RagNa TS FIRST SIGHT LOVE part 10 pg 16 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: premap

Good story. Keep up.

glad u liked it dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet1308

Awe so nice its so smoothing simple English with a simple and apart idea

Really touching
Waiting for next update soon


tq so such soothin words n glad u liked it dear
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tqn glad u liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Awesome CS
Beautiful starting. I can't wait to read more

tq n glad u liked it dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi dear...

I res ur story now.. nice start plz continue it soon..

byvthe way its ishani n u...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update bhavs...so Sammy n rags r best frds now, waiting for kalpis entry now :)
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oye Bhavs 😃 🤗 what a pleasant surprise sweetie to see a story by you 😃 I could not read first part yet, tied up with my new work. N whatever free time I get, I try to catch up with my own FFs but everytime I fail to complete because by d time I start feeling emotions, my short time is up 😆 Plz forgive me dis time okay? 😳 I'll comment soon, maybe after I update at least one FF I m missing it. 😭
P.S.: I am excited, read CS. Seems different. All d best dear.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chahat4u

Oye Bhavs 😃 🤗 what a pleasant surprise sweetie to see a story by you 😃 I could not read first part yet, tied up with my new work. N whatever free time I get, I try to catch up with my own FFs but everytime I fail to complete because by d time I start feeling emotions, my short time is up 😆 Plz forgive me dis time okay? 😳 I'll comment soon, maybe after I update at least one FF I m missing it. 😭

P.S.: I am excited, read CS. Seems different. All d best dear.😃


that's a huge compliment from u Ashcharu n im eagerly waitin for ur FF's mainly COF n others too n not a prob take ur time to read it n im not good like u n rest of all writers here n will wait for ur wonderful comment on this FF
lotsalove n hugggs dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-2

A Young Dusky Girl got down from train with her aunt who was her father's sister and the moment she got down she was lifted on air as Ayush came n lifted her off her feet as he was happy that his bundle of joy (yes its our kalpana) came n by seeing her brother /BIL kalpi too was happy to see him she felt happy that atleast bappa blessed her Ayush as her bil/brother
Soon Ayush Kalpana n her aunt all exited Railway Station n hired prepaid taxi for goin home kalpana was so happy to see howrah bridge though she saw it many times but every time it seem to b new to her Ayush guided her by tellin some new places which kalpi dint see soon they reached their destination where suguna was eagerly waitin for her younger sis to come the moment kalpana got down from taxi suguna was so happy to her sister after long gap she was amazed to see her lil sis grew up n more beautiful she became her happiness has no bounds by seeing her elder sis kalpana couldn't stop her tears as kalpi treated suguna as her mother after there mother passed away suguna was her only strength n weakness yes kalpi n suguna lost there parents in a accident few yrs ago n kalpi was staying with her aunt in n due to her studies kalpi dint move up with suguna though ayush n suguna insisted her to come with them but kalpi being adamant dint go n completed her studies n both ayush n suguna know how stubborn kalpi is wen it comes to her decision

Next day kalpana woke up early n and was helping suguna in household works she was making kids ready for school n she was going to drop them to school Suguna's kids were very fond of kalpi they like her wen ever she visited Kolkata .As kalpana used to take them out n buy new toys n make delicious food for them which suguna cudnt make like kalpi n this made suguna love totally she loved their bonding

Kalpana n kids were ready to leave for school n and came out to find some rikshaw for going as kids school was nearer so suguna dint hired school van as she likes dropping kids to school by herself they where planning to buy new scooter as it will b easier for both suguna n kids to travel wen ayush isn't at home mostly ayush drops kids on his bike n as he had office early so he cudnt make it n as kalpi came kids were adamant that their aunt shud drop n pick up them from school
Soon they got rikshaw though the distance was less to school both kalpana n kids enjyd there journey kids shared some topics which made kalpi laugh n suddenly kalpana glanced something that came infront of her sight she was amazed to c it asked what's the occasion kids replied it's new year celebration festival so they arrange exhibition every year. Kalpana never came at this time so she was new to this celebrations n was excited to go n njy rides n kids were equally excited to go as their masi has come so they can njy many rides which their parents never allowed so they asked their masi that they will also come with her to have rides in exhibition n she agreed to it as she cant c them sad soon they reached school kalpana bided bye to kids n thought of walkin in return as there house wasn't that far n she wanted to purchase some things so preferred walking as she was walking she saw some beautiful flowers which she never saw n she excited to see it she went to flowers shop n asked wats the name of the flower the vendor said its spl rose with comes durin this time of month that's in the month of april
She purchased it as she wanted to put them on her hair for next day after buyin roses n some groceries she came back home n she wanted to surprise kids by makin puran poli as kids love them a lot n that to wen she makes it though Suguna makes but kids love wen Kalpana makes it hase some spl flavor which kids doesn't find in their mother's. Kalpana prepared puran poli's n was now readin some books as she dint had any works to do suguna came n asked her to come with her as she was goin to meet her friends kalpi was happy that she was goin to attend them as they too became friends to her there frnds were happy to c kalpi as they missed her a lot bcz kalpi is the one who brings smile on their faces n they all loved her company n gives best advises to them which helped some of them a lot may it b studies or any other work kalpi was multitalented she grasps any new thing just like that

