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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg kalpi is orphan. Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. Finally she opened her mouth. Gaury relised that kalpi is innocent but Raghav is not giving up yet. Please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
PLEZ DEAR...PLEZ CNTINUE UR AMAZING UPDATE...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Your update was fascinating. Kalpi , an orphan ! This explains her 'timid nature, stammers and trying to please Rags , inspite of his brutality ! Great update. waiting for next eagerly.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Amazing
Kalpi is an orphan...
What will happen next
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanx for likes & cmnts
chapter12

It's 11 in mrng
Raghav get up with a slight headache . When he remember last night incident how calmly she answer him that she went to frnd and then she told she went to orpange and after that he fall asleep on her.
His eyes then fell on watch it's atmost 11 .
R- bcoz of her stupid drama i am late and she didn't even bother to wake me up . Now she need to give answers.
R- kalpana
( he shout)
But none come
He get up and check bathroom but it was empty .
He went outside his room
R- kalpana
Gauri came after hearing his voice
G- Raghav she must be in ur room
R- mom she is not inside that's why i'm calling her.
G- but beta i'm here from past 2 hrs and she is not here.
He call watchman to ask if kalpana went outside to which that watchman rplied in mrng around 8 she went outside without taking car
R- she again went!!
G- but
Before Gauri say something he went inside room shutting door with a thud
...
R- how dare she leave again without informing anyone what she think up of herself.
He take his cell and dial her no. when he hear her phone ringing in room itself.
R- damn it she just trying to gain attantion .
He dismissed her thoughts for some minutes and went to washroom to get ready for office he is already running late and with each passing minutes his anger reaching a new level.
Half an hour pass by but still her no clue .
R- what she think up of herself . I care for her just go to hell . It make no difference if she live or die i just want to hurt her sister .
After getting ready he went downstairs for lunch .
G- Raghav u need to call her . Yesterday also sge left.
R- mom what the hell is this are cooks not even able to cook food proprrly.
Saying so he push his plate causing book to fall ok ground

G- Raghav
R- i need to go
...
He come outside taking a deep breath take his phone and dial a no
R- i'm giving only 1 hour to u . U need to find Kalpana .
Saying so he cut call and went to office.
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An hour later

Tring tring tring t..
and he attand call immidatly
M- sir mam is in an orphanage
R- which one??
and he nodded understanding drawing within him when he remember her words
"i went to orphanage
R- u are lying
K- i'm not lying"
R- no she is just pretending she just want attantion .
But without thinking about his actions further he grab his car keys and went toward orphanage.
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Some minutes later
He was standing on gate of orphanage when he finally see her. Closing his eyes as he felt piece inside him . His eyes open when he hear her laughing voice she was jumping with some kids . Laughing with them mixed with them .
She laughter stop immidatly when her eyes fell on him who was standing looking at her .
Before he take a step toward her his phone ring again . Sammy name flash on screen he pick sammy call
S- bhai bad news bhabhi sent divorce papers to u . She want divorce from u and his further word fell on Raghav deaf ears and he don't know when phone slip from his hand
Words ringing in his ears only "bhabhi send divorce papers".

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Posted: 10 years ago
Very interesting!!! Surprising update😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb neha but its too short i love this story its near my heart and i want read more sorry
kalpi send divorce paper to raghav and now what will raghv do
Please one more update
Edited by rachufan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear 👏
eagerly waiting for next chappy😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice dear.. but y always dis chotu sa update...make it bit looonnnggg yaar...

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