going Ragna.. First day with kiss and slap treat.. Protective bro Sammy. Plz continue yaar.. All 4 parts are really so good.. I'm waiting for our next update.. Eager to know what was that Raghav up to and what will Sammy do after knowing Raghav plan??? Who is going to fal in love first??? Waiting yaar.

Raghav and his male ego.
Nice update.
Update next part soon.

Awesome deaaar i enjoyed it a lot dear raghav' s friends are not good raghav pretending he is sorrry eagerly waiting for moore thankuuu for udating update next part soon

Originally posted by: rachufan

Awesome deaaar i enjoyed it a lot dear raghav' s friends are not good raghav pretending he is sorrry eagerly waiting for moore thankuuu for udating update next part soon

Originally posted by: Cinderella81

Thanks dear really I feel very motivated by yours comments as I'm not writter this is my just trail start pls be free suggest me if I went some where wrong

Thanku dear i realy enjoy ur writing and to be honest i never felt u are writing first time so do as u decided u are doing fab job it is very interesting and according to me practise makes perfect so write more and more god bless u keep it up

Originally posted by: rachufan

Thanku dear i realy enjoy ur writing and to be honest i never felt u are writing first time so do as u decided u are doing fab job it is very interesting and according to me practise makes perfect so write more and more god bless u keep it up

Never felt u r writting for first time..