RagNa TS FIRST SIGHT LOVE part 10 pg 16 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bhavs when Wil u update next part
Waiting for ragna first interaction :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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10 days nd no update... Plzz update.. Plzz
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Part 4

(Sry for late update was busy with personal works n stuff here is part 4 hope its upto the mark n sry for short update too)

Kalpana Suguna n all her friends came out from Exhibition n were returning to home it was late n Ayush called Suguna that he has returned home n waiting for them. On the way returning to home some group of young boys started teasing kalpi n her friends which made kalpi irritate n she went to those boys n started bashing them but those boys started misbehaving with kalpi n were looking at her with full of lust this made Raghav n Sammy more angry who were following Kalpi n Suguna.

Sammy knew abt kalpi being strong n brave but to Raghav he was amazed how kalpi dint got scared abt those boys n started bashing this made him admire kalpi more he liked how she took initial step n fought with those boys but when the boys started using abusive words n were trying to touch kalpi this made both mens Raghav n Sammy more angry n both came infront of kalpi n made kalpi to move aside sammy asked kalpi if she was fine kalpi was happy to see her brother came to save her n her friends as she knows how sammy handles such situations wen Raghav saw sammy n kalpi together he was at first shocked then was lil jealous to see thrm hugging but suddenly Raghav saw that those boys were ready to attack which made Raghav more angry n he came forward n shouted loud enough that all were dumbstruck n scared as young boys saw Raghav being more ferocious n with his blood shot red eyes scared them a lot n also his height n physic scared young boys a lot

Raghav's outburst made Sammy n kalpi too lil scared but sammy felt lil happy that Raghav was against eve teasing n all n can do anything to save girls n somewhere he felt Raghav to be apt for his lil bundle of joy (kalpi) because both kalpi n raghav share same nature both cant take any kind of violence or any such evil things. Kalpi too loved how Raghav came forward to save them though he dint know any of them (kalpi & her friends). Kalpi & Suguna friends were amazed to see such and one of the friends of suguna n kalpi called sobha drooling over Raghav n one called Ipshita over Sammy this made kalpi lil jealous as sobha was droolin over Raghav n can't see someone looking at him though she dint know much abt Raghav but still kalpi was feeling jealous n it made lil uncomfortable too but unknown to her Raghav saw from his corner of his eyes n was happy from inside that kalpi too likes him

Raghav threatned the young boys that he will call police if they continue to do such things again which made the young boys more scared they dint wanted to go jail n Raghav knew wat will happen if those young boys go to jail their lives will b ruined n no one will give job to them raghav only threatened them all so that they wont do such things in future soon all young boys thanked Raghav for forgiving them n they will respect all girls as Raghav explained them earlier (same like kalpi did in previous one) after the boys went Suguna came to towards kalpi n introduced kalpi to Raghav at first Raghav was shocked that kalpi was (suguna's younger sis abt whom he heard in his first meet to Suguna)he thought kalpi to b suguna's friend n kalpi was equally shocked to learn abt Raghav n Suguna knowning each other before only n this made sammy too shocked also (Sammy saw Raghav coming from Suguna's house but dint knew that it was Suguna whom Raghav helped)

Sammy came forward n thanked Raghav for saving his lil sister this made Raghav shock yet happy too n he was being jealous of Sammy but truth is it's a brother n sister relationship Suguna too came n hugged sammy for helping kalpi n her friends

Sammy made Kalpi to thank Raghav Kalpi gave her hand to thank Raghav n Raghav placed his hand on Kalpi's both felt some sort of bolt unknown feelin ran through them it was so spl n heavenly both of them greeted hello the moment Raghav heard kalpi's sweet words to him it was like heaven to him it gave him some sort of relief to his heart n the way kalpi called his name was really heavenly n wanted to live in that for ever n kalpi was equally happy n felt the same wen Raghav called her name it was manly yet smooth or say huskily which sent tingles in her stomach soon kalpi n some where kalpi was happy that both her brother n sister likes Raghav n somewhere she know Ayush will also like him kalpi was unware of the feeling that she was going through n y she was happy that sammy suguna n ayush will like raghav
Kalpi asked Raghav that how he knows sammy to which raghav Says that Sammy is his mentor n he works in same company in which sammy works which made kalpi happy n Raghav asked abt kalpi wat she is doing wat her future plans but as kalpi was abt to ans Raghav's que

Suguna got call from Ayush n was worried y they dint come till now this made Raghav lil disappointed n soon all headed to their homes all bid by to all kalpi n Raghav bid bye n both shared a cute lil eye contact both saw same thing in each other eyes a unknown attraction towards each other though both dint wanted to leave but it was late Raghav thought that it was the best day in his life he got to talk to the girl whom he saw morning n was getting attracted to her like magnet n felt the same in kalpi too got opportunity to talk to know abt her mainly her name it was sooo soothing

