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Posted: 10 years ago
thanx for likes & cmnts

I know u may think her as a fool for forgiving vitthal & kamala for trying to work on mariage again & again on Raghav for forgiving them again . But foolishness is defn of a kind heart now a days . It's easy for us to judge her but her life is not simple as we think . Ask Real value of food who won't get food for days , ask value of life from that person who struugle to take breath . Her condition is simlar to them a fish without water . An orpan who passes some year of her life with no identity & nobody love . How u define her struggle , her insecurity & her pain . But still she love her relations much to let go of them for their happiness . What words define her ?? Fool or stupid? Both are best aren't they??
Raghav actions define what?? Nothing just nothing . Nobody have right to decide our life , u may call her fool who give her life to them !
I want answers of my question does a mistake matter more than anything he/she do for all ?? Just decribe in words how a mistake changes everything about a person ? Does it mean after making a mistake we don't have right to live? We not worthy for friends & relations?
This story is not about revenge , this story is not about her determination . This story is about a Weak girl ( that's what we call a person with kind heart) who goes to any height to make others happy. THIS STORY IS ABOUT A GIRL WHO PUNISHED FOR HER INNOCENCE . Let's for only not define a kind hearted person a fool . She hurt bcoz she love them they hurt her because she didn't utter a word.

2 days pass and her life changed to no extent . Everything just coming to end in 3 months everything . She visit orpange today after whole 2 days she comes out from singhania mantion . She is smiling bcoz sometime it's easy to smile rather than explaning why we are sad?
Kamala & vitthal think everything is fine now b/w Raghav & kalpana . She talked with her aai baba and apologize .
She visit their bcoz she was alone once again ! With thousands of people surround her but none whom she claim as her . She is in that room where she used to live when she was child and she was laying on floor . It's night around 9 and she was tired she allow to stay their as they know kalpana very well and childs love for her . That time kalpana want to live alone just like she use to do when she feel alone & scared searching for warmness that sooth her pain . Like she use to do before she draw a big image of a lady on floor and lay on it thinking that she was hugging her mother and at any time her pain flew away at anytime god blessed her with some drops of love of her mother & father in which figure vitthal & kamala never able to fit. With her heart aching she went into a deep slumber.

On other in singhania mantion

Raghav was awake wide awake unable to concentrate on anything . Thinking how she behave so calm after everything . His mind went back to past 2 days event
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She slapped him .
K- They are my parents !! ( she sobbed)

Their was a silance in that room he didn't utter a word that room only witness her silant sobbing and tears after that 10 minutes passes in whole silance . When he saw guilt in her beautiful eyes when realization drawn into her what just she did ? She slapped him for something he said true but that something hurt her too badly . She take everything but not that anyone say she has no one that they are not her real parents .
She move toward him silantly tracing fingures on his cheek where she slap some minutes before with moist eyes he saw regret in those eyes for hurting him.
K- i i'm ss or ry i i d dinnt mm
R- why u went to jadhav mantion?
Her focus is still on marks that printed on her cheeks due to her
R- u want to be free from me?
K- i n m
Her mind still didn't even registring what he say
K- i diddn ntt m mean to o h
He hold her hand which was on his cheeks gaining her attantion
R- u wanna to be free ? I'm giving u persmission
K- i is iit h hurtiting
( she still talking about pain she give her)

Closing his eyes in frustation
He hold her face close to his when he saw she was scared and nervous

R- i'm going to free u from this relation .
U are free now. U have no need to live in this relation .
She didn't utter a word she was looking toward him without blinking her eyelids

R- are u listning me u are going to be free from me .

She give him a small smile .
K- it's late i need to go and ask for apology .
After that she left giving him a smile from their .

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Posted: 10 years ago
Kalpi is an 'innocent as a new born babe ' ! All sh wants is a drop of 'love' in her lonely life ,as an orphan. No wonder she is attached to Vitthal and Kamala ! Lovely update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hii neha it's really very emotional update...I know.in today's world fool or stupid are similar name of.kind people.. I never judge this story on that Coz if being kind.. Being d person who hive forgiveness to everyone for making relation for maintaining it than I'm d one of d biggest fool of this world so I always respect that character who let.go her self respect for relations and kalpi is one of dem...raghav was talking about divorce but still her all attention was on his pain..but still he got irritate by her...why this world always irritate from kind soul..why they can't see pain in n her eyes for themselves raghav is one of them..who can't see her concern her love for him..even he can't see the feelings which is slowly developing on his heart for her...
Continue soon neha...waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Emotional part a girl who is as pure as innocent as an angel
And what she want only true relations
but she has no one whom she called
her very touchy
update next part soon neha
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow neha superb update
Love u dwar for d big update
So kalpi is a weak grl with a strong heart or a strong grl with a big heart .
I just loved d update .

