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smriti dubey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: switymango

Aww kalpi want raghav so badly😉😳..y raghav is doing this...
Superb update. ..but little confused. ...
what ..y ..n so many questions. ...

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smriti dubey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: switymango

Aww kalpi want raghav so badly😉😳..y raghav is doing this...
Superb update. ..but little confused. ...
what ..y ..n so many questions. ...

hey 😊
Raghav is litlle dark and mysterious in my story . He loves kalpi but is unaware of his feelings same is with kalpi.the ladi who has not taken any entry is just a part of his dark world.

I know , I have made my story confusing still in upcoming chapter I will reveal of why she is in newyork with him rather than with her family who stays in India 😊
Have faith

Love
Smriti

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riaka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Nice update. Raghav effects kalpi so much. She don't love him but she wants to feel him😳.Raghav kissing her like hungry bird and then pushed her away. He is caring too. Let see what happens when they stay under one roof.please update Soon

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smriti dubey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: riaka
Nice update. Raghav effects kalpi so much. She don't love him but she wants to feel him😳.Raghav kissing her like hungry bird and then pushed her away. He is caring too. Let see what happens when they stay under one roof.please update Soon

Thank you 😊
I m really obliged that you liked my story 😃 😃
Seriously, at a point of time I was thinking that i m unable to write what I m feeling 😭 and thought of stopping my story.
Anyways thanks
Will update soon
Love
Smriti

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kinnapatel

@kinnapatel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

😊beautiful update next one please .

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Saumya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

superb update dear.. RagNa again kissed... Dear m waiting for nxt chappy... Update soon.. Plzz

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gargdia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

OMG!!! What a update darling 👏
raghav is like a mystry man for me nw...n kalpi,she is too funny bt naive too...😆
you portrayd so many sides of kalpi in this chaptr...
The way she went into raghav's cabin,she was so confidnt...and raghav shout on her,her Subconcious mind😆...MR. Memorize me,u Moron but Excelnt Kisser... 👏
what is the agrement thy signd?
N what hpnd to kalpi's parent tht she askd help frm raghav?
Insult that is hot..lol...i love dis kalpi😳
raghav kissd her like a hungry man bt turnd bck suddlny whicf left kalpi to think that he reject her again...but y is he cntrolng himslf?

Screams,painful screams afct raghav in anthr way,how?
First he made her cry n thn cnsolng her as a baby.,.i was rit,he is a mystry man totaly

kalpi dnt love him bt wanna near him,want his touch,...😳who is that lady n what is the link b/w her n kalpi?
So many questions bt i lyk ur story...cntinue dear...update nxt part soon.😊
Wanna knw abt dt lady.

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smriti dubey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: gargdia
OMG!!! What a update darling 👏
raghav is like a mystry man for me nw...n kalpi,she is too funny bt naive too...😆
you portrayd so many sides of kalpi in this chaptr...
The way she went into raghav's cabin,she was so confidnt...and raghav shout on her,her Subconcious mind😆...MR. Memorize me,u Moron but Excelnt Kisser... 👏
what is the agrement thy signd?
N what hpnd to kalpi's parent tht she askd help frm raghav?
Insult that is hot..lol...i love dis kalpi😳
raghav kissd her like a hungry man bt turnd bck suddlny whicf left kalpi to think that he reject her again...but y is he cntrolng himslf?

Screams,painful screams afct raghav in anthr way,how?
First he made her cry n thn cnsolng her as a baby.,.i was rit,he is a mystry man totaly

kalpi dnt love him bt wanna near him,want his touch,...😳who is that lady n what is the link b/w her n kalpi?
So many questions bt i lyk ur story...cntinue dear...update nxt part soon.😊
Wanna knw abt dt lady.

hey gargdia 😊

thank you 😳😳

yaahhh... Raghav is living a mystery life which kalpi is unaware of... she consider it as a rejection.

she is so self concious that she is not able to understand raghav's condition

my next chapter will be focused of raghav and kalpi's aggrement and why she left her countryt and came with him.

actually the mystery lady is just a part of raghav's life and wil appear from next to next chapters.

actually I m writting the story only on kalpi's point of way !! so cannot express what raghav is thinking .

and above all I m not at all a good writer , thats why my story is confussing many people here.

but I m glad u liked it.

I will try my best to clear some confusions in my up coming chapters.😳😳

thank you soo very much

love

smriti

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smriti dubey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
superb update dear.. RagNa again kissed... Dear m waiting for nxt chappy... Update soon.. Plzz

heyaaa 😃😃

I have started writing my chapter today. so will update on sunday or monday. since, I want to improve my writing skill... I really dont want to rush in updating.

earlier my prime focus was updating fast and fast which resulted in presenting a confusing story all together.

hence ... This time I want to think more and then update😆

heheheeheh😃

love you

smriti