OS - Her Revenge 2nd OS on page 4 - Page 2

Its awesome dear
D way u depict der emotion was fab
Loved your writing.
Plz write more os

Hi dear mai apki bohuth badi fan hu apki har stories padthi hu.apki sari story's dard ki ek chotti si duniya hamesha chup rehthe hai bilkul real life ki tara.fabulous update 😭 bohuth dard bara phir bi touching os dha 👏 ⭐️ your such a fantastic writer dear.love you 🤗

it's awsome

Whoaaa !!!!!!! What a revenge !!!!!! Mind blowing and I am left wordless !!!!!!! Remarkable 👏

Woww!!! Dats really superrr fabulous one!!👏👏

Well 'crafted' revenge ! { I mean your superb story! ]

2nd OS:
'I love you' - he announced bending on his knees and putting a ring on her finger. she can see
his love for her. Finally, she is successful evoking such feeling in a devil's heart. She
smiles not being happy but on her victory.
Table has been turned. some months back, he was a predator and she was prey but now he is prey and she is his predator.
He sighs seeing her smiling. her smile has enhanced the beauty of her face.and he was stupid to make her cry.
He speaks again - ' I am sorry for hurting you. But believe me, I will never hurt you again. you
have changed this devil. you have killed the devil who was inside me. Now, i have a heart which
takes your name in every beat. Your love and innocence have changed me.'
her smiles turn into chuckle. the person who had used her to satisfy his anger, hunger and lust
is talking about loving her. She had heard that a woman can make any man fall in love with her
with little drama, little seduction and a lot of lies and Finally she know that this is truth.
her chuckle turns into a silent laugh. she had seduced and trapped the person who had not just
tainted her body but her soul.
Seeing her happy brings peace to him. He was stupid to use her for his revenge when she was just helping a friend. He was stupid to hurt her to satisfy his anger.
Her laughs turn into laughter as she realized she had became like him only. He had played with
her body and life and she is playing with his heart and feeling.
He is ready to do anything to get a drop of love from her.she has unveiled his thirst for love.
her love had made him a human again.
she starts laughing hysterically saying - 'To teach you a lesson, I just became like you. You
had snatched my innocence long back and see, what I have done. I was playing with your feelings,

your heart.I never loved you. I can't love anyone as you have killed that feelings. I am living
life of a dead person. I never loved you. It was all a lie. It was my revenge from you.I have
become just like you'
She starts laughing hysterically.
He jerks her, Slaps her but she continue laughing.
He looks at the empty shell whom he created in his anger and in his revenge. He looks at the
girl who had lost her all senses as she had dared to play with someone's heart. someone who is
responsible for her every misery.'her laughing does not stop and she falls on the floor laughing - 'look what i have done. I am playing with feelings and emotions of people.I have done greatest sin.
She falls unconscious after a while.
He carefully picks her in his arms and take her to the room. He talks with world's famous
psychologist and everyone declares her mad.
Indeed she is mad as she is still a human being in this inhuman world.
'Leave her in some mental asylum, she is just a burden on you. You had suffered enough for your mistake' - his friend tells him.
He knows he had not done a mistake but a sin and the only penance of his sin is to take care of her.
'You will lose your mind after this girl' - his friend argues.
He knows that he had not lost his mind but he had lost his heart to her.

Note :
It is 2nd OS. I hope it is not very bad

Nice os...again painful...

Y r these Os so painful 😭

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