Ayush came down wen he saw raghav sammy he came there asked how r u guys n asked suguna n kalpi why were they so late suguna narrated the entire situation which made Ayush hug kalpi n thanked Raghav n sammy for helpin n saving Ayush was happy to Raghav that he helped his lil sis n Raghav just said that he did in humanity which made Ayush more happy n felt that Raghav was some where apt for kalpi too kalpi was happy that even her BIL likes Raghav too n saw their bonding too which was rare yet brotherly one n loved that how Raghav got mingled in her family n was talkin to them freely soon all bided byes n goodnight kids were now sleepin sourav who was in kalpi's arm Ayush took him from her n sid in Sammy's arm suguna came forward n all went to their respective homes ayush n suguna placed kids on their bed n all went to sleep in their rooms
Sammy n Raghav got changed n soon they got into their bed but sleep was far away from Raghav's mind he was thinkin abt kalpi his first interaction to her their touch the feelin was different yet sooo heavenly he wanted to know more abt her he thought of asking sammy but kept mum as he dint want any misunderstandings btwn them he wanted to talk to kalpi but he dint have her no; soon he came to know that the maid who comes for them also goes to suguna also he thought he can give his no to kalpi through maid
Precap : will Raghav get kalpi's no or she will ignore it will suguna n all comes to know abt kalpi n raghav n raghav sent his no through her maid wat will b her reaction ?

Edited by kalbhavs - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
aawesome update
its really fab
update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome chappy dear...


Aawww Raghav saved Kalpi... Hero hai tu..
RagNa jealous.. Nice.. M loving it...
Sammy nd Ayush liked raghav.. They thnk of Raghav for kalpi... Aahhhaaa.. Not bad.. Good going Raghav.. Keep it up..
Plz raghav Makhi's bhai ye galti mat kerna... Apna number Maid se kalpi tak pahuchana... Lover boy suicide hai ye... Jo bhai aaj tumko pasand ker rhe hai.. Kal teri band bajayege...


Dear waiting for nxt chappy..
Plz update soon..
Plzzz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update bhavs! Both get the love bite :)) cant wait for rags to find out that the one he is in love with is Sammy's sister woohooo can't wait!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful n sweet update bhavs...finally rags n kalpi knows abt each oder..rags is curious to talk to kalpi n Wat a way to pass his no to her...loved it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part5

Next day Early morning raghav got up n headed to jogging but before going he wrote his number in a piece of paper n some note

Note:

hi kalpana this raghav ur neighbor opposite building this is my number just wanna talk to u if at all u r willing to talk please call me to this number wanna b ur friend n sry if u don't like it plz tear this paper n if I don't get ur call I'll think u don't like to be my friend or talk to me

Regards Raghav Singhania

My no:9999999999(its just a fake no )

He gave it to his maid n said that to give only kalpana not anyother n only wen she is alone maid agreed to it n she completed her work at Raghav's room n was heading towards suguna's house kalpi opened the door n saw their maid she allowed maid to come but maid stopped kalpi n gave kalpi the note that Raghav gave to her kalpi was first shocked why maid was giving such note n asked who gave it at first maid was scared what will kalpana do to her kalpi asked once again to maid that who gave this note to her n maid told kalpi that this note was given by a guy who stays opposite to suguna's house kalpi was thinking who it cud be kalpi asked wats his name maid said she don't know much abt him n doesn't know his name this made kalpi more angry n scolds maid that y she took such note from strangers wen she knew it's not good to take such notes it can be harmful to maid n as well as kalpi too but maid said that that guy is very good mannered he is not like this other guys who try to tease n all n maid asked kalpi to read it then she mite get to know who that person is kalpi does it n sees the note is sent by none other then Raghav kalpi was now tensed n scared to wat will suguna think abt it if she gets to know abt this note which is sent by raghav kalpi said maid to go n do her work she will handle it maid nodded n went from there suguna came asked kalpi wat she was doin at the door she asked kalpi to come n closed the door kalpi hid the note in her hand n went to her room n closed the door n read once again she don't know wat to do how to feel is she shud b happy or angry on Raghav for sending such note through maid wat if suguna di got it wat she will think abt me n jiju wat he gonna say if he got this note kalpi cursed raghav for such recklessness work she really wanted to talk to him she was feeling something towards him but the way he chose was wrong I really need to talk to him wen I go to school for dropping sourav n sid she knew Raghav n sammy go to office during that time only but wat she gonna talk to him wen sammy cud b around them kalpi kept the note in her purse n came out after getting ready for dropping kids to school she called sourav n sid to come as they were getting late for school kids were having breakfast kalpi sat beside them n was feeding sourav as suguna was feeding sid soon they headed out of the house n kalpi saw that raghav too was coming out of his room he too saw kalpi he was happy yet nervous wat she gonna say abt that note which he sent earlier through maid kalpi was at first angry but cudnt stop to smile the way Raghav kept his face he was pouting n she knew raghav wasn't like other guys who will do any harm to her n their must b some reason why he sent that note throught maid soon they meet kids go n hug Raghav n greet him morning raghav plants kissed on their cheeks n greets them too raghav greets kalpi too kalpi asks raghav abt note raghav gets tensed wat he gonna ans to kalpi's que kalpi asks raghav wat was the purpose of sending note through maid is there anything serious she asks but raghav remains mum kalpi stares at raghav for few sec n asks wat happen then says that he wanted to talk to her n wanted to become friend to her that's it then kalpi asks wat is the need of sending note wat if suguna see it or received it or jiju wat they gonna say or thinking abt him to which raghav said I know they gonna hate me for doing such but I was dying to talk to u wanted to listen ur voice or say it was only a friendly request n im sry if I have given tension to that kalpi says its ok but don't so such things again as it mite create problems for him n for her too kalpi smiles n bids bye to raghav

