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Posted: 10 years ago
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chapter 8
Pakhi Birthday
Party is on full swing . In her farmhouse she invited almost whole clg specially her class all students all congrats her . Raghav was so nervous as he is going to propse her in front of all just for completing her wish. And he have one more suprise he is selected in interview by jadhav indestries now he able to do his internship under VITTHAL JADHAV her father .
All was busy in their own world and she was busy with her friend . She know very well that her plan not gonna to be flop just looking for him to confess and how is still a suspence.

But she soon get her answer when she hear HIS voice with a mike in his hand and a beautiful boque of flowers in other .
R- attantion everybody

and all attention shift toward him
I want to say something to birthday girl .
When i have not talked with her i always consider her to be an egostick person i want to confess it HONESTLY .
Pakhi make fist in anger at his confesstion
Pakhi I AM SORRY . I came to know when i talked to u how much wrong i was.
U are totally OPPOSITE to what i think . I thought u don't know how to talk with Elders but i was wrong here too u proved it by the way u treat my Mother .
And i an extremely sorry for my all assumptions .
He came in front of her and continue
And I an glad i was wrong

Will u be my partner
He say while extending his hand toward her

Will u be my life partner

Bending on hids knees he say
I LOVE U
and there was total silance in that hall.
He was looking toward her with bright eyes he know that she nvr refuse him

A smile played on her lips
Despite of bending in front of him she cross him and goes to her friends
P- so girls as i always say i never lose any bet .
I won again

Raghav turn to look at her unable to understand anything

R- pakhi what are u saying?
P- bet over
He is on his knees Proposing me in front of whole clg .
Some of them start laughing at Raghav condition and some of them feeling bad for him.
Still unable to digest
He grab her hand
R- what kind of joke is this ?
I know u love me u confessed

P- oh come on Raghav
I don't believe in love in whole world i only love my little sis noe else

He has tears in his eyes
R- u are joking right . U spend ur most precious thing with me that night
Jerking his hand away
P - why are u taking that night seriously ?
"Raat gyi baat gyi "- it's common now a days .
Oh come on do u seriously think i share my whole life with a middle class person like u ??
Who are u??
Nothing
That salary u use to earn by giving tw whole month .
50 times more i spend on my one day shopping .
Come on
Look i know i did wrong .
Ok
I'm sorry
Just forgot what happen
Causing him to humilate in front of all .
Flashback end
...
That memories still fresh in his mind still . But only difference is now he Hate her for using him only for a Bet . For making fun of His & Her mother love . For making fun of her position .
His chain of though broke when he feel Kalpana moving as she was feeling as his whole weight on her .
When his eyes fell on her body and he felt satisfied to trash her .
Whole body of her covered with deep blue & Red marks and surely she was feeling pain in her lower adomnant due to swelling but instead helping her to ease that pain he tighten his grip on her body causing her to stirr even in sleeping condition resting his head on her bosoms in a peacefull sleep .
Mrng came
It's 7 am
Raghav was the first one to wake up why not he afterall he is going to give her schok . That man whom she think didn't deserve her now mist important person of her loving sister life.

He went to bathroom to get ready.
...
Pakhi also wake up early to meet her sister after all from past 2 years she was away from her and now her little sis get married to a person whom identity is unkown to her .
She was soo exited to meet her .
She get up immidatly and freshen up to meet her little sis .
She come to stop at door and it not look good that she directly enter in room she knock it.

P- Kalpi wake up sleeping beauty look here i am
She say while banging door .
She knock 2/3 times but no rply
Kalpi eyes open when continuos banging on door broke her sleep and moreever she was feeling too weak.
She sat on bed with help of one hand to support herself pain was none less .
But hearing her sister voice her mind somewhat divert from her pain
K- di u came back ?
Wait i'm coming .

She get up immidatly feeling pain to rise again but ignoring it she wear her nighty who was throwed by him on floor last night.
Immidatly as soon as possible she open door.
Pakhi immidatly hug kalpi tightly causing kalpi to shut eyes tightly in pain which unintentionally given by pakhi due to marks on her body
P- ohh kalpu i miss u a lot
K- mee too di
Pakhi broke hug in exitment
P- how are u
K- good di but i miss u soo much why u won't attend my wedding ur assingment is more important than me
P- aww , nvr . That's why i came as soon as possible .
and she hug her again
K- aah di
P- what happen kalpu?
K- umm di vo
Her eyes down how she share her with her di
Before she find excuse raghav come and hug Kalpana from behind .

