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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: laavanya4u

So painful and emotional update. From the hatred and the struggles of Kalpi by seeing rags , I could visualise how deeply she could have been hurt by his actions and words in the past. What was that incident that had forced her to move out of his life and made to her to lose her voice too??

it's raghav who leave her
otherwise as i say
she was bearing all his mood swings only bcoz of that that one day he love her like she think about kamala & vitthal :)
but love never been attraction or possesivness:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.phehle ye vital or kamla or ye rags 😡 bi uske saath itna bura kiya 😭 poor soul 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fab ! Wonder what tragedy happened in Kalpi's life ? Her tragic condition and her display of anger towards Rags must be 'deserving' !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Your this ff is amazing yaar,best among ur other ffs...I love ur all ffs wid different concept...
I read ur last 1st 2 updates during exams,I got hooked to them...yesterday I read ur last 4 updates,they were awesome,...I was clueless ,in coming updates v vl come to knw major part of the story I mean revelation like kalpi can't speak,kalpi lost her child,raghav treated her like dirt ,kalpi adopted nd all
It was amazing yaar..
Loving raghav's possessive behaviour..the way he was searching for kalpi,it showed it his concern for her..I m curious y he abused her,his this behaviour is unacceptable...don't give kalpi soon,let him beg her for forgiveness...
Hehehe raghav is very possessive ha,he doesn't like any male person even touch her..the way he jerked sammy's hand lol,it was sweet..
Hmm so it was shocking for sammy nd maya to see raghav's this side..for the 1st time they saw fear in his eyes..when kalpi left her room,she was weak...liked raghav's concern for her nd they way he strictly ordered maya nd nurse to keep kalpi safe nd don't let her escape frm here was touchy...when he meet her near parking area ,he took a sigh of relief was nicely portrayed...it was shocking to knw kalpi can't speak nd it broke raghav into pieces nd it made him more guilty...
When kalpi woke up nd was hallucinating her baby falling frm cliff was heart wrenching...again raghav was panicked seeing her in that stage...
When kalpi came to knw she is at raghav's place,omg it was heart wrenching nd I was in tears..she was throughing things showed her anger her hatred for raghav...raghav did something veryy big ..feeling pity for kalpi...wanna kill raghav..continue soon dear I m eagerly w8ng for further updates...
Byee..muaahhh
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nehaaa ...I suppose this is best of ur stories. So long I was like possesive love se zyaada kuch better ho hi nahi sakta ..but no ! That story has some loopholes , but this ?? This is
Awesome
Marvelous
Beyond comparison ... I might just run out of adjectives today !!

I am sooo gonna follow this one ..I am in love with it already & have connected to the chars in mere 6 chaps ! Woah ...now that's something really tough 👏👏

Just a suggestion - Don't take it negatively plzzz. Just try improving ur grammar a bit ! See ...coz u know words well that wud impart the correct set of emotions (that's what matters ultimately) ...but ur works wud become flawless if u work a bit on ur grammar. Nobody is born Wren or Martin ...but then u can always try being ur best ! Apologies if my words offend u ...

Love , MARUSHKAA
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mariee

Nehaaa ...I suppose this is best of ur stories. So long I was like possesive love se zyaada kuch better ho hi nahi sakta ..but no ! That story has some loopholes , but this ?? This is

Awesome
Marvelous
Beyond comparison ... I might just run out of adjectives today !!

I am sooo gonna follow this one ..I am in love with it already & have connected to the chars in mere 6 chaps ! Woah ...now that's something really tough 👏👏

Just a suggestion - Don't take it negatively plzzz. Just try improving ur grammar a bit ! See ...coz u know words well that wud impart the correct set of emotions (that's what matters ultimately) ...but ur works wud become flawless if u work a bit on ur grammar. Nobody is born Wren or Martin ...but then u can always try being ur best ! Apologies if my words offend u ...

Love , MARUSHKAA

i'm hlad u like it
i know i make lot's of mistakes in gramner i'm working on it
u never need to hesitate .
bcoz i never feel bad about it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 7

she slap him hard

Trying to control her anger . He just stand their like a statu for some seconds . When his attantion again shift to her who was rubbing her lips trying to remove his touch . Just erase what he did.


R- kalpana

Kalpi just continue rubbing her lips making them swell

He has tears in his eyes . He see how disgusted she was feeling that time.
Her attempt to remove his touch making her lips to bleed.

R- kalpi
( he say in a soft voice)

Kalpi just wash her face . Her lips were bleeding due to her scratching and lay on floor to sleep .

He watch her but her attantion lost somewhere she even don't bother about his presence in same room .

She fold herself hugging her legs close to her chest she close her eyes.

He just look toward her and then food which is still untouched neither he nor she ate anything.

He went toward her and lay beside her . Without touching her . He just witness how she harm herself only bcoz he touch her .


An hour passed like that

He not for once closed his eyes as if he close his eyes she vanish in air.


( Love is strange isn't it?
A man who get anything what he wish . He is able to purchase everything with money that he wish sleeping on floor bcoz despite of being richest man in india he is poorest man in world bcoz he lost most precious creation of god LOVE.

It's easy to earn money but difficult earn something faith after crushing it .

It's easy to earn wealth but it's difficult to earn love .

May be he want to give her happiness now but what she do with luxuries when her soul is dead ? ? She never want LUXURIES she only want LOVE & SOMEONE TRUST.

Money - for us most precious thing now a days but we forgot nothing is important that a support .
By support with someone by ur side u able to tackle most difficult situation may be we earn luxururies from money but even after giving ur all money u never able to get PIECE ) .


He was lost in her and she was in her world sleep was far away from both eyes.
when someone knock door

G- raghav open the door . Kalpi need to take medicines


Raghav get up and open the door

As gauri enter she was schoked to see his room.

Their room was totally messed up all thing broken and kalpi was lying in a corner hugging herself her back facing gauri .

And her eyes fell on food which was still untouched
It's not difficult for her to understamd that they both have fight .

Ignoring raghav gauri went toward kalpi and sit beside her .

She start stroking her hairs .

G- kalpi
( she say softly )

G- i know beta u are awake and listning me.

G- kalpi.
...

Hush finish

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Posted: 10 years ago
I love the thing that though kalpi is dumb over here she is yet trying her best to retort.
Another awesome update 👏
Could u plzzz make it a bit longer next time...plzzz!!😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
]neha just fabulous yaar...
awesome update. ...
u explained it beautiful yaar...
Edited by gayathrireddy67 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice. Beautifully explained. . Really wanna know about dere past. Raghav must have done something very bad wid kalpi dats y she is behaving like dis n how she lost her voice. Love is really strange darling.

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