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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rani214

Hi falak...firstly srry for very late cmmnt but m glad I found dis story...lovely concept

Have read first four parts n loved dem
Firstly m happy dat kamla's part is less in dis story n secondly saahil neetu pakhi r positive here😃
Loved kalpi's bonding with saahil neetu n pakhi...how dey love her as der own child n pakhi love her d most n want to protect her
Kalpi so dejected n hurt by her past n all three trying der best to make happy was lovely
Wow ragna have met b4 n rags is finding her but he dnt even knw her name n by bappa's blessing she will b working wit him😳... loved der second meeting 😉
Sammy n pakhi fight was funny 😆

PS- will read rem parts soon n cmmnt later
n if poss can u pm m wen u upd I dnt wanna miss any update😃

thank u for comment dear read all part and comment ...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gargdia

Awsm update falak😳
update nxt part pls.

thank u gardia...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hiii girls thank u so much for al lovely comments😊😊..when i read that i found that u all think kalpi has misunderstood raghav...but girls she is right on her place..d experiences she has carried..and d way this society has treated her..she must be right on her place...and yes come on to raghav he is not bad nor wrong..i just show it coz i wanted to show that how much girls suffred coz of rape...and yes i want to show girl is not weak who want always man by her side..i want to show that if we girl can bring this men in this world than we are too strong than anyone elese in this world..👏👏👏this for all girls...and yes as this is ragna story so love story will be definately in it..but for that i can't compromise wd d critical issue i have raised..nor i can't let any girl belive by this story that they are weak..we are too strong even we are strongest...so don't take it otherwise...and yes i'll try to update tomorrow...hope u all are agree wd my thought..i just want to show kalpi strong..that's why i show how she handle meeting and how she hurt maya for touching raghav...coz no girl can bear any girl touch her man...so be cool and try to read it as social issue...and being a girl i know all of u too want kalpi be strong girl...even i don't want to show that every man is wrong so raghav won't be bad...be happy..and once again thank u for ur comments..i love u all...n i'll try to update tomorrow...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: FALAK_SKY

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0000">Hiii girls thank u so much for al lovely comments😊😊..when i read that i found that u all think kalpi has misunderstood raghav...but girls she is right on her place..d experiences she has carried..and d way this society has treated her..she must be right on her place...and yes come on to raghav he is not bad nor wrong..i just show it coz i wanted to show that how much girls suffred coz of rape...and yes i want to show girl is not weak who want always man by her side..i want to show that if we girl can bring this men in this world than we are too strong than anyone elese in this world..👏👏👏this for all girls...and yes as this is ragna story so love story will be definately in it..but for that i can't compromise wd d critical issue i have raised..nor i can't let any girl belive by this story that they are weak..we are too strong even we are strongest...so don't take it otherwise...and yes i'll try to update tomorrow...hope u all are agree wd my thought..i just want to show kalpi strong..that's why i show how she handle meeting and how she hurt maya for touching raghav...coz no girl can bear any girl touch her man...so be cool and try to read it as social issue...and being a girl i know all of u too want kalpi be strong girl...even i don't want to show that every man is wrong so raghav won't be bad...be happy..and once again thank u for ur comments..i love u all...n i'll try to update tomorrow...</font>



But I got confused why did he stop paying attention to kalpi once she told him and start being with Maya more? Is he engaged to maya
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Posted: 10 years ago
Agreed 100% with you. I applaud your attempt in encouraging girls to be independent , self sufficient, courageous and ' stand on their own 2 strong feet' !!!!! Please carry on. I am all for this concept. Thanks.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sunyy



But I got confused why did he stop paying attention to kalpi once she told him and start being with Maya more? Is he engaged to maya

Take a breath sunny u have too much questions yar...u got all ur.answers soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: premap

Agreed 100% with you. I applaud your attempt in encouraging girls to be independent , self sufficient, courageous and ' stand on their own 2 strong feet' !!!!! Please carry on. I am all for this concept. Thanks.

Thank u so much for ur supporting words and it's encourage me a lot...thank u...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Agree with ur point dear. Waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Please update I want to kniw what rags is behaving like that 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hiii girls here is next part of story..hope u like it so enjoy reading...

PART 16:

Kalpi and pakhi came back at home..nitu tr to talk wd kalpi but she was not in mood...nitu asked pakhi amd she told her everything...nitu also get upset while hearing this as she never expect raghav will do this but she has to accept it...nitu and pakhi decide that try der level best to keep kalpi happy...nitu and pakhi went into her room wd dinner..kalpi was surprised by it..

K:mom what is this why u take dinner here...??nitu and pakhi looked at eachother and than smiled widely..

N:coz today is our girl's day..coz ur dad is not at home so we can spend more time wd eachother..mother daughters time right...

P:right...pkhi exclaimed immediately...