After taking bath Raghav comes out from bathroom in towel only .when he see pakhi hugging Kalpana . Anger rise in him after seeing similar face after 2 long years but their is a difference now He his hand is Upper on her.
To meet her again he goes toward Kalpana when she stuck in answerimg her di and hug her from behind.
Placing a kiss on crook of her neck he wrapped his hand around her waist resting his head on her shoulder he ask innocemtly

R - Kalpana who is she?
Kalpi gulped felling him so close to her that too in front of her di and he is only in towel her cheeks redded and a panick rise with in her

K- R r ag gha v v v vo s shee i iss P pak k kiii d dii.

R- ooh

Pakhi eyes widen in schok seeing her so close to her sister in her home in their home.
...
completed now

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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Really harsh on poor kalpi body
Hmm kalpi shy t say how she is in pain hmm makhi get shocked of her life
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
both the chapters were just fantastic.
😛
waiting for next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Omg bichariii kalpi ...pata nahii raghav ko kab pata chalega about kalpiii
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing Update Neha jaan 🤗 Paakhi Is Such a Witchy Bitchy 😕 I Loved the End A Lot How Raghav Came out surprising the Both Girls,But My Kapu is In pain😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Pakhi was very wrong to play with Raghav feelings
She deserve to be punished but instead Raghav is hurting Kalpi so badly
She didn't do anything wrong with him. I hope he realized his mistake soon
Wonderful update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Nice update dear. Pakhi used Raghav just a sake of a bet 😕.now kalpi is suffering because of it. Finally they are in front of each other
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanx for comments and likes . Sry for delay life is getting hectic don't get time to visit mostly sry for delay . Once again heartly thanx u all for accepting me & story .
ps- feel free to give ur view all kinds of cmnts welcome let me know if i'm unable to do justice .
chapter 9
She was so schoked her first thought is what he is doing in Kalpi room

P- what are u doing here?
Kalpi look confused toward Pakhi
R- i'm sorry ms pakhi
P- Kalpi what he is doing here in ur room.
K- di u know Raghav ??
His position is still same
R- u meet me before ms Pakhi jadhav ??
Giving her a smirk
When understanding drawn into her her Kalpi is Married to Raghav .
P- n n no
K- di u fine?
Kalpi asked worridly
R- kalpana i think she need water .
Kalpi immidatly nodded and goes inside to take a glass of water .
Folding his hands in front of his chest he say
R- are u alright ms pakhi ?
P- what are u doing in my house?
R- oh come on . What a husband do in his wife home . Ur father himself invited us .

P- u here for only me . U want to acheive me that's why u here??

R- ohhh wow ms kapoor . But i love to inform u but I'm no more intrested in u .
P- look
K- di pani

Pakhi stop in middle
R- yes take it u need it.
Pakhi giving a fake smile take glass and drink water .
R- now will u plz leave us alone for sometime ms pakhi .
Before kalpi say anything he pull her inside and close door on pakhi face.
...

Pakhi rushed in her room immidately throwing glass on floor
He back for me i know . He is using kalpi to make me jealous .
He is using her to come back to me .
He still loves me??

2 weeks passes like that only . It's 2 week before any words exchange b/w them . After coming from jadhav mantions days goes same like first day with Kalpana . Daily at night he use her and without a word and only increasing her pain. No one know in Singhania mantion if she eat or not . At dining table they all gather eat & left without even glancing at her . No one know about her if she eat or not if she happy or not .

Kalpana never used of this life she never witness relations like this . She was princess in her house it's not like that she have problem in doing work but it's just they didn't even talk to her . Kalpi always very talktive and never live alone always her aai, baba , di or her friends used to be around her.
But none is here it causing her to strresed .she was scared from dark . Resulting she start avoding her meal . A charpy girl that she used to be 2 weeks before is now turning pale due to her pain & weakness.
Pakhi on other hand when she talk with kalpi and kalpi unknowingly say that Raghav won't talk to her as She start thinking that He don't Like her start creating web in her mind that He Want Her Back in His Life that's why he is behaving like that .
But she can't do anything as she back for only a week and she need to complete her pending assingment .
...

Edited by darkloveriam - 10 years ago
ssna thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Wonderful update
But too short dear .
Plz update big
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
nice dear... but y always dis much short update.. plzzz update d long one...

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