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Posted: 10 years ago
Waiting for update neha...plz update soon..can't wait after this twist...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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chapter 13
He was feeling numb for a moment his eyes again meet her brown eyes once more
His mind drifted in only one direction
Words ringing in his ears only "bhabhi send divorce papers".
Some moments pass by and none of them say or look anywhere just to each other .
Both have different emotions different reasons
They comes out of their world when a girl approx 3 yrs hold kalpana hand
G- di come na why u stop
Kalpana nodded
But before she say anything that girl hold her hand and take her when kalpana turn to look at Raghav we was not their
K- he left
She say in sad voice.
..
Half hour later
He left from their leaving her behind alone again and reach singhania mention where Sammy was already their and also inform Gauri & Maya about Divorce . Before Gauri / Sammy say somethimg he grab divorce paper from sammy hands & went inside his room shutting door.
Unable to understand why she did this?
He is sure she is like her sister then why she is leaving him?
His mind answer him SHE IS PRETENDING but something he himself unable to believe that excuse which his mind give him .
Frustated by her desicion he in his anger throw vase on ground causing it to break in peices.
R- SHE CAN'T DO IT
Gripping his hairs by his hands he look at his reflection in mirror .
R- She is pretending ONLY. I know.
With this he grab a perfume bottle and throw it on mirror
R- i'll not let this happen
With that he start throwing all things .
An hour pass by Raghav was still in his room and Gauri , Sammy & Maya worried for him but none dare to talk to him.
Kalpana reach singhania mantion an hour later . Gauri , sammy & maya watch her sadly none able to utter a single word .
Kalpana was nervous damn nervous
K- i i'mm ss o rry ii n eedd tt o i inff o orrm u a aal b bef f oore g gooin ng.
Gauri just nodded
And kalpi went from their to his room.
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In Ragna room
Kalpi open door slowly too nervous to meet him
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Wheh she open door she was schoked & scared when she saw room condition . All was brokek vase , mirror and what not .
When her eyes fall on him a bear bottle in his hand and he was sitting on couch , his eyes was closed .
His palm was bleeding due to small mirror pieces that injured his hand
K- Raghav
A soft whisper leave from her mouth when she see his bleeding hand .
She immidatly step beside him and sat near couch taking his hand in her.
He open his eyes when he feel someone soft touch on his hand when his eyes fell on her .
She was so worried for him that failed to notice his eyes who were totally red due to anger & sadness .
He notice her eyes that was moist now
K- i it t's b blle diin ng
She was panicked & nervous and he immidatly jerk her hand away
K- it's bleeding Raghav u need first aid.
She just stand to take first aid box but her feet froze when he throw bear bottle on ground causing it too broke into piece

K- R ra gha v
Before she say something he grab her hand and pull her toward himself . His bleeding hand rest on her waist
K- i it's b b lled iing llet mme

R- why?
( he cut her in middle)
K- i it's b b lled iing
Her whole attantion on his wounded hand
R- what is this??
( he show her divorce paper and ask in a dangerosly cold voice that's when her attation went to him)
K- f fir sst l let mme
R- i want my answer
K- r raghav
Pulling her more into himself if possible
R- WHY??
K- i ddon't want to be burden on u
and a tear fell from her eyes .
K- u love someone else . I don't u why u marry me , but u are free if u suffocated in this marriage . I know u are not happy .
I'll not stop u
If u want to go back to her then
R- who are u ??
She stop and look at her
R- WHO ARE U TO DECIDE THIS ??
His grip losses on her waist
U wanna free me?
He chuckles and immidatly he pull her in him again
K- aah
R- who are u to send me to that woman .
R-i Was in love with her & now i hate her most UNDERSTAND
K- Raa ghav
R- who are u ?
Who decide to leave me?
K- just for ur happines
R- and u are none to decide this.
He jerk her away
Taking divorce paper again he tore them
and she look at him dumbfolded
R- I WON'T LET U GO EVEN IF U WANT IT UNDERSTAND.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice but i think story is going too slow. i mean its 13 chapters n nothing imp.has happened till now n always small chappies...
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update neha when stone heart raghv gonna understand klapi and her love she is innoecent why he is not seeing that in her eye .plesase raghav come back before its too late
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update neha😳
raghav is restless aftr knwing that kalpi want divorce..😊
loved that he'l nt alw her to leave him...nw i'm sure he loves her bt he himslf nt knw😔
pls update nxt part soon dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great story. You are putting us through the 'Stress Mill ' [ Treadmill ] with rather short and slow progress of the story ! Sorry, but please give a 'solid update ' . Thanks for your time.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome dear..
pls give bit long chapters... greedy me...
will wait for next...
let me see kalpi's reaction..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update. Waiting to see when rags will have change of heart and realize kalpis innocence. I wiukd like to see rags get jealous and another guy crush on kalpi. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
Hope raghav understand kalpi...
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
i know many of u are not happy with short update but
i'm unable to give long once as i hardly get time forgolive me
for dissapointing u all .
thanx for likes & cmnts

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