RagNa OS-Dil [Incomplete]

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The story start with a pleasant mrng where a girl is shown playing with kids in a garden,her hair are long n silky which were continuously disturbing her because of the flow of wind,her eyes were glittery which is like a mirror of her heart, her lips were like rose petals n the smile on her lips were enhancing her beauty even more but only her closed ones knows that deep inside her heart she is were hurt, she had a wounded heart n soul even though she had never shared her pain with them or anyone else whereas on the other side at some isolated place a person is seen sitting n loading his gun with bullets n as soon as he finishes loading all his bullet in gun,he point his gun towards a man who is seen kneel down infront of him n begging for his life but it doesn't affect him,he just shot him to death n say Mr R hates sorries n then he orders his goons to take away him n dumped his body somewhere so that no one ever able to find him out n they all did the same,in meantime a man in his 40's comes their with a briefcase n Mr R tells him to sit down but he just took out a photo from his briefcase n throw it on the table n say Mr R your new target kalpana, I want her death as soon as possible...hearing this Mr R picks up the photo from table n unknowingly but he kept on staring her photo for sometime until his partner in crime sam voices doesn't disturb him,he say to him that we cant kill her look she is so innocent,cute just like... his sentence was cut off in middle by Mr R who says sam we r contract killers not any match makers n if we start caring about the people whom were assigned to kill then in no time we will on road saying so he takes out a lighter from his pocket n burns down kalpi's photo n say now your time is over Ms. Kalpana,be ready to die to which Mr chopra comes ahead,placed his briefcase on table,open it n quickly turns it towards Mr R n say your advance money now do my work as soon as possible to which Mr R signals him to leave n he starting moving but before stepping out he turns back n says Mr R for me you were all set to kill her but not for even once you asked me that why I want to kill her why??, because all I care about is my money,I can go to any extent for money got it n moreover I'm not any local goon or something,I'm the king who knows everything whatever is going on Mr R replied to which Mr chopra again says so in that case I guess you very well knows that why I want to kill this girl,because she is the biggest hurdle between you n your dream,that means between you n that orphanage land which you want for your hotel purpose n you very well knows that until she is their you cant get that land at any coast, that's why you come here Mr R again replied...yeah you r absolutely right n now I'm just waiting for my work to get done as soon as possible,don't make me wait too much n yeah one more thing may be she looks like too innocent but she is very sharp n clever so be careful n in case my name shouldn't come out saying so he left from their...after he left Mr R tells sam to keep the briefcase safe n get all the information of kalpi by today evening...after gathering all the info about kalpi,Mr R man's tries many a times to kill her but everytime something or other happens like god himself is protecting her n they gets fails so frustrated with his failure this time he decided to kill her by himself to which he start keeping an eye on her to get a prefect time n place to execute his plan,to kill her n that prefect time n place he gets on a stormy dark night where she was all alone going back to her orphanage n the road was also empty because of thunder Strom n heavy winds so taking advantage of this prefect opportunity Mr R n his man's surrounded kalpi n takes out their guns but instead of getting scared of them she was smiling, their was no sign of fear on her face n it shocked all of them so Mr R ask her that aren't you scared of us,aren't you scared of your death to which she reply no I'm not because you r not god,you all r normal human beings like me so why should I get scared of you n about death then everyone has to die one or another day n why to worry over the thing which has to happens later,if we keep thinking about our future then when we will enjoy our present...confidence is good but over confidence is bad for a person Ms kalpi n right now you r too much over confidence which will take you nowhere n now you have to die Mr R says while pointing a gun towards her,I don't think so because I know my god is always with me n he will surely protect me anyhow n if not then I will accept that its time for my death kalpi replied back,hearing all this Mr R was about to fire a bullet on her but before he could do so kalpi saw that someone from behind was about to shot Mr R so to save him she just push him away due to which the bullet her n she felt on floor n gets unconscious...seeing this Mr R tries to wake her up but sam pulls him back n says what r you doing, we want her death na so see she is dieing,she herself made our work easier so now let her die n we lets go n enjoy somewhere, hearing all this Mr R shouts on him n say what r you talking sam she doesn't thought about herself, she sacrificed her life just because of saving me so now its my duty to save her n if don't want to help me then atleast don't stop me saying so he again starts going towards her but sam again pulls him back n say strange why so much concern for a strange girl N moreover why this tears too, hearing this Mr R touches his face n finds moist which made him realised that he was actually crying for the first time n that too for a strange girl,he finds it strange n weird too but he avoids it n lifts kalpi in his arms n take her hospital...after he left sam thanked god for sending kalpi in his friends life,he says to himself that raghav you don't know yourself but you start changing, this girl is changing you,kalpi will surely gone bring back old naughty,fun loving,full of life raghav which you had lost somewhere,she will surely make you smile again n I will wait for that time thinking so he too went to hospital,as he comes near OT, he saw raghav moving here n there in tension,he was really cared for kalpi n its clearly visible on his face so to calm him down sam placed his hand on his friends shoulder n assured him that nothing will gone happen to her,hearing this raghav quickly hugs sam n say if anything happens to her na then I will never able to forgive myself because she is in this condition just because of me to which sam says relax raghav nothing will gone happen to her,she will be fine soon...hearing this raghav again shouts on him n say sam my name is Mr R not raghav,that raghav had died a long ago,I myself had killed him as I just hate that weak,good for nothing side of mine remember it,with this soon his angry overpowers the concern he had for kalpi n he just left from their in angry leaving sam all alone in the guilt,the guilt of making his friend remember his worst past,the guilty of again refreshing his friends wounds which he is trying to forget since his childhood,the guilt of hurting his friends so with all this thoughts he comes near to raghav or you can say Mr R n holds his ears n apologise for his mistake but seeing this raghav just hug him whereas he deep inside his heart prays to god to help his friend in forgetting n coming out of his past,help him in moving on in his life but then suddenly his thoughts were disturbed by doctors voice who told them that now kalpi is out of danger so raghav ask the doctor that can they both meet kalpi but doctor tells them to meet her after sometime as she is still unconscious n in meantime they will shift her to normal ward to which they both agree n goes to waiting area...but all this while sam finds raghav very curious,it was curiosity to meet kalpi or was curiosity to ask her something was a question for sam too...after almost two or three hours a nurse informs both of them that kalpi had gained conscious n now they can meet them,hearing this raghav almost rush towards her room which somewhere surprised sam...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update. ...loved it...
Omg raghav is contract killer 😲 want to kill kalpi. ...but kalpi save his life...n now he is intresting in her...is they both related to childhood 😕...
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks n will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swara2504

Nice os Jiya

Update soon

Thanks swara n will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ragna1302


Superb update. ...loved it...
Omg raghav is contract killer 😲want to kill kalpi. ...but kalpi save his life...n now he is intresting in her...is they both related to childhood😕...
Update soon

Thanks swati N yeah raghav is a contract killer and wants to kill kalpi but instead kalpi save his life N now he is inserted in her or not only time will tell but yeah they both are not at all related to their childhood n will update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kalpi is a sweet girl
Nice update jiya😊

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Originally posted by: DimpleAggarwal

Kalpi is a sweet girl
Nice update jiya😊

Thanks dimple

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