SS:'you are my new passion'

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I know I don't even finish my old story and I am here with the new story of ragana .sorry I can't control myself to pen it down.
in my story there is no MAJBOOR Raghav and INSECURE and HELPLESS kalpana.both are strong and will fight for their love till their last breath.

so here is a prologue

PROLOGUE
Boy: wow mom! what a good actress you are? how are you making fool my little brother,oops's! my step little brother all the time.he even doesn't have the slight idea that he is the pawn of your hand and he is blindly following you and your every fake tear provoked him to go a step ahead in that fake revenge .you made squared planning in the name of revenge..he will never get out from this.

lady: what could I do my son.that son of b***h would live happily before my eyes .you know what prem your useless father was very proud of his son as Raghav is the symbol of his and kavita's love. In his gaze, Raghav will be like his love Kavita.I hate raghav to the core that's y I involved him in this squared planning. no, he will never come outfrom this.
prem: you are great mom.

lady : thank you, my son
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and the room filled with their evil laugh but unknown to them their talked had been heard by someone else too which broke his heart to the core which could not d
healed with any medicines. he took stepped back in shocked and tried to balance himself and he was feeling weak to stand there but at somehow he left the place which was suffocating him.

amidst of lonely road a man driving the car at full speed.while driving he was thinking all the time Iwasbelieving at wrong person to whom I worshiped but she used me for her fake revenge.all her loved had been faked because she hates me.due to her I became a heartless monster. I never cared about anyone rather than she and prem Bhai. god! prem Bhai also hates me .he is the mentor for me .all his advice was just to trapped me in the wrong way..."NOOO!!! THIS NOT TRUE . WHATEVER I HAD SEEN ,ALL WERE MY ILLUSION ONLY " shouted in pain.


I have to find out all the truth because this is unbearable for me..it's breaking me from inside .my existence is not fake . suddenly he was feeling restless, his heart was paining .he was feeling dizziness ..amidst of this he didn't notice a car coming in front of him..due to continuous horn sound he saw the scene which left him shocked and before he did something ,he felt dark surrounded him .with this he passed out.


will update characters sketches soon.
should I continue this story or not.
pls give honest reply no buttering.

CS : PAGE 2
CHAPTER 1 : PAGE 4
CHAPTER 2: PAGE 8
CHAPTER 3 : PAGE 20




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yeaaa
I am the first to comment on your post.
Looking intetesting plot
Continue soon ji
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting it is..do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting prologue...pls continue soon
Waiting ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting. ..go ahead but don't let us wait for long
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Seems very interesting continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Plz continue dear nice prologue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for starting a new Ragna Story
this is an interesting concept. let me guess its Raghav that has been kept confused by neetu and prem...hmmm would definitely like to read this one
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well am thrilled n want more
So update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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HERE Are CAST SKETCHES

RAGHAV SINGHANIA : He is 30 yrs old. Fiancee of pakhi Kapoor. A very rude,heartless businessman..he doesn't care for anyone except his mother and elder brother.his only motive is to get revenge from kappor who murdered his father.
if anybody impinges with him then he ruined that person completely.Sorry ,thank you and mercy are not in his dictionary.his name is enough to make anyone shudder in fear.
he is the man of power ,whatever he wants he get that at any cost.
But he changed after he met with his angel.he loves her a lot.his first priority is his angel.if anyone hurt her then he will see them hell in the worst way.

KALPANA JADHAV: She is 18 yrs old.she is the jolly,cute and innocent girl who only knows how to spread love..she thinks she is an orphan but an awful mystery is hidden of her existence. she is brave but naive ..so innocent for this cruel world but her protector will come to save her from this cruel world .she fell head over heels in love with her protector.

PAKHI KAPOOR: she is 25 yrs old and so obsessed with his fiancee raghav..she wants him and for this, she can cross any limit .a very cunning and selfish person.she birth with silver spoon .she doesn't think anyone before herself.vamp of the story.

NEETU KAPOOR: a very greedy mother who wants her daughter gets married to Raghav Singhania .raghav is just a jackpot for her
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SAHIL KAPOOR : A good father ,love his family but they don't consider him anything as he always stands for right think and never supported bad deed. he will play a great role in the life of RAGANA.

PREM SINGHANIA: A very selfish brother who even don't respect her mother and using her with her benefits ..always provoking his mother against Raghav. A b****Y womanizer .25 yrs old.villian of the story.

GAURI SINGHANIA: she is the mother of prem Singhania and Raghav Singhania. Hates Raghav very much nd using him as her pawn(will get to know the reason in future). a very dangerous,selfish and cruel lady.she has many secrets. vamp of the story.

KAMALA JADHAV : Same as serial but the difference is she is more heartless and selfish women .she neglected her own son as she is always busy looking after pakhi Kapoor. vamp of the story.

VITHHAL YADAV: A spineless husband and father. never stands for the right thing.a huge secret has been hidden from him.

SAMAR RAIZADA: 28 Yrs old.A very good hearted person..Raghav's best friend and true well wisher ..he knew that Raghav's family is using him.they don't love him.many times he tried to made him understood about his family's motive but he didn't give ear to his talks.

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