RagnaFF:Bittersweet love Part-14b - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update... So in next update itz Raghav turn to feel jeasouly of Sammy and Kalpi.. I'm loving this...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mindblowing superb bb love this paart
Most poor raghav dreaming his coffee date with kalpi a nd she came with priya raghav ka dono ' P' ne poor pagal bana diya

Raghav ki coffee date par pakhi priya ne mari shocking entry
Raghav ka Sapna tuta coffee kalpi and rommantic chatting

Bindaas uupdate soon dear eagerly waiting for jealous raghav
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
Wow raghav plan is backfire
Pakhi and priya spoil raghav coffee date
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This part I have given more focus on portraiting Kalpi character which in my mind.

Part-7

By saying this Kalpi left with Priya coolly leaving Raghav cleaned bowled. Now he felt his plan backfired and hell angry with Paakhi and Priya. After that Raghav was searching her in whole college but can't figure out finally he went to Sammy who is in library engrossed in making notes. Raghav entered in the library (while writing this scene I have imagined the scene from"Maine Hoon Na" film when Zayed Khan entered inside the library) , he went and sit next to him, immediately Sammy checked his temperature and enquired Raghav

Sammy(shocked and puzzled): Raghav are you fine, tum yahan library mein

Raghav : Kyun mein yahan par nahi aa sakta

Sammy: (chuckled) Kyun nahi. Par this is world's biggest miracle the Raghav Singhanai aur yahan unbelievable

Raghav: (first he can't figure out Kalpana and he instead of helping him his best is making fun this was highly irritating) Leave it Sammy just tell me where is Kalpana?

Sammy: (Now whole thing is clear to him why Raghav is here in library, just nodding little smiling thinking in mind yeah kabhi nahi sudharega) She went home.

Raghav: Home!!!! but she was telling some important lectures where there.

Sammy: Haan but got cancelled. Aab agar tera interrogatory session over hogaya hai toh can I do my work.

Raghav: (Saab kuch aaj hi hona tha ) Haan carry on

In Kapoor Mansion

As lecture got canceled Kalpi wants to cheer up Priya, who is totally upset after Paakhi incident so made plan to watch movie she informed Ramu Kaka to make her theater room ready arrange popcorn, pizza and colddrinks. Both Kalpi and Priya had nice time.

Priya: Kalpi I know you from childhood but still can't understand you.

Kalpi: Why ?

Priya: You never use your car for school or college, you don't like to party in five star, not wear your designer wears but you like to watch movie in your theater which your father has specially made for you and use your parents money for social work, really I can't understand. Really when Paakhi was cheapily saying about you, you not answered her instead of that you made me quiet.

Kalpi: Aww my dramaqueen still upset with that Paakhi, why the hell your spoiling your mood thinking about that. You know I don't care and when I said I don't like to wear designer clothes but for college I don't feel it apt same goes with my car. I never said I don't like to spend money which they gave to me but I don't want to show off and this theater I love it my favourite place.

By saying so Kalpi started tickling her to lighten her mood and so make her laugh.

Priya: Kalpi bas bas haahee haa leave na hoo haa

Kalpi: Now its ok. You know Priya serious talk don't suits you.

Priya: (Smilingly) Ok yaar. Now I should take leave. See you tomorrow.

Kalpi : Priya tomorrow is months third friday and you know I and dada will go Palghar(imaginative one )village. But you don't forget to record lectures for me.

Priya: How can I forgot you have adopted a whole village? See you on Monday. But take care of my BF

Kalpi: Priya tu nahi sudharegi. Bye

Next day morning in College

Raghav was impatiently walking in Parking area for Kalpi. But he saw only Priya came.

Raghav: Priya, where is Kalpana?

Priya: She is on leave today

Raghav: How come I checked timetable all important lectures are there, she won't miss any lectures?

Priya: ( She gave unbelievable look, but she is enjoying this impatient Raghav, bada aaya kaal bada gale laag raha tha apne GF aur aaj Kalpi bachu abhi baati hoon)Why she can't take leave?

Raghav: (Worryingly) Is she fine?

Priya: Ya absotuley fine, you don't know she went with your best buddy Sammy only

Raghav: Sammy and Kalpana are together

Priya: Haan they went to spend weekend together will return on Monday. Ok bye I getting late for the class and she ran.

Raghav immediately taken out his phone and dialed Sammy nos. firstly for one hour it was giving msg out of coverage area

Raghav: Sammy where the hell you are? Pick up the phone

Luckily phone got connected

Sammy: Kalpu chod na, I'm tired I can't

Kalpi: Aaj nahi chodnewali poora gin gin kar wasool karungi

Sammy: Hello ( beep sound phone got disconnected)

Raghav was fuming he don't know but today first time he is feeling jealous of Sammy.

Precap:Raghav more and more falling for Kalpana simplicity

Edited by Cinderella81 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Hello. 'fairy tale' sweetie ! Of course we remember you especially with a 'gorgeous' name ! You have 'disappeared' like your namesake but some 'prince' must have found you. Thanks for returning a giving an interesting story ! I love this Kalpi who is making our 'cassanova' go on a 'merry-go-round' !! You are talented writer but we are not fortunate enough to get your stories. Please do write more stories for EMA IF !! Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: premap

Hello. 'fairy tale' sweetie ! Of course we remember you especially with a 'gorgeous' name ! You have 'disappeared' like your namesake but some 'prince' must have found you. Thanks for returning a giving an interesting story ! I love this Kalpi who is making our 'cassanova' go on a 'merry-go-round' !! You are talented writer but we are not fortunate enough to get your stories. Please do write more stories for EMA IF !! Thanks

Aww so sweet of you this time no disappearing. Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37
Nice update
Love the whole updste
Wooo rag jealius
Updste soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Superb update
raghavs over smartness & pakhi fails rags plan
Raghav is hell jealous os sammy...loved it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Superb update raghav is feeling jealousy of Sammy enjoy it dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40
Amazing updates
In love with ur sweet jealous Raghav, simple yet lovely kalpi, funny Priya and caring sammy...

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