A face in the clouds ( RagNa SS) AUTHOR'S NOTE PG 37 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: rachufan

Now for me u r raghav( ur stories) .i am in love with raghav
wow what a concept u " MAAR DALA"
I m speechless raghav an angel
Who came from heaven for his lady love most beautiful feeling how much he love her
for her he left his world
he is so innocent so cute
their date was awesome
I was not there so didnot know u start a unique story
@therwise i m ur regular patient u r my docter
whenever i read ur work i feel extreme peace and happiness in my heart
thanku sooo much
update soon ur patient 's condition critical


RACHUUU!!! 🤗Missed youuu. Glad you are enjoying this story as well. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: kalbhavs

dear just yest came to knw abt ur another ff called in a heartbeat its awesome though v dont have ragna there but loved thier children kaashvi n rishav role there n plzz complete it na waitin for chappy 28 n more to b updated plzzz

sorry if im bothering u more with my requests
love n huggg


I am still trying to get in the mindframe of reconnecting with those characters again to continue that story. When the vibe hits me I will post an update. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

awesome chappy Vidu Di... Nice.. Plz update nxt chappy soon...


Thanks Bricky! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Appuu_AshLover

Oh My My need story 😳
U broke ur rule 😛 it happens
Well I'll comment soon 😃


APPU!!!!!!!! I MISSED YOU!!! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
awesome update thor😉
god rag is so perfect my perfect angel
the kindness in him sincerity t which each line is said
kalpi narrate her past another bas***d 😡 he deserved t get a kick
hmm rag finally got t date kalpi
hmm kalpi eagerness t go t the summer jam😃 rag drive slowly n make her reach home safely
hmm kalpi smiling at rag antics
god the big bro concerned the perfect piece t complete the update
update soon
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Loved d update dear
But wat will be d twist in dis.
Its a gud going love stort n with no negative point.
Even kalpi brother is happy.
I m eagerly waiting for d twist in der love story.
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
woww. i read all 4 parts in one go... firstly it was difficult to understand but slowly slowly i was getting into it...nice story dear...plzzz update soon n also update Lion n the panther...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asgard_Nim


Thanks Bhavna! Glad you are liking this story tooo. 😊



hi vidya wat do im getting addicted to ur stories aapne meri raaton ki neend din ka chain chura liya aapke kahaniyon se
bas aap yunhi likhthe rahe aur hum padthe rahe sharmathe rahe humare ragna ke pyar mein
lovee n huggg vidya
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asgard_Nim


I am still trying to get in the mindframe of reconnecting with those characters again to continue that story. When the vibe hits me I will post an update. 😊



glad to hear that ur goin to think abt n will b eagerly waitin for that fine day to come soon n soon those vibes hits u n u continue writin it

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Posted: 10 years ago
Vidsss A biggg huggg to you 🤗 Amazing story Thank God for popping this awesome story into ur brain 😃
OMG Raghav is Angel 😲 😳 Kalpi met with an accident n when she's about to lose her lyf but Raghav didn't allowed it to happen.. He saw the innocence in her eyes n he felt that she deserve to live more days.. n Kalpi heart started beating normally...He's so attracted to her n felt a strange connection with her that he didn't left her side from that day.. loved it when he kept his hand on her n she immediately felt peace.. she can feel him 😉 Ohh Angel became a stalker of his lady love 😛 so he left immortality n wanted to feel everything.. He wanted to be with her care for her held her close to him etc n it can only b done if he's human.. so he sacrificed his identity fr Kalpi n living a normal lyf.. loved it when he's working hard fr himself to settle well.. So finally he met her at the supermarket glad n she immediately asked him whether they met before or not!! Connection 😳 she can't forget that day wat she saw in her dream that intense gaze..
He bought cereal but forgot milk 😆 Aww they went to coffee shop n chatted fr sometime.. loved it he managed to speak truth somewhat like he has come far away place.. They decided to meet ..Raghav didn't have mobile Lol he bought one n it's tough task fr him to learn about that device.. This Angel Raghav s so so cute
Someone s following kalpi 😲 They found Angel scent in coffee shop n thought Kalpi was the one aa she's the regular customer there.. he followed her till she reached her home n somewat understood that she's mortal.. who's the other person talking to him ??seems Raghav going to b in danger..
Raghav has been promoted n his boss teasing him whether he has a girlfriend or not n Raghav blushing 😆 he followed his boss suggestions by bringing chocolates n flowers fr her.. how cute he don't know which color so he brought all colors 😃 finally Kalpi reached there after searching every parks as they didn't decided whr to meet 😆 Raghav asking her to b his date lovely 🤪

Kalpi want to accept but her past s,making her to deny n loved it when Raghav said those words that he'll never hurt her rather he prefer to die n he don't want to know about her past which will not change his decisions.. But Kalpi felt she has to say OMG that armaan s so stupid 😡 he didn't respect her at all he looked after her as if she's a trash 😡 n he slapped her also idiot..glad that she broke off that relationship he's not worthy of her like Raghav said.. n she accepted him Woww.. The way their fingers intertwined with each other Raghav s feeling immense happiness..
He went to bring popcorn for her n a small boy recognized him as an Angel 😲 n Raghav just smiling at the child's innocence as he s going to forget him later.. He ordered rainbow corn Wat a coincidence it's kalpi's fav.. so they are leaving to home as it's getting darker n the scene in the car was very good.. Raghav drove slowly fr safety n kalpi teasimg him finally he did it he put her locks behind her ear as he wanted to do this from so long 😳 she told him to cal Kalpi n asked his nick name he said "Mr Darcy "how cute..

Lol message conversation made me 🤣 🤣 Raghav was taking so long time to type n he doesn't know how to insert Smileys.. Kalpi can't stop laughing n alok s observing her 😆 she told alok about her dating with Raghav n he accepted her decision as he understood she's very happy..
I love this Raghav shooo much wanna pull his cheeks kiss him n hug him he's too innocent 😳
Update soon my darling 😛

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