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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rani214

Glad dat u r not discontinuing dis ff...n very much excited to read upcoming updates 😃


Yes dear...thank u..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyyllooo dear..
Though im late.. I jus read all the parts in go! And I liked it!
The plots is different and interesting.. like kalpi being so carefree n a karate champion 😉
And dear.. why u thought to discontinue this story..?! When the story is different than the others..? I know the writers here are too damn awesome in their respective stories than us ( as even I felt d same as u) but they are an example to improve ourselves in writng.. so jus be positive and go on with ur story.. im sure u ll do well 😉😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vyshuu..

Heyyllooo dear..
Though im late.. I jus read all the parts in go! And I liked it!
The plots is different and interesting.. like kalpi being so carefree n a karate champion 😉
And dear.. why u thought to discontinue this story..?! When the story is different than the others..? I know the writers here are too damn awesome in their respective stories than us ( as even I felt d same as u) but they are an example to improve ourselves in writng.. so jus be positive and go on with ur story.. im sure u ll do well 😉😳


Thank u so much dear...u really help me to come out from this negative feeling...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayanshisharma12


Thank u so much dear...u really help me to come out from this negative feeling...




😃 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So I finally caught up with all the chapters and they are amazing
Kalpi is a brave girl and don't let anyone messed with her which I love
The way she handle that Pakhi and Vishal was superb lol
Look like RagNa are connected since childhood with each other but somehow loss touch...
RagNa dancing at the party was wonderful
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Posted: 10 years ago
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(Guys thankyou for your appreciation)
Ch-5
R: hey thanks...
K : for what????
R: now i can enjoy my life freely for some days...
K: how???
R: bcoz that drama queen only think abt you that how will she going to take her revenge???? So you should take care of urself...
S: yes kalpana!! Raghav is right..she is insane girl..
K: relax boys ...she can' t bcoz she wil have to take 7 th birth to reach upto kalpana malhotra...
S: hey kalpana! Don' t you feel any fear, infant there is not in the slightest fear in ur eyes...
"Reet chuckled" and said there is far distant relation between fear and kalpana malhotra...

Raghav and sammy both confused...
Reet narrated the incident which occured after party...
Both raghav and sammy stunned...

K: don' t give me that expression, it' s not a big deal...why are you boys always think that girls can' t do anythink...Infact their willpower is more stronger than man..My dad always tell me " don' t beg infront of anyone when you have capability and i also made a promise to someone who is very special in my life that i will always for myself in any situation and never cry for anyone...

After listening someone special from kalpi' s mouth, raghav feel huge pain in his heart and he didn' t know why???? Whereas he only love his beloved " cherry" , but this unknown feeling hurt him ..He startef feeling suffocated there so he excused himselfand left behind confused sammy kalpi and reet...

At that night three persons were lost somewhere and sleep was far from their eyes...

K: i miss u " chinku" ,,. Pls come back to me...I am nothing without you and a tear fell down from her beautiful eyes but she quickly wiped it as he remeembered her promise which she did to her chinku...

R: how can i think someone elsevwhen i love my cherry, sry cherry!!,,,...pls god!! Just once chance, that time i was helpless but this time i will never let her go at any cost and those who try to snatchbmy love i will sure make their life worst than hell.
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P: how dare he touch me??? I will show her who is pakhi kapoor??? I will have to find her waekness, only this way she will defeat...

At college
After class over..reet and kalpi enjoying their time on some random topic suddenly kalpi' s face became pale and started to panik and heavily breathing...

R: what happened kalpu?? Why are you looking so pale???
K: wo..o...oo..o my bracelet...

Kalpi began searching as hatter, her face wet with sweat and her eyes became red and reet was adraid after seeing her condition...in her entire life she never saw kalpi in this condition...

R: relax !!! Kalpi..It' s just a matter of bracelet , you can puchase another one...
Just shut up!!! Kalpi yelled. .all are shockef including reet also...they never saw kalpi in this avtar as if they said anything they have to face a hungry tigress...
K: that was not only bracelet ..my life is connected with that ...it was souvenir of my chinku and tears started flowing from her eyes...
R: hey kalpi i am sry yaar i dont knw that it' s belonged to ur chinku...How can i forgot that whichever thingd belong from chinku that becomes ur life??? Come! Let's go, we have to search that...

On other side hey girls see what have i found said pakhi..
Wow! What a bracelet , its look like hand made said a girl...

Suddenly a girl came running and said hey pakhi that was kalpana 's bracelet
..pls give to her, she is searching like a mad, someone special had given to her as a gift. .
P: now it' s time to have some fun girls...let's go...

Here reet and kalpu tried their best to searchad but failed,, suddenly they heard announcement made by pakhi...
P: listen guys i have found a wooden and there is double C written over it and it is heart with silver leaves so owner of this bracelet can meet me on stage...

