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TheLifeDiaries

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_
Lovely start 😃 looking forward to see how Raghav comes into her life 😉
PS - @mariee Finally, the day has come, when ur youngest writer is no longer the youngest writer 😆 😉

Thank you very much...and sure you'll see Raghav soon

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TheLifeDiaries

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: mariee
@usoshi ... Hahaha I know !! Ab meri tenthie is the youngest writer 😉 Gosh ...why am I keeping records ??😆
Tenthie ...the injection scene was cute !
Raghav ki entry kab hai ?? Zyaada wait mat karaana plz 😆

Thank you di...

And that injection scene...I could not think anything else as many of my friends are just afraid of injections...I don't know why...and more over kalpi is a medical student...this was little digestible...

And about Raghav...u'll get him soon...maybe in next part...just maybe...but for sure u are gonna wait longer...

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TheLifeDiaries

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
nice chappy dear.. I luv pakhi nd kalpi frndship... Raghav ki entry kab hogi.. Plzz zaldi entry kerao humare hero ki... Waiting..

Thank you...and you will get Raghav soon...

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TheLifeDiaries

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Even this part is without Raghav but sure you will get it in the next part...

Part 3

Pakhi and Kalpi were there in the car and were going to Pakhi's big white bungalow when Pakhi's phone buzzed. It was her mom. Pakhi picked up the call.

P: ya mom...I m coming home with kalpi.

N: what...kalpi is with you...she is back from home...accha beta...can you please pick up your cousin Prem...he will be at the international airport in an hour...please beta...

P: What mom?? Prem is coming...that's great..and sure I will pick him up...

N: Thank you beta...bye...and hi to kalpi from my side..love you...

P: bye mom...love you too..

With that talk between Pakhi and Neetu kalpi felt little sad. She was missing her mom... She was broken from her thoughts by Pakhi.

P: kalpi we have to go to the airport...prem is coming..I told you yesterday...you remember? For getting graduated...

K: Ya...ya...ya...I remember now...ok you go to airport and after dropping me at the park which is near my hostel...

P: what do you mean...you coming with me...

K: please Pakhi don't force me...I m in no mood...I hope u understand...please

Pakhi sensed the sadness in Kalpi's voice she was well aware of the reason so she didn't force her..

P: ok...

She dropped kalpi at the park and headed towards airport...

Kalpi was sad at the fact that she had no mother...while most of the people in the world has...she was in those few counted unlucky people who don't have mother in whose lap sheCould keep her head and forget everything...with those thoughts in heart she entered into the park...she just wanted to forget whole world and get lost in herself..and those few moments she shared with her mom...

She sat at the bench and was engrossed in her thoughts...soon she dozed off as she was hell tired, though her journey from Pune to Mumbai wasn't that hectic but she was just tired.

She was sleeping peacefully but still tears were there at the edge of her eyes...it was due to the thoughts she had before she slept...Three hours passed like three seconds...

It was due to the thunder sound her sleep was broken. It was only 6 pm but it was looking like it is mid-night. She got up only to find that it was going to rain... (Mariee di this one's for you)

The rain started...by now she completely forgot her sorrow and began to enjoy the rain...this was one of those things she loved in life. She saw some kids on the road who were playing..most probably they were some poor kids...

She went towards them and started playing with them...unaware of what destiny has planed...

It is a short update...it was little detailed as this is how I like...if you did not like it please let me know...it will make coming updates without details...I hope it stands on your expectations...sorry if u found it boring...feel free to appreciate and criticise...

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Lolor

@lolor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

nice update...
pls continue...
waiting for raghavs entry

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swati

@Ragna1302

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Superb update

Lovely pakhi n neetu bond. ...both love each other. ..n now prem is come. ..

poor kalpi. ...feeling bad 4 her. ...she miss her mother. ...n sad that though she have no mother. ...

But soon she forgot. ..n play in rain with kids. ...

Waiting 4 raghav. ...I think I know what next track😉😆

update soon

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ayesha khan

@Fly2TheStars

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

awesome updatee

love neetu and pakhi bond

feeling bad for kalpi

waiting for raghav entry

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sweet1308

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Cute update

Kalpi feel sad n enjoy the rain

Update soon

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Kalpi missing her mom was sad
Amazing update

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Saumya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

superb update dear.. Poor Kalpi.. Missing her mom.. Nd i thought in this update Raghav ki entry hogi.. Koi nahi nxt update mei kera dena.. M waiting.. For nxt chappy.. Update soon..

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