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Hanz

@Hanz91

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Great OS and keep up the good work!!!

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Princess1398

@Princess1398

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

ok can i just scream coz i just love this anti raghav story i really wish something like this would have happend in the original serial huuummmfff yesa kuch tho hua nahi but that is ok anyway loved it to the core really...

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

I love the way you expresses Kalpi emotions Beautiful OS

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Nice OS Maru..

Ohh!! M still crying.. Mens will b mens.. Bas*** sorry m not anti Raghav but ya that's true.. I thnk 90% mens are same.. Aahhh... I hate thm...

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IThinkALot

@IThinkALot

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: maarushkaa

OK ...lemme be honest !! I was shocked ...like mega mega shocked when I saw 4 lines ... I mean FOUR lines !!! 😲😛😆

Chal at least I do unres 😛 and that is way better than hmesha k liye chamakte rhne wala res. 😆

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Wonderful 👏

Loved d song ...it was appropriate for dis os

Loved d way u portrayed kalpi's emotions

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

"I learned to live half alive
And now you want me one more time"

"You lost the love I loved the most"

Plz Marie you have to cntinue this OS it's not over!!

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Burns n Trolls

@shahsb_26

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

😃😃 Isse Kehte hai... Aise Ko Taisa..!!
Wow! It's beautiful Story... Marushkaa,,,,

Kalpi ne ek thappad nai maara?
Bass.. soch rahi hoon?
CHad... kaun time waste karega... usse marne mein.. jaane de...
woh kaam.. pakya aur vitthal jaise velle logo par hi chod de..!!

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ArthunaAlive

@ArthunaAlive

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Now this is what I call a story with substantive content . Mariee this is the finest chapter of Ragna story and you my dear are a master story teller !!!!!!!! This i is the Kalpi I always wanted to see !!!! You are fine tuning your writing skills with each new story , giving it your own wonderful rhythm . And what a marvellous song !!!!!! Loooved it . Atta girl !!!!!! 👏👍🏼

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Mehr

@mehr05

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

first of all,

🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗 🤗🤗

Hi Mariee!!!!!!

i'm extremely sorry dear, for being sooo late.

and what an OS!!!! 👏 👏 👏

i loved it totally!

this side of Kalpi, God! how i wish we were shown this in the show.

and the first line itself is a big bang! to the mark..."Main majboor hu kalpi ...main majboor hu !!"there's no denying its Raghav's speech. haha, i could almost hear him saying it.

the song u selected is awesome! fabulous!

and the boy!!! a son! with a beep beep dad like this, its good u left the introduction of son-dad unexplored.

i would love to read more on this. its intriguing!

plzzz

lots of love and huge hugs,

mehr 😳 😳