After spending time with her frnds bith suguna n kalpi came back home as it was time to bring kids home kalpi got ready n went to pick up kids from school she preferred walkin that's y she went earlier so that kids don't have to wait for while heading to school in the middle of the road kalpi saw one couple fighting n man was abusing his wife for being late n dint bring some money for him to booze this irritated kalpi a lot n she went to the couple n said the man to stop abusing as she threatened him that she was goin to call police if he doesn't stop it this made man scared n immediately stopped n apologized her n his wife n kalpi warned him that if ever he tries to abuse his wife she gonna file case on him this made man more scared n promised her that he wont do anything like that by seeing kalpi's bravery the ppl around there started clapping n praised kalpi for it kalpi glanced her watch n was shocked that how much time was elapsed n she was hurryin up as kids mite b waitin for her soon she rushed to school n saw kids were standing near the gate waitin for her as she reached she asked kids was she late more but kids nodded their head to no as they just came n was waiting for her this made lil relief to kalpi but she still dint like kids waitin even for a sec soon they exited school got rikshaw n came to school as soon as they arrived home the aroma of food drifted to kids nose n was happy that wat their masi prepared for they asked kalpi is it she just nodded her head this made kids jump out of joy they got freshen up suguna served kids puran poli kids njyd it n had some extra too

In the evening kalpi n kids got down to play kids went to play with their frnds n kalpi was just lookin after them as road was just few feet aways though gates were there but kids don't listen so for safety thing kalpi sat on one of the benches that were there soon her frnds to joined her n she was njyn her time


After having wonderful evening suguna informed that Sammy was staying opposite to their aptmnt kalpi was first shocked then later she was sooo excited to meet her only mischievous cousin brother so she said suguna to call Sammy for dinner as she wanted to surprise her brother n she asked suguna that she's goin to make dinner for all but suguna said she prepared some so she asked kalpi to prepare sammy's fav dish mutter panner n carrot halwa Sammy likes it a lot that too only made by kalpi only Suguna called Sammy n informed him to come home for dinner as soon as he comes back Sammy said yes to it n asked wats so spl suguna said y I cant call u for dinner or wat to this Sammy said off course she can with that they ended the call suguna informed the same to kalpi n she was soo happy that after long time she's gonna meet him kalpi finished her cookin n arranging things neatly n after that went to get ready after she got ready they heard door bell Suguna opened up n saw it was Ayush so relaxed as kalpi was hidin n wanted to surprise him suguna narrated wat's going on Ayush was ready for that n joined hand with kalpi as he too love to b mischievous with kalpi n Sammy ,were waitin for Sammy to come soon they all heard door bell kalpi immediately went to one of the rooms to hide Ayush went n opened the door saw Sammy as soon as Sammy saw ayush bent down touched the feet but Ayush dint allow Sammy to do that he immediately took Sammy in brotherly hug n asked to him come in Sammy was abt to sit on one of the couches he felt soft hands wrapping around his waist from back he immediately knew who the owner was soon a name came out from his lips kalpi his happiness has no bounds that after sooo much long gap he saw his bundle of joy his lil packet of happiness his lil sis kalpi Sammy turned around n hugged tightly n kissed her on her forehead kalpi was too happy to see him asked how's he doin for that he said life was till now goin on but from now it will b fantastic all seated on dinning table suguna n kalpi were servin food kids were having fun time with Sammy kalpi served mutter panner n carrot halwa in a bowl immediately Sammy glanced at kalpi n was happy that finally he's gonna taste some yummy food that too prepared by his sis the moment he tasted it he was out of this world n teased her who's ever it b ur husband he gonna b lovin u n will admire her this made kalpi blushin Sammy teased her more n asked he hmm kalpz blushin by hearin hubby's thought kalpi blushed even more n started beating Sammy on his chest lightly all had dinner n soon came to living area n all settled n suguna went to make kids sleep as it was late Sammy kalpi n ayush were chit chattin abt work n all Sammy asked kalpi wat's her next plan kalpi said she was lookin for job in marketin field n asked any opening in his company to this Sammy said at present they don't have but soon they mite n said her that not to worry as their r many companies here so he will help her in it ayush also said that he will ask some of his colleagues abt it Sammy was happy that now kalpi will b stayin here so he can meet her every day but was will lil scared how he's gonna protect her from cruel world kalpi being beautiful girl n this world more bad news being givin abt rapes abduction human trafficking n all this scared Sammy a lot he wanted her to b around him or someone he knows but he dint know that someone was goin to come into her life like a blessing

Precap : RagNa Face to Face
Edited by kalbhavs - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice chappy dear...


So now Kalpi is also in Kolkata..
Kalpi met Sammy... Aaww... I love this Bro sis bond..
Ok to be honest m eagerly waiting for nxt chappy.. Nd u know why.. 😉 .




Plz plz plz update nxt chappy soon..
Waiting,..

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