Raghav was now relaxed that kalpi got his number n she wasn't angry on him n liked who she asked wat was the reason this made him fall for her more still he was unaware of this feeling which he felt for her the moment he saw her first he dint know how to proceed future he liked kalpi's company her talks n all mainly her smile which attracted him n her eyes which speaks a lot then words n he dint wanted to ruin that relationship at anycost though it may take time for them to be open up freely n he will wait for that time to arrive in his life raghav called his mother n both had homely talks raghav informed gauri that he was fine n soon he is going to take new house for them so that she can come to him forever with that he ended the call gauri on other hand was sooo happy that her son was growing more in his life n silently prayed to god for more n prayed for best partner for her son who will look after him very well who will shower immense love on her son gauri dint knew that her son has chosen a girl for him even he dint knew that he has fallen for kalpi

Raghav was waiting for sammy to come as they both go together for office though separately but they both go together sammy came out n both headed towards office Raghav's day started with good note his new friend dint yell at him for his actions

Kalpi was returing back from school after dropping kids she was on her way n was thinking abt raghav wat she gonna do n was thinkin to tell abt the note to suguna as she don't like keeping secrets with her sis n ayush n she know both will b angry at first but she gonna convince them that raghav dint do intentionally he just wanted to become friends n he was regretting for sending such with this thinking kalpi came home though lost she came kept her purse in her room n got changed suguna asked wats the matter kalpi says nothing but suguna knows that something was bothering her lil bundle but she dint pressured kalpi to say she knew some way or other kalpi will share her feelings to her she just needs time that's with that suguna went to keep clothes for washing in washing machine her maid dint said anything abt note

Eveing kalpi came down with kids kalpi sat on the bench n was lookin after sid n sourav who were playing kalpi was still lost in her thoughts she dint knew wen suguna n her friends came down n were now sitting beside her kalpi's thoughts were disturbed wen one of her friend sobha waved her hand infront of kalpi sobha asked wats the matter kalpi just smiled n soon her n all started gossiping

It was nearing 7:30 kalpi n suguna saw sammy n raghav to return from office suguna called sammy n raghav towards her both raghav n sammy dint know y suguna called they just went to her n asked wats the matter to which suguna signal them towards kalpi who once again in deep thoughts n was lost somewhere in her thoughts sammy n raghav notice that same but Raghav saw tears formin in kalpi's eyes he dint knew y but felt a sting feeling by seeing kalpi's sad face n he asked wats the matter to suguna he replied nothing just said she was like this since morning raghav dint know wat to n wat cud b the reason that this beautiful girls have tears raghav n sammy approached kalpi the moment kalpi saw sammy she just cudnt stop herself n rushed towards sammy n hugged him tightly n he exactly know y she hugged him so tightly he know that kalpi was missing her parents who left her wen she was small this made sammy sad too he told hugged her back n held tightly n made her calm down n assured that he is there for her forever raghav cudnt see kalpi like that n left from there as he too wanted to calm her but seeing sammy n kalpi together he understood that he wasn't needed there n bid bye to all n kalpi too she just smiled through the embrace of sammy sammy informed raghav that he will come lil later n raghav understood it n went away n promise himself that no matter wat if god blesses him with kalpi being his wife he wudnt let her cry n only he will rock her will not allow anyone to calm her down with that opened the door n went inside n closed n changed n had prepared his dinner n had too

Suguna Ayush n Sammy where sitting in living room n were talking they were waiting for kalpi to come as she said that she wanted to say something wen she came out all were lookin at her wats the matter y she asked us to sit n they were worried for her wat it cud b the reason soon kalpi said that she got a note from Raghav in the morning through maid which made all three angry n shocked sammy n ayush at once got up n were ready to go to raghav n confront wat it but kalpi stopped them n said that she has talked to him n told him not to do such cheap works n raghav was regretting abt it n said that he just wanted to b friends with her that's it then sammy n ayush say that wats the need of sending the note like that to which kalpi says he dint wanted u all to get worried or angry on him by this behavior n he apologized to that to which sammy said though he said sry he shudnt have done it n said that im very angry on raghav n gonna ask him regarding this kalpi gets tensed that wat her brother gonna do n she says sammy that he will not cross his limits (raghav) n just wanted to b friends that's it to which all agree kalpi but somewhere suguna felt that raghav n kalpi have fallen for eachother n she just have to see is it true n kalpi said sry to which three of them says that they were proud of her that she dint hide from them n confronted with them wanted her to b truthful towards like this kalpi was happy n relieved too

Precap: kalpi n raghav first outing
Edited by kalbhavs - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update. I can't wait next update. Next part ragna outing wow.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice waiting for the next update
its awesome
update soon

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