The Lion and the Panther- (Ragna ff) REMOVED

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Agu

@_green_

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Me 1st again... 😆

Vids...once again awesome update 👏

I loved RagNa interaction before heading back to their tent 😃 ... Infact I loved the whole update 😃

N update soon ok..can't wait for Kalpana's entry in House Grimmir 😳

Edited by _green_ - 10 years ago

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Burns n Trolls

@shahsb_26

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Lovely chapter.. justice as it should be for any of such henious acts.. waiting to read more on Kalpana's POV changing perceptions and developing bond with new Home and people around. . :)

Oh yes.. I did like their cute conversation in the tent where Raghav commands her for having food..

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riaka

@riaka

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Awesome update again. .Raghav fully understand his lady. Taking care of her during the journey. Justice has to be done for these cheap crime. Now kalpana again confused about Raghav 's cold hearted or not.

Please update soon

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Frozenfantasy

@Frozenfantasy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Rise and shine ...come morning and lady kalpana's ..last morning in her maiden kingdom ...

After ..saying their farewell ...leaving her loved ones behind Kalpi ..is on her way with her lord Raghav

To northern kingdom ...long way to go so they take a rest and nest in the forest...

Raghav ...orders for extra security ...he has promised Kalpis ..father that he will take good care of her

And he does ...he explains to his new wife about the situation and why he is doing all this ...

I like the way he talks to her and Kalpi ...is trying to understand him...

With kalpi missing ...for twenty minutes ...Raghav sees red ...and she is alone too...😲

Lady kalpana ...is in danger now..A filthy mongrel is harassing her ..

But not for long cuz Thomas is there and he will protect his masters new bride ...

Raghav ..is so angry and takes the filthy man as his prisoner ...

Kalpi ...sees the new side of her lordship now ...and he is in murderous mode...

Justice has to be done ...and it was served by Raghav ...beheading the culprit ...Cuz he had done a bad move by ...attempting ...to molest his wife ...and that's a big No No ..so you die ...rest in peace ..

Will Kalpi ...adjust with her lord Raghav's ..ways ?

Is there any more hurdles on the way...?

Fantastic ...update

Thank you sweetie..

Edited by Vsapras - 10 years ago

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Sorry for the super late comment I'm so happy that you started a new unique story😊 I like the concept... Raghav is a warrior, I love that Kalpi hesitate to marry Raghav was understandable , after all she don't even know him Raghav lost his vision temporary is sad He didn't get to see his own wedding but I love that he knows that this lady is beautiful Kalpi may have judge Raghav too harshly because he is so kind to her and also understand her feelings. I like that they are talking to each other nicely and not rushing into anything because its what expected of them.

Oh no! Kalpi almost get rape by that filthy man. She got to see Raghav in action in a new light.

All three chapters are wonderfully written. I love them all

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

So vidya is back... And how with the biggest bang ever 😉 girl not only have u come back fast and furious with a humongous varoom but Tum nay tho aate hi dhoom macha di dhoom. 👏 😉 loving this medieval theme with a regal rags and royal kalpi. So up until now we have seen the chat mangni phat biya of the two and prem declaring in a devilish tone "she's mine" 😡 and now they are heading to the North so what does their journey entail who will they meet what will they endure and when will love blossom. U have nailed it killed kick assed it and every other it there is . Big muah big hug and loads of love ❤️ 🤗 🥺

Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

awesome update vidu di.. Plzz update nxt chappy soon..

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Jaz

@Jaz_

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Superb! Raghav and Kalpana starting their new journey; can't wait to know what happens next. With Kalpana seeing Raghav execute the perpetrator wonder how she will react to him. Will she attempt to understand him and his norms or have a blocked mind and view him with disgust? Please update soon😊