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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi ! Neha, you should be proud of your writing talent! A 10th std student enjoys and appreciates them. Pull up your collar and continue please ! Thanks.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Neha dear complete this soon. Eagerly waiting to know how will kalpi react if she finds out the truth of their marriage
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for likes and comments here is completed part

It's morning
and sleep was far away from his eyes . Whole night passes like that . He don't know what he do now??
He can't destroy her further now !! But what he will do ? What now?
He married her for revenge but now what? Everything went blank!!
He free his arm from her hold very carefully so that she won't wake up.
He started her blankly for some time . Before taking his cell from table & dialing his lawyer no to ready divorce papers.
He is going to free her from his cage she didn't derserve to be used she didn't .
Closing door slowly he went down stairs where Gauri & Sammy with maya waiting for him , sammy was now aware very well from kalpana past .
S- what now bhai?
After a silance of some minutes he say
R- i'll free her !
Gauri eyes widen
G- are u mad Raghav ?
U can't just leave her like that in middle she is ur wife!
R- i know but i marry her for sake of revenge only . How she able to survive?
U witnessed yesterday mom how she beg mr jadhav to let her free he bcoz she think i'm not happy.
G- so just tell me Raghav what after that??
Then what? Do u think mr jadhav accept her then? U himself witnessed how he push her outside .
R- i don't know but i just know she will get nothing in this marriage .
G- Rag
R- mom she is about to wake up ask cook to make something healthy for her .
Saying so he sit on dining table.
( CONTINUED)
...
Some time later
Kalpi open her eyes slowly blinking . Trying to register where she last thing she know that she was outside jadhav mantion. For some seconds she become happy that vitthal & kamala take her inside and she was in her room . But soon her happiness vanished when she register it is not her it's their room .
Who take her here ? Baba ? He must be angry on me i need to talk to him . I hurt him with this she immidatly get up to step out of bed when their room door open .
As raghav came inside he saw her awake & panicked.
He step inside and ask servent to put food on table .
After putting food on table that servent left.
Leaving them alone their was a awkward silance . He didn't say a word as he don't know reddem his sins & she think that baba must call him to take her back. She was angry on him .
She get up from bed and walk toward door but before she leave he hold her hand .
Their faces in oppsite directions their back were facing each other.
R- where are u going u are not well come and have some food.
She fumed
K- i don't want to eat
( for the first time he notice stubborness in her voice)
R- u need to eat something .
K- u don't need to worry . I need to talk to baba. He must be angry i need to talk to him.
But his grip tighten by mention of vitthal words .
R- u are not going anywhere .
Come and eat
She turn to face him
K- i'm going to meet him . U are bad why u take me here . Baba is hurt bcoz of me . Leave me i need to talk with him i need to say sorry . Why u took me here i know baba told u to take me .
He hold her by shoulders pulling her close to himself
R- ur baba is hurt?? Are u mad? He is the one who throw u out ? He is the one who shut door on ur face ?
U are the one who got uncoinsiousness after continue bangging door and u say he is hurt? ARE U MAD??
He don't love u !!
She was equally angry he is abusing her baba
K- shut up!!!
He loves me do u understand . He has right to be angry on me . They are my parents .
R- if they are ur parents then they won't throw u out that too late night.
K- they have every right to do so . They give me life and they have right to take away .
R- kalpana u are mad . Why are u not understanding they just adopt u they are not ur Real pare...
and the next thing she did he can't believ it . She slapped him as he say vitthal & kamala are not her real parents.
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Hush finish
Sry dearies my mom is not well she caught up with stomach infection so bcoz of that this delay
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: GUYCAN

im first 😆

After you😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Neha
Y always u give such a short update when der a grt part come of yourstory u justend it in no time.
Sorry but i m too disappointed becoz your update r becoming too shot its seem like we r not reading d update but a quick short prolong .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update Neha. Kalpi is an angel. She is still thinking about her baba. Raghav is repenting for his sins. He wants to divorce her so can be free from his cage.
She slapped Raghav. He deserves lot more. Please continue soon dear.

And take care of your mom.
Edited by riaka - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh teri thappad.. are baap re raghav ki to baja di kalpi ne...ab raghu baba kya karenge...divorce denge ya shadi continue karenge... nice update dear ... keep updating n take care of aunty...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update Neha
Raghav told her truth but Kalpi slapped him
What he do next???
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
2ariahi neha amazing update dear love raghav caring for kalpi and love ur ff other stories plz update those stories also and take care of ur mom love u neha 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aahana123

2ariahi neha amazing update dear love raghav caring for kalpi and love ur ff other stories plz update those stories also and take care of ur mom love u neha 😳

sry but it's not possible to put them here atlest . I got many chappy back of my stories but i'm discconted with all . I'll try to work on them like ways etc. If it happen in futute i'll inform all my blog adress . Till enjoy this one

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