A face in the clouds ( RagNa SS) AUTHOR'S NOTE PG 37 - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome chappy Vidu di.. Wow RagNa dating.. Nd kalpi's bro will meet Rags.. Wow nice.. Dear m waiting for nxt chappy... Plz update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
speechless wonderful cute sweet lovely beautiful everything 👏
Raghav told her that he want to want to date her very good beta
dont worry kalpi he will never hurt u for u he came on earth and doing very hard work
he is the bestest raghav 😳
And our earth angel kalpi she didnot want to hide antthing from him
i love her honesty
So both are angels and deserve each other
oh my god raghav's texting i m still laughing 😆
kalpi is sooo sweet she tell everything to her brother about raghav
so now time for raglok meeting
please update soon u know i m mathmatics student so i m very poor in expressing my feeling
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow awesome story sweetie 👏👏👏 loved it!



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet1308

awesome update thor😉

god rag is so perfect my perfect angel
the kindness in him sincerity t which each line is said
kalpi narrate her past another bas***d 😡 he deserved t get a kick
hmm rag finally got t date kalpi
hmm kalpi eagerness t go t the summer jam😃 rag drive slowly n make her reach home safely
hmm kalpi smiling at rag antics
god the big bro concerned the perfect piece t complete the update
update soon


Thank youu sweetu. Glad you enjoyed the update. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ssna

Loved d update dear
But wat will be d twist in dis.
Its a gud going love stort n with no negative point.
Even kalpi brother is happy.
I m eagerly waiting for d twist in der love story.
Update soon


Thank youu. 😊 No negative point really? In chapter 3 one of the biggest negative points and twists was presented there. 😛 This story is not going to have a family member or friend trying to tear the couple apart. We see enough of that in indian soaps. This is a supernatural/ thriller story so its going to be a bit different.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nikkiarora093

woww. i read all 4 parts in one go... firstly it was difficult to understand but slowly slowly i was getting into it...nice story dear...plzzz update soon n also update Lion n the panther...


Thank you! 😊 And it yeah it does take a while to get into the groove of things and understand what is going on. That is why I am trying to post regular update to create a solid foundation. 😊 I will update lion and the panther after thursday. One of our thunderbrats is a bit busy and I don't want them to be left behind since the person is usually a consistent reader. So I decided to delay the update in that a bit since it's only about a few chaps remaining before it finishes, so that the thunderbrat can catch up. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Appuu_AshLover

Vidsss A biggg huggg to you 🤗 Amazing story Thank God for popping this awesome story into ur brain 😃
OMG Raghav is Angel 😲 😳 Kalpi met with an accident n when she's about to lose her lyf but Raghav didn't allowed it to happen.. He saw the innocence in her eyes n he felt that she deserve to live more days.. n Kalpi heart started beating normally...He's so attracted to her n felt a strange connection with her that he didn't left her side from that day.. loved it when he kept his hand on her n she immediately felt peace.. she can feel him 😉 Ohh Angel became a stalker of his lady love 😛 so he left immortality n wanted to feel everything.. He wanted to be with her care for her held her close to him etc n it can only b done if he's human.. so he sacrificed his identity fr Kalpi n living a normal lyf.. loved it when he's working hard fr himself to settle well.. So finally he met her at the supermarket glad n she immediately asked him whether they met before or not!! Connection 😳 she can't forget that day wat she saw in her dream that intense gaze..
He bought cereal but forgot milk 😆 Aww they went to coffee shop n chatted fr sometime.. loved it he managed to speak truth somewhat like he has come far away place.. They decided to meet ..Raghav didn't have mobile Lol he bought one n it's tough task fr him to learn about that device.. This Angel Raghav s so so cute
Someone s following kalpi 😲 They found Angel scent in coffee shop n thought Kalpi was the one aa she's the regular customer there.. he followed her till she reached her home n somewat understood that she's mortal.. who's the other person talking to him ??seems Raghav going to b in danger..
Raghav has been promoted n his boss teasing him whether he has a girlfriend or not n Raghav blushing 😆 he followed his boss suggestions by bringing chocolates n flowers fr her.. how cute he don't know which color so he brought all colors 😃 finally Kalpi reached there after searching every parks as they didn't decided whr to meet 😆 Raghav asking her to b his date lovely 🤪

Kalpi want to accept but her past s,making her to deny n loved it when Raghav said those words that he'll never hurt her rather he prefer to die n he don't want to know about her past which will not change his decisions.. But Kalpi felt she has to say OMG that armaan s so stupid 😡 he didn't respect her at all he looked after her as if she's a trash 😡 n he slapped her also idiot..glad that she broke off that relationship he's not worthy of her like Raghav said.. n she accepted him Woww.. The way their fingers intertwined with each other Raghav s feeling immense happiness..
He went to bring popcorn for her n a small boy recognized him as an Angel 😲 n Raghav just smiling at the child's innocence as he s going to forget him later.. He ordered rainbow corn Wat a coincidence it's kalpi's fav.. so they are leaving to home as it's getting darker n the scene in the car was very good.. Raghav drove slowly fr safety n kalpi teasimg him finally he did it he put her locks behind her ear as he wanted to do this from so long 😳 she told him to cal Kalpi n asked his nick name he said "Mr Darcy "how cute..

Lol message conversation made me 🤣 🤣 Raghav was taking so long time to type n he doesn't know how to insert Smileys.. Kalpi can't stop laughing n alok s observing her 😆 she told alok about her dating with Raghav n he accepted her decision as he understood she's very happy..
I love this Raghav shooo much wanna pull his cheeks kiss him n hug him he's too innocent 😳
Update soon my darling 😛


APPUUU I MISSED YOUR ESSAYS! 😆 Awww as usual it was a pleasure reading what you had to say and I am glad you are enjoying this story as well. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you Nandini.
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Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

awesome chappy Vidu di.. Wow RagNa dating.. Nd kalpi's bro will meet Rags.. Wow nice.. Dear m waiting for nxt chappy... Plz update soon..


Thanks Brickyyy 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rachufan

speechless wonderful cute sweet lovely beautiful everything 👏
Raghav told her that he want to want to date her very good beta
dont worry kalpi he will never hurt u for u he came on earth and doing very hard work
he is the bestest raghav 😳
And our earth angel kalpi she didnot want to hide antthing from him
i love her honesty
So both are angels and deserve each other
oh my god raghav's texting i m still laughing 😆
kalpi is sooo sweet she tell everything to her brother about raghav
so now time for raglok meeting
please update soon u know i m mathmatics student so i m very poor in expressing my feeling


Thanks Rachu!! 😊 Omg you are a maths student. Maths was my most challenging subject. To this day I even avoid counting my change when I buy something just to avoid doing the maths. 😆 I was more of a literature student. 😆
Edited by Asgard_Nim - 10 years ago

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