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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting storyline... would love to read no majboor raghav and strong kalpi's love story😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice cs please update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Beautiful concept. Hope you will continue soon. Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Nice prologue &
CS :- Three-Three Vamp in the story ...most interesting

Continue and update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
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LpleAase try to udate
Edited by rachufan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mermaidheart

Yeaaa
I am the first to comment on your post.
Looking intetesting plot
Continue soon ji

conr8👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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chapter-1

A man entered the apartment after 1 week from his business trip.he was so excited to meet her lady love .He was going to see her after 7 days which was like a hell for him without seeing her lovely face.he could smell her fragrance in an evry corner of a house.THEIR PARADISE.

As soon as entered he froze at his place,there sleeping her angel on the bed ,there was no light in the room ,only a moon's light falling on her face which made her face glowing like pearl and her lips curled in the beautiful smile.

a smile spread on her lips after seeing how sweetly she snuggled teddy ,probably tried to felt his presence as she demanded a teddy first time because she is habituated to sleep in his arms .

he slowly took his steps and came near the bed and bend towards her and kissed her forehead before leaving to got fresh up.

after few minutes ,he came out from the washroom wearing his night dress and sneaked into the blanket and took her in his arms before throwing the teddy somewhere in the room ..after feeling his warmth ,his angel snugged into his embrace more as she already acknowledged his presence..he slowly pecked her lips as he didn't wanna disturb the sleep of his angel and patted her head lovely..

he was very lucky to have this angel in his life.h e still remembered that fateful when he saw her first time..

after opening his eyes he found himself in the hospital.he felt the pain in his entire body ,his head was heavy as someone hit her head by hammer.when he tried to get up on her feet, he stumbled back and fall down but he didn't feel any pain as someone caught him ..when he looked on the face .his heart skipped a bit .a deep ocean eyes was looking him with concerned.oh! he never ever seen such a beautiful yet innocent eyes.some strange feeling provoking inside him which he never felt before.he came back to reality when he heard his voice.

" what a sweet and soft voice which is soothing his wounded heard", thought Raghav surprisingly.
"are you alright?? should I call the doctor? is it paining a lot? ",asked the girl panicky.

Raghav wants to laugh at her innocent questions but he controlled himself and replied" I am alright.just relax."

just then doctor entered
"hello ! Mr. Singhania, how are you feeling now?", asked lady doctor sweetly.
" feeling much better now",replied Raghav while looking towards the girl through the corner of his eyes.
" thankyou so much doctor for taking care of me", said Raghav in gratitude.

" not at all Mr.singhania .it's doctor's duty take care of their patients. BTW if you wanna thanks then thanks to Kalpana who brought you here at right time ", spoke doctor amusedly as he heard about his heartless attitude . he is still unaware the words of 'sorry and thanks you' and today he is saying thanks to me.. what a change or am I dreaming??..

after the doctor left both were alone in the room and they were feeling awkward specially Raghav because first time in his life he was hesitating to start a talk .

after few seconds of thinking, Raghav was the one who broke the awkwardness and said: " thanks miss Kalpana".
it's ok sir", said Kalpana with the smile.
again there was silence . but this time, Kalpana broke the silence and said: " I am Kalpana Jadhav". I am 18 , 1st year B.TECH student. I am the orphan and living in rented house while coming to a house I saw your injured body lying across the road so I brought you here."

Raghav was speechless as his thought running around "I am 18 and orphan".he could felt the sadness in her voice while introducing herself."suddenly he felt possessiveness towards her.to protect her, to care her,to make her happy.. his trance broke by her soft voice which became his favorite music now.

sir , I have to go to take tuition , my kids are waiting for me."said Kalpana softly.
Raghav was very proud of her and like her self-depended attitude
"okay, but come soon ", commanded Raghav without thinking but as soon as the words left his mouth ,he realized what he had just said .

Kalpana was little surprised the way he commanded her and she simply nodded her head and left the room.


past will be continue ...

i know this update is short and not up to mark as i am not feeling well but i didn't wanna disappoint to my lovelies readers...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Very nice update
& Big thnk u...as was dying to read ragna stories...but its sannats over here...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanku sooo much for udating get well soon dear first take care of urself we will waitm
its awesome now they are together love their first meetinng raghav clean bold
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Take care of yourself.
And update was superb.

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