Now d main part how rag will take revenge frm pakhi.
How ragna will unite n how.our angle kalpi will get d love she deserve.
So many question n only few part r pending eagerly waiting how u slove d stort.
Loved it
Keep updating
Big updating
Fast updating.
Bye dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice name to d story... n nice part. I don't know wen raghav gonna realize his feelings for kalpi...n how will he take revenge from pakhi. ...lets hope ragna don't get divorce ever...keep updating dear. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Neha today is sunday if possible for u then give us a lonnng update 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update .how kalpi will be suffer and whoes gonna help her .she alone now .where is ragna .
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanx for likes & comments
sunny here i added explaination & swati i added kalpi pov's too . But i'm really very angry on u all .
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Flashback cointue
She just left giving him a small smile . Not for once looking back . Till now he understand her that she is nothing more than a child . When he say that he will free her then for once surely she break. She will cry . But no nothing happened like that . Little did he know that she is broken completely in depth of darkness again.
Kalpi come back late that night he want to question her but he have no rights to do so . He just handover her papers and she sign it without protesting . Then she walk toward bed and take a pillow and bed sheet without uttering a word she went to lay on floor to get some sleep . He just look toward her...
Nxt day is not too different she behaved calmly but not helped him in anything just busy in households .
Flashback end
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He was frustated she is behaving so calmly like nothing happen . I know i did wrong in past but now i'm letting her go in 3 mnths she will be free from me.
R- it's late how she is so careless? Leave it let her do what she want .
But nxt moment he pick up his car keys and went to take her he know she doesn't went to jadhav mantion so where left??
And his immidatly got his answer in orpahnage .
And he drive toward her assuring himself that he did wrong with her and she is his responsibilty till 3 months . And till 3 months he need to behave like perfect husband & wife as soon he going to destroy jadhav's .
...
They allow him to enter orpanage & talk to kalpana as he is her husband.
Warden guide him to her room
When he approch inside that room he see her sleeping on floor inside figure which she drawn from chalk but he didn't understand what is it .
He was confused
R- why she is sleeping on floor? And that too
W- that too on image?
She smile smally
W- it's her old habbit since childhood .
R- means??
(He frowned)
W- whenever kalpi use to feel alone
R- kalpi???
W- don't u know everyone call her kalpi whom close to her .
R- vo i
He don't know how to told that warden that he didn't know amything about her
R- vo
W- i understand u are just married When ever kalpi miss her parents or feel alone she use to make sketch on floor . Thinking her as her mother she put her head on her lap and drifted to sleep thinking she got her mother back .
Raghav was speechless for some moments he didn't know she is so sensetive .
He walk toward her sitting beside her
R- kalpana
( he say softly for once)
Kalpana just switch her position .
R- kalpana get up
( he say somewhat loud tone that before)
But she cover her ears with pillow as someone disturbing her sleep .
Now he didn't give a second thought to his actions and scope her in his arms causing her to come out from her dreams .
As she open her eyes and see him her first thought was she is dreaming .
But when he start moving toward door then she realize she is not dreaming but he is actually here.
She immidatly protest
K- what are u doing here?
R- we are going home !!
K- no i want to stay here
R- and who are u to decide that?
K- and who are u to decide where i live? If u forgot than we are no more husband & wife . So u may leave now .
and she again start protesting
But he held her more tightly
R- and let me remind u we are not divorced till yet . After 3 mnths i won't stop u till u are my responsiblity !!
K- leave me i'm not coming she say while protesting .
R- i don't need ur persmission

"what he want now? Why not leaving me alone ? He is going to free why he not leaving me ? Why he come here ? I want to leave alone . I can't tie him forcefully to me i love him enough to let him go for his happiness . Just leave now plz before it pains more before i got used of ur this stubboeness. I don't cry now , i don't wanna show him i love him " she think
Ignoring her antics & protest he take her to singhania mantion in their room and put her on bed ! She was angered on him for talking her to singhania mantion against her will
She was about to get up to lay on floir but before she do this he hold her tightly by waisr blocking her body to move resting his head on her bossoms he drifted to sleep ignoring her struggles.
He was too strong for her to win after trying half hour she finally accepted defted and sleep on same position.
...
Both unaware from the fact that Pakhi jadhav coming back in their life
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome neha
finally rag came t know a bit of kalpi
hope the divorce never happens
update soon
makhi coming😲

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