Nitu feed pakhi and kalpi by her own hands...than they both feed nitu ..they doing lots of talk and chat..but somewhere they can felt sadness in kalpi's eyes...nitu looked at pakhi and she gesture her through her eyes..

N:kalpu bachcha it's too late let's go to sleep...

K:mom..u go I'll sleep...I'm not feeling sleepy...

N:how could I go when by bachcha is not sleeping..ok let me sing lori for u...kalpi and pakhi looked at eachother coz after so long time nitu sand lori for them...

P:mom that same lori which u used to sing...???pakhi asked happily..nitu nod her head and make them both pur der head in her lap...she was stroking der hairs and start her lori..[WELL IT'S MY ONE OF FAOURITE LORI FROM BOLLYWOOD MOVIES...]

LORI LORI LORI...LORI LORI LORI...LORI LORI LORIII...LORI LORI LORI...

CHANDANIYA NA CHUPJANA RE CHAN BHAR KO LUk JANA RE

NINDIYA GHUME AAYE...BITIYA MERI SO JAYE...

She strok kalpi's hair lovingly and patted her back lovingly...

OHO NIDIYA GHUME AAYE ..BITIYA MERI SO JAYE..LEKE GOD ME SULAU..GAU RAT BHAR ME SUNAU ME LORI LORI...LORI LORI LORI...LORI LORI LORI..LORI LORI LORIII..LORI LORI LORI...

She strok pakhi's hair and pull her cheeks...she rub her cheek...nitu smiled at her...

GHARDHANIYA CHUNCHUN BAJE PALKAN ME SAPNA SAJE..

DHIME DHIME HOLE HOLE PAVAN BASANTI DOLE...

HMMM...DHIME DHIME HOLE HOLE PAVAN BASANTI DOLE...

LEKE GOD ME SULAU..GAU RAT BHAR SUNAU ME LORI LORI...

HMMM...ME LORI LORI...LORI LORI LORI...LORI LORI LORI..LORI LORI LORIII...LORI LORI LORI...

Nitu kissed kalpi's forhead and hide her face in her hair..

MERI MUNIYA RANI BANE...MEHELO KA RAJA MILE..

DEKHE KHUSHIYO KE MILE..DARD KABHI NA JELE...

OHO..DEKHE KHUSHIYO KE MELE DARD KABHI NA JELE ...

LEKE GOD ME SULAU...GAU RAT BHAR SUANU...

ME LORI LORI LORI...LORI LORI LORIII..LORI LORI...

Tears rolled down from nitu's eyes..nitu wiped it and kiss her on her cheek.. they both dozz off and nitu set both of them on bed and went into her room...after nitu went pakhi opened her eyes and dialled a no...

S:what happened chudel??why are u calling me at this time..pakhi looked at her ph irritatetingly and said in her mind,"of it's not matter of my sis na bappa than I definetaly has cut this chuha's tale..

P:look chuha I'm no more interested in talking wd u..i have called u to talk about ragna...

S:ya I knew it..but what should we do..mom has already seleceted maya for bhai...

P:and is ur bhai is little 10 yr school boy that he accept it han...sammy got angry on pakhi ...

S:ae chudel u r talking about my bhai so mind ur language..

P:ya..ya..now plz tell me have u think something..

S:well not...pakhi make her face and said,"I have accepted only this from u...u are useless..."

S:shut up u chudel..i'm not useless...ok and u telling me this have u think something..i must say no...

P:oh hello I'm pakhi kapoor I'm not like u..so stop blaming me..i have already think it..

S:what...don't tell me ur idea is flop like u...

P:atleast not like u..now before u said anything...listen what is my plan...tomorrow I'll come wd kalpi in park for jogging..i know she won't be agree but I make sure she will come..u come wd raghav der..after coming back from pune they both haven't met eachother normally..everytime that maya was wd her...now listen u take him also der..i'm sure when they both met eachother they won't stop and agree about der feelings...

S:hmm...sounds interesting...ok done I'll bring bhai der tomorrow..

P:done pakka..good night...

S:good night...they both cut d call and smiled widely thinking about tomorrow...

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Next morning pakhi has alsmost dragg kalpi wd her for jogging...kalpi and pakhi reached at park..kalpi take two round but she was not in mood so she take sit on d bench and tell pakhi that she continue it...pakhi grab this opportunity and ran upto few distance..than she called Sammy.."hey chuha has raghav come??".sammy looked at his ph and think"when she stop calling me chuha...??"

S:yes he come..where is kalpi..i'll send him der...pakhi told him where kalpi is..they hung up d call and Sammy purposely send raghav towards kalpi...

Kalpi was sitting on d bench when she felt someone's touch on her shoulder...kalpi got scared and turn immediately and jerk that hand but when she saw d person and got shoked...

K:tum yaha??