After hearnig announcement kalpi angered reached on top..i will not spare that bitch this timr..todat she will meet chinku' s kalpi not kalpana malhotra, let's go, said kalpna.

Come on!! Kalpana i want to show your shattered face ,"pakhi thought"..
A voice came from behind thr crowd which is none other than kalpana, she approach towards stage..
Todat i will take revenge of my insult" mummled pakhi"...

P: is this your bracelete , miss malhotra?? If yes, than you have to complete one task after that you can take your bracelet...
I will take what is mine miss makeup shop but before that i have to teach you some lesson" thought kalpi"...
K: what' s your task miss kapoor??????

P: you have to say sry 10 times and slap urself 4 timrs infront of whole college...


All are shocked and only one thought running intheir mind that what will kalpna do now but thete is a smirk on a face.,i..e,. Kalpi.

P: come one ! Do your task, i have not a whole day to stand hete, so do fast...
Game time" said pakhi in her mind"...
K: guys actually i have found in a corridor and that is belong from some pakhi kapoor...

Suddenky pakhi frozen and her happiness changed in sadness...
Oh! No... That is my note book and after 4 days there is a exam..oh god! Every time my plan back fired on me and every body know that i am not capable to make gud notes..after lots of effort i able to get one note from that bimbo kaya..let' s me try my luck once more " thought pakhi"she put fake strong mask and said..

P: hey you are try to blackmail me ..what will you do eithet burn or torn it, choice is your..
Pls god just once time my plan work plsss, she silently praying...
K: okay so i would like to burn it...suddenly kalpi take out lighter from her pocket and going to burb it...

STOP!!!!!!! Pakhi screamed, no pls dont do that..it is a single notes i have..
K: give my bracelet ..FAST'''...

As pakhi came towards kalpi and give bracelet to kalpi , after that she felt a hard slap on her left cheek and she fell down on stage ground...
K: come on!! Pakhi get up fast ..you have to compltete your task also which you had given to me..
With lots of effort she get up and said " SORRY"...
K: loud , i cant heard it properly, have you not taken your breakfast today...
Pakhi said 10 times "SORRY "and "SLAP " herself 4 times...

All student started laughing, they are happy due to this incident, they very well know only one person can teach pakhi kapoor gud lessons and that is only kalpana malhotra...

At night
Reet: now yiu look happy but in college you really scared me..
K: yoy don' t knw yaar that time i felt someone snatch my soul from my body...
R_: how easily you frightened that pakhi kapoor bcoz of that simple notebook...
K: it will be just simple notebook for u and me but for pakhi that is her pocket money...
R: how????
( flashback)
When kalpi heard announcement regarding her bracelet , she moved towrds stage but suddebly she heard two girls talking abt pakgi and kalpi hidden herself behind pillar for listening their conversation...
1st girl: see that bitch she blackmail me as she know my secret..
2nd girl: she also used to blacknail me, i am fafe up with this pakhi..
1st girl: she only understand language of kalpana..
1st girl: let's go..i have to put this notebook in her bag otherwise she will kill me...you know this notebook is her pocket money as if she failbin this coming exam then her dad cut her pocket money so indurectly this is her life bcoz without money pakhi can' t survive...
2nd girl: okay let' s go...

Kalpi followed them in their class when they left after putting that notebook in pakhi bag ..kalpana take out that notebook and put it in her bag...
( flasback end(

R: wow kalpu ! You are amazing, how u made that pakhi kapoor to dance in your fingers...
K: it' s just begining reet...

After reet retired to her room, kalpi started talking with bracelet,, .you kniw chinku that time i felt i have lost you as this bracelet always feel me your presence..I LOVE YOU CHINKU..and she again list herself in her chibku drmzland...

This chapter may quite boring for you pls bear it.thanks...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayanshisharma12


Thankyou dear...okay i'll..

Sry dear iam not able to send pm to u..actually there is some problem in my laptop so i had to type chappy 5 over mobile ..sry once again..chappy 5 is updated now u can enjiy that..thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fabulous update. ..👏👏
Raghav is impressed kalpi. ...but after listening her...He felt hurt. ..n miss her cherry. ...He love her so much. ...
Kalpi only waiting 4 his chinku. ..
Yippee I loved kalpi plan😉😆 she is amazing yaar. ..pakhi ka plan usipe bhari pad gya😆😆...loved how kalpi teach lessons pakhi. ...10 time sorry n 4 time slap. ..wo bhi sub ke samne👏😆...
loved this kalpi. ...
Waiting 4 wen ragna find out there cherry n chinku. ...
Update soon next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Once again Kalpi put Pakhi in her place lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb update dear... Wow maza aa gaya... Makhi slapd herself hehehe... Nd said sorry... Wow... Plzz update nxt chappy soon.. Waiting..

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