two soul(ragna ss)...discontinue and note on page 21 ( 14/6) - Page 5

Originally posted by: ayanshisharma12

Thanks dear..realy this appreciation will help to motivate me...in my story my lead character are so strong and in coming track u will see that ...

Superb update dr. Kalpi beat vishal gang nd give hard slap to pakhi they deserve tat. Poor reet fell in the trap

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awesome update

awesome update dear.. Wow RagNa dance was superb.. Nd song also.. Omg m luving this kalpi... Hehe... Superrb.. Maza aa gaya.. The way Kalpi kicked vishal nd his gang... Nd makhi.. Hehehe.. Wow i luved this part when kalpi slaped makhi... Plzz plzz plzzz m eagerly waiting for nxt chappy.. Plzz update soon..

Waw dear kalpana the super women 😛 poo ki bachi ki kano ki gandi bajrahahoga 😆 interesting update ⭐️

Hey ayanshi...please continue dear

Originally posted by: swara2504

Hey ayanshi...please continue dear

Its fabulous story..

I love the kalpi...who totally independent.. No need of any arm to protect her...I really proud if every girl is build up this confidence in her...no vishal of this society can try to take chance of her.

Update soon... If fine then pm me

Ayanashi, if I may say so, you are a good writer for a first timer. ! You have a gift ,make use of it. I will not be able to do so as not all have the talent. Without any hesitation, you can call yourself a writer! As for the story , a well done job. Love Kalpi's strong character. Boys like Vishal should get their noses flattened with a punch ! A request , translation in English ,please ! Thanks.

Originally posted by: premap

Ayanashi, if I may say so, you are a good writer for a first timer. ! You have a gift ,make use of it. I will not be able to do so as not all have the talent. Without any hesitation, you can call yourself a writer! As for the story , a well done job. Love Kalpi's strong character. Boys like Vishal should get their noses flattened with a punch ! A request , translation in English ,please ! Thanks.