Ragna SS: I love the way you love me.. updated chap 3 &4 pg 23!

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<font color="#663399">Do ignore the grammatical errors</font>😛


In a mall, coffee section:


Raghav was sipping his favorite black
coffee, in a place where he usually comes. One of the place where he finds solace,
though it seems noisy sometimes! He then heard a group of laughter, in that a
voice for him, which seemed very pleasant and natural one to him. He turned to
see who owned such cute voice even in laughter. He got mesmerized as he saw her,
got attracted to the dusky beauty. She was wearing a sleeveless plain white top
and a floral long skirt with her hair braided into a side french plait. She was
looking no less than an angel. He kept on staring at her, observing her each n every
act of her's. she was teasing maya about something for which she received a
few slight punches on her shoulder n she put a puppy face indicating it hurt
her, rubbing the place where she beat her, when maya showed her concern then
burst out laughing n then started teasing her again..!


After hesitating
a lot, whether to go and talk to her or no, he finally made his way towards her
table, which is near the glass window, and took a chair opposite to them. Thinking
to himself, "Raghav, think think. Do something and at least you should get to
her name!"


R: hello. Im ra..


M: oh hello! Excuse me! Who r u..??
and this table is reserved for us. So, you can go n find yourself another
table.


R: yeah. I know that. (said
completely ignoring maya and staring at kalpi) actually im new to this city
and I jus wanna know about XYZ address. (showing some visiting card)


Maya and kalpi found out it fishy, but
the thing is, even they are new to that city and doesn't know a thing about it.
So they thought off playing a prank on him, thinking they wont meet him again. So maya signaled kalpi to take on the lead and start their play.


K: ohh this address.. I knew this
very well. We visited this place few times. (showng him through the glass
window) and told some stupid direction for which she doesn't know where it
leads to.


Raghav, thinking, "why is she leading
me to the wrong way..? ok now she wanna play with me. Let it be then."


R: if u don't mind can u please come
with me and show me the address. I don't have any idea about this place. So
please..? said as pleasingly as possible.


K: hmm okay. (winking at maya)
chaloo maya. We will show him the place. Maya understood the thing and said
okay.


R: by the way may I know your name..?
asked smilingly.


K: u don't need to know my name for
showing your address!!


Getting up from the chair,
kalpi asked him to follow them. Down, kalpi n maya were waiting for
raghav to come out, as they were on scooty with kalpi driving it while raghav
coming in his car. The duo, kalpi n maya, kept on making him roam here n
there, having their fun, for almost 20min unknown to the fact that even
raghav was enjoying it, enjoying her silly antics and her mischievousness. Then
kalpi made him to enter into a lane which was so narrow that raghav's car will
get stuck in the lane! Raghav was so lost in her, that he dint notice what was
awaiting for him, he just continued driving and got stuck!! Then he realized
what she made him do! Kalpi got down from her vehicle and reached near to him,
in front of the car, "see, this is the place, the one which u showed us the
address! So just don't forget to find your way back home", she said laughingly.
Raghav dint know what to do.. whether to laugh at his situation, as he got
stuck, or to get angry on her or to get impressed by her mischievousness! Then
he observed her leaving. "hey, at least tell me your name, because of u I got
into this trouble!", he literally yelled, as she was leaving. She replied,
"better luck next time, if at all we meet again..". He replied, in a bit
flirting tone, "oh really..?? then if at all fate makes us meet again, I am not
going to leave u so easily. I repeat, I wont leave you easily!" Kalpi felt a
bit scared n just left from there, praying she shouldn't meet him again.


As she left, then Raghav came
to the real world and then he realized his situation, there was only some place
left, that he could hardly step out. It took nearly 45mins for him to get his
out of that lane, with the help of few members present there. He was happy
thinking that the girl, he met, has something different in her, and sad that he
couldn't get to know her properly, not even her name! He silently made a wish
that he could meet her again.




<font color="#663399">Heyyllooo girls,😃</font>


<font color="#663399">So how was it..? Did you all
like it..??😊</font>


<font color="#663399">This is the first time that I am
writing a story. And I tried/trying my best to show it well. 😊next update
depends on your comments, as I need a lil bit of encouragement 😳😆 </font>


<font color="#663399">So if you like the update do hit like
the button and drop in ur comments😃 </font>


<font color="#663399">Criticism are allowed too</font>!😛


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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX:😊

chap 1: page1

chap 2: page11
Edited by vyshuu.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is such an amazing story update soon😉
Kalpi is so michevious pranking Raghav and He's enjoying it all😆
He has fallen for her How sweet😳
I love this story you update soon😳
Edited by -AriaRai- - 10 years ago
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look even i'm drinking my not so yet black wali coffee baki padke batha thi hoon

Vysh u have really good talent ya kahaa thi tum ethne din 😆
I love this naughty kalpi and Raghav love at 1st sight 😳
the way she tricked him 😆 bichara wanted to play along but lost in his dreams 😉 forgetting his moves 😛

I have a silly name for this My Naughty Destiny 🤪 i know silly name but I'm bad in giving names u know😆
Edited by _Santhi_ - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Santhi_

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look even i'm drinking my not so yet black wali coffee baki padke batha thi hoon


hahaaha LOL😆😆

aaram se pilena😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lol... Michevious Kalpi... and Attracted Raghav.. would be fun to read for sure..

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gud start vyshu😃
sounds interesting😳
keep it coming😳

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Diwana tera😉😆
I know not good title but want to share with you. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful Story.. Looking forward to see how RaGna meet again..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yesterday night I was thinking of making a post to ask you that when are you going to post your story?

Can't believe this is your first time as a writer. 😲 I must admit that I'm a bit surprised!!😃



I love this bubbly, enthusiastic, and funny kalpi; she is exactly opposite of our ema wali kalpi. And raghav, the flirt got himself into trouble, that too with pleasure .😆

I can see that this is gonna be quite entertaining story so please update soon.😛

Welcome to the world of ema writers!🤗 Your too good!👏


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