Person:yes I'm...what u expect someone else here han??

K:no I'm not waiting for anyone here ..i'm coming here wd my sis...

P:oh really or u want to meet someone??

K:shut up maya..why should I want to meet someone???maya smirked at her and said,"don't be innocent kalpana I know u r here to meet raghav after all it's all ur and ur sis plan in which u involve Sammy too...

K:what???what r u saying..ragha hrere???

M:yes he is..i can't belive this u choose such a cheap way to meet raghav...

In meantime Sammy raghav and pakhi come der...

M:can't u understand he is no more interested in u..than why are u spying him han??

K:maya stop it..i'm not spying him..it's he who was stalking me...pakhi Sammy and raghav heard der convo...

M:coz he doesn't know d truth but now he knew and who want girl like u in his life who even can't stand on her own feet...kalpi felt that maya's every word cutting her heart into millions of pieces...she can't belive that d person whom she love is thinking about her like this way...pakhi got angry on her she looked at Sammy and raghav..sammy was about to stop maya but raghav hold his hand...pakhi angrily walk upto maya and jerk her by her elbow.."how dare u talk wd my sis like this han??who are u...??u have no right to talk wd her like this...do u get it.."maya remove her elbow and said,"I even don't want to talk wd her...just tell her to stay away from raghav..don't use him for her weakness..."kalpi just looked at her wd teary eyes and than at raghav who just bowed his head...kalpi wiped her tears and look straight into maya's eyes.."it's ok maya..even I'm not interested in raghav...so don't be insecure..."maya chuckled at her words and said,"why should I be insecure wd u..who are u..just a weak women..who run away wd society...wd her fate...who even can't be able for fight herself...I never be jealous wd u kalpana..after all...u r just same common girl like other who stay quite all time...d girl who even can't stand for herself that girl never harm me...so don't advice me anything..."saying so maya held raghav's hand and dragg him wd her...raghav look at kalpi but than follow maya..pakhi give disgusting look to raghav and angry look to Sammy...sammy hide his face and left d place where kalpi was standing der like statue...pakhi regret for her decision to bring kalpi here...she bring her back wd her...as soon as they enter into der house they found sahil was waiting for them...when kalpi saw him..she run towards him and hugged him tightely...

She hide her face and cried a lot...sahil try to calm down her...she told him everything which was happened...sahil got angry on pakhi and nitu coz he knew that it's all ther plan...

S:I told u na that don't hurt my daughter but u both are just..nitu and pakhi bowed der head wd regret...

P:I'm sorry dad..i thought raghav really love her but I was wrong..i'm sorry dad...

Sahil strok on kalpi's hair and told her to freshen up as he was also come here right now..after getting freshen up sahil decide to meet raghav...so he left singhaniya mantion...

Raghav saw sahil and understand his intention to come der...

R:hello mr kapoor...

S:why have u done all this???raghav looked at him confused...

S:don't be innocent raghav..why u broke my daughter's heart??why...ragha realised about what he was talking...

S:I knew it when u come to know about the truth u will left my daughter...than why u did this...why u raised her hope and now crushed it...raghav looked at him apologetically...

R:mr kapoor.i...I'm sorry...I just..."stop it dad.."raghav and sahil come towards d voice...and found kalpi standing der...

S&R:kalpi...kalpi walk upto dem and said,"dad he is nothing for us...he is not answerable to us.."sahil looked at her shocked...kalpi hold his hand and give him assuring look...she turn towards raghav and smiled at him,"raghav..it's ok it's ur life and u have all right to decide about ur life and choose best for urself..i'm not angry on u..."raghav looked at her sadly...but she continue.."but yes I have only one problem that I won't ever forgot u..coz i...I LOVE U RAGHAV...I fell in love wd u.."raghav widen his eyes wd her sudden confession so as sahil...

Kalpi smiled sadly and said,"but it's my bad luck that I never got what I want..so don't be guilty nor blame urself for anything...good bye and have a nice life wd MAYA..."saying so kalpi turn she hold sahil's hand and left wd him...

In car sahil looked at kalpi sadly.."dad don't look at me like this..i'm not pity thing.."

S:I'm sorry beta I'm such a useless father who even can't bring single happiness for his daughter...

K"don't say like that dad..u r best..u have done everything for me..just do one more thing dad...

S:what u want beta...sahil aksed while cupping her face..

K:I want to go back delhi dad..I WANT TO GO BACK DELHI...sahil's hand dropped from kalpi's face and his little smiled faded wd her words...


PRECAP:KALPI COME BACK DELHI...ENGAGEMENT DAY...


HUSH FINISHED HOPE U OK WD IT..DON'T THROW CHAPPALS ON ME FOR THAT...ENJOY READING AND GIVE UR LIKED AND COMMENTS...PLZZZ...

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