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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: artiodedra2007

Neha if possible plz ap date stone story yar I just loved that story

me too love tat story if possible update stones neha ji
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i was really stuck with something important so don't get time to update story here . Thank for comments and like . and here is nxt part . I
don't expect anything i know it's borring
Chapter 7

It's 4 am around when Pakhi come back to home . She want to meet Kalpana but Kamala refuse her that it does not look good to disturb them as it's late.
Ragna Room

Raghav finally removed his anger on her . He marked her again & again & again . Till till he won't removed his anger on her . Her name remind him HIS INSULT , HER MOTHER INSULT . She hurt His Pride His Ego . He want her on Road .
Giving her pain as much as he can . He was on top of her , her eyes closed due to weakness & pain . Last day marks again start bleeding with new one due to him and her lower body was totally sored. His body rested on her his head on her bosoms . When his mind drifted to his past when pakhi meet her & use him for sake of only a bet.

Flashback
Pakhi and Raghav meet each other during their last year of Graduation . Raghav was topper in every field and Pakhi & Raghav both were classmates. They hardly interect each other in past 2 years as he think Pakhi always think about itself. He belong to a middle class family & got admission on basis of scholarship . He always want to be a big Bussinesman and Vitthal Jadhav is one under whom he want to do his internship . But he nvr give any attantion to Pakhi he know very well she is Vitthal Jadhav daughter . He always think her as a spoilt brat .
Being one of the top bussinesman daughter Pakhi mostly got attantion due to her money & her fathet reputation . She love to win challanges . One day a jeleous girl who always use to roam around her challange Pakhi that if she think she is THE BEST . Then go & win Raghav who nvr give responce to any girl . Make him propose her . In front of whole Clg By hook or by crook.
She take challange on her ego and accepted it .

For sake of completing challange One day she entred in Library whn she come to know he spend most of his Extra time here in Library .

When she found him reading some book . Finding it a Golden chance . She approch toward him abd sat nxt to him .
P- hi Raghav
Raghav didn't notice her first but when she say hi he smile smally and rplied back hi and again start reading .
Finding it difficult to impress her she ask him wheather he help her on study which she know he nvr refuse .
First he was hesitant but after her continuisly requesting he agreed .
Day passes like that so that Pakhi drama and Raghav start beleiving his assumption wrong about Pakhi she is not that bad or spoilt like he think . For make her belive she like him she start visiting his house and behaving nicely with Gauri .
Gauri also believe that she is a sweet girl and with days he start falling for her unknown to her bet .
2 mnths passes like that soon final exams are coming and her frnds start teasing Pakhi that she is gonna lose this bet .
...
( don't kill me after reading i myself like really i myself feeling no emotions like i want to get flashback over as soon as possible. Whole part is rushed sorry)

To stop their teasing pakhi say them that he will definatly propse her on her birthday .
She was tensed how to win bet . She tried her best till now everything which she not like only to WIN bet .
Taking deep breath she decided her next move .
2 days later
2 days pakhi not attand clg not even talked with Raghav .
On other side he was feeling bit uncomfortable due to her sudden dissaperence . Bcoz somewhere he know he start liking her. ( ohh i'm really writing it yuckss )
Pakhi told Raghav to meet her in evening at her farmhouse . As she is not well for studies .
Evening came Raghav reach her farmhouse . Everything went according to her plan . In place of cold drink she spiked his drink making him feel dizzy and somewhat uncoinsiosness.
And finally she unbutton his shirt & her clothes ( abhi understand itself what thry did i'm not gonna write that part sorry )

Morning came Raghav wake up with slight headache and found himself on bed with pakhi in compromising position

He was schoked first but later he remember last night incident how they both cross their boundaries.

3 days thing go too akward with him . But annoyed by his behaviour to win bet pakhi confessed him that SHE LOVE HIM AND WON'T REGRET ANYTHING. And she also know he too love him and if it's true then she want him to confess his love for her in front of all.
He was happy too much happy after hearing her words.
Taking his own time to all that happen he decide that he will confess his love to her that too on her birthday.
...
Hush finish
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepu_kutty

me too love tat story if possible update stones neha ji

i'm writing stones from start but not sure if i update it here😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
its nice...
but because of that Pakhi innocent Kalpi sufferes a lot poor girl...
n What Raghav think to take revenge on Pakhi he use Kalpi Who is only 19 n he is rude with her in all manner..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
omg... pakhi is so yuck... yaar m sorry but plzzz stop this ongoing track n let raghav feel guilty n fall for kalpi asap... this track is reminding me of EMA...i hated dat track wen pakhi traped raghav for sleeping wid her...aaj ka update padhke i went into flashback of dat bloody EMA track... i m feeling very uneasy... plzzz cut short it and start ragna track... but plzzz don't dare to think of discontinuing dis story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Pooki is NASTY as usual ! I feel the update is short and unable to enjoy it . Waiting for next update to enjoy it . Thanks.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Nice update . Pakhi is so cheap for winning t bet she went so low:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pakhi is so cheap for winning t bet she went till this level...hope nothing happened between them(as she had spiked the drink)...waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Whatever happen between tag n pakhi y d hell he drag kalpi in it
She is innocent d same he was innocent before pakhi came in his life.
If pakhi deserves a punisment den rag deserve a big punishment for wat he is doing 2 kalpi.

Well i trust u dear i know u will make rag repend for his deeds.
Lovely update dear but plz make d updates long n quick.

DIL KA MAMLAL HOTAHI AISA HAI
KISIKO SHAITAN THO KISIKO BHAGVAN BNA DETA HAI.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Pakhi is disgusting 😡.
just to win the bet she stooped that low 😕😡😡.
poor kalpi she have to pay for makhi 's deeds 😕.
Raghav is being monster hurting kalpi over and over 😕.
hope some megic occur with kalpi.
awesome update dear. Please continue soon

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