I know I don't even finish my old story and I am here with the new story of ragana .sorry I can't control myself to pen it down.
in my story there is no MAJBOOR Raghav and INSECURE and HELPLESS kalpana.both are strong and will fight for their love till their last breath.
so here is a prologue
PROLOGUE
Boy: wow mom! what a good actress you are? how are you making fool my little brother,oops's! my step little brother all the time.he even doesn't have the slight idea that he is the pawn of your hand and he is blindly following you and your every fake tear provoked him to go a step ahead in that fake revenge .you made squared planning in the name of revenge..he will never get out from this.
lady: what could I do my son.that son of b***h would live happily before my eyes .you know what prem your useless father was very proud of his son as Raghav is the symbol of his and kavita's love. In his gaze, Raghav will be like his love Kavita.I hate raghav to the core that's y I involved him in this squared planning. no, he will never come outfrom this.
prem: you are great mom.
lady : thank you, my son
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and the room filled with their evil laugh but unknown to them their talked had been heard by someone else too which broke his heart to the core which could not d
healed with any medicines. he took stepped back in shocked and tried to balance himself and he was feeling weak to stand there but at somehow he left the place which was suffocating him.
amidst of lonely road a man driving the car at full speed.while driving he was thinking all the time Iwasbelieving at wrong person to whom I worshiped but she used me for her fake revenge.all her loved had been faked because she hates me.due to her I became a heartless monster. I never cared about anyone rather than she and prem Bhai. god! prem Bhai also hates me .he is the mentor for me .all his advice was just to trapped me in the wrong way..."NOOO!!! THIS NOT TRUE . WHATEVER I HAD SEEN ,ALL WERE MY ILLUSION ONLY " shouted in pain.
I have to find out all the truth because this is unbearable for me..it's breaking me from inside .my existence is not fake . suddenly he was feeling restless, his heart was paining .he was feeling dizziness ..amidst of this he didn't notice a car coming in front of him..due to continuous horn sound he saw the scene which left him shocked and before he did something ,he felt dark surrounded him .with this he passed out.
will update characters sketches soon.
should I continue this story or not.
pls give honest reply no buttering.
CS : PAGE 2
CHAPTER 1 : PAGE 4
CHAPTER 2: PAGE 8
CHAPTER 3 : PAGE 20
Edited by SsaNaZz90 - 7 years ago