SS : A million miles away !! Chap 5, 6 & 7 - Pg 52 14/10 - Page 19

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mariee



Ty Di !!😃
U r gonna love this flirt more ...wait for the next update😆
Hehehe ...u always catch the lip bites well ...lol ! I yet remember ur comment on rrvsmi's last update ...even there u had caught that lip bits as well !!😉😉U too seem to b a fan of his lip bites😆

Road Trip ? Are u referring to my ss ?

Ty for the comment again ...btw did u check ur 'name change' thread ??


That i notice very well 😉 when I love someone I love everything bout them 😉 yes, was referring to ss! No!! I didn't!! Going to now!! 😉
Edited by DiVirgo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I luv the ragz in ur story😉😆
I must say ur every story had that spark which leaves me hungry for more of it😳
Tell me one thing , from where u get ideas for character sketch, they seems too real nd specially their natural sense of humour, i m in luv wid them,

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Posted: 10 years ago
Mariee where is update abh playboy raja and studious kalpi ki mulaqaat dikha do 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyylooo mariee..
I dunno where I res-ed my post😕.. so unres-ing it here 😛
And as usual im late🤢
Cumng to ur update.. im totally lovng this flirtatious raghav😉 and all girls surrounded him lyk bees around d honey!😆😳
So kalpi is lyk totally a geek .?! And last pe.. rags pov was funny😆😆
I loved it!😉
Edited by vyshuu.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DiVirgo


That i notice very well 😉 when I love someone I love everything bout them 😉 yes, was referring to ss! No!! I didn't!! Going to now!! 😉


The ss na ? I don't think its apt for forums ...err , I transformed it to a treasure hunt story ...& if I upload it over here ...people are gonna come hunting for me with pitchforks😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DayAndNight

I luv the ragz in ur story😉😆

I must say ur every story had that spark which leaves me hungry for more of it😳
Tell me one thing , from where u get ideas for character sketch, they seems too real nd specially their natural sense of humour, i m in luv wid them,


Ty suman !! 😊

Such lovely words are making me blush !;
What can I say...my characters are like a part of me ...I sort of live them ! & that eases my task of presenting them to a great extent
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sunyy

Mariee where is update abh playboy raja and studious kalpi ki mulaqaat dikha do 😉


Mulaaquaat toh hogi 😉

update max by parso (HOPEFULLY)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

Heyylooo mariee..
I dunno where I res-ed my post😕.. so unres-ing it here 😛
And as usual im late🤢
Cumng to ur update.. im totally lovng this flirtatious raghav😉 and all girls surrounded him lyk bees around d honey!😆😳
So kalpi is lyk totally a geek .?! And last pe.. rags pov was funny😆😆
I loved it!😉


More of the fun loving rags in this one ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
OK , here goes a quick update. Just 30 minutes more before my lectures start & then my mom wud drag me for shopping ...trust me when I say DRAG !! 🤢
Typing it on the phone directly ...please bear with the mistakes !!
This ones short ...I'll type a longer 4th this weekend ...pakka !!



Chapter 3

Raghav slid his phone back in his pocket as he now stared at the struggling girl on the floor. He very well knew why his dad has done that.

He shut his eyes with exasperation , as he got a slip of paper from his pocket & tore it into 2 halves the very next second ... It was a ticket to New Zealand. The place where he had planned an escapede & vacation till his dad is out of 'Make Raghav Work' fever. But now ?? There were absolutely no chances of running to any other place but California coz of his daddy's spy girl. Grrr...why did his dad know him so well ??

"Great dad ! Just great " he had said it aloud as he ran a hand trough his hair. His hand had just reached his nape when

Dhad ! The girl had fallen on her face this time as the crowd burst into a spontaneous laughter. Her back was yet to him , but he could make out that she was just on the verge of crying. He quickly bolted through the crowd. Now standing in the exact center he drove an angry gaze around. The giggles slowly faded as ppl begun to scatter away. He was a flirt , a bad one though ...but that didn't make him less gentlemanly.

He looked down at the spy girl with pity. OK , he knew his plan was ruined badly ...but he knew the girl was not to be held responsible.

Slowly lowering himself on the floor he begun to gather her stuff & placing them in her bag.

Some files

A classic looking diary

Some books ...actually many books !

Some formal clothes &&

PJs ...cream colored PJs with Lightning McQueen & Senior Mator cartoons on them ???

He stared at them blank ...

He blinked once. Twice . That's when he felt the pair of pants being pulled from his hands abruptly. Maybe she had noticed him staring awkwardly at those cars.Sensing her discomfort raghav started off..he didn't wanna make her feel uncomfortable..

"Ummm...I'm sorry ! I didn't mean to .." That was the first time his mischievous eyes had met her vulnerable ones hidden under a pair of specs. Even through those thick glasses that rested on her straight nose he noticed the slight traces of tears at both corners of her eyes.

"It's OK Mr Singhaniya, thank you !!" Said she cutting his statement as she broke the eyelock & shut her mini suitcase with a click. She got off the floor & hurried herself to the checking counter.

Raghav mutely stood gaping at her retreating figure which seemed like that of a frightened mouse's walking through a bunch of cats.

"Weird !!" Was the only word he managed to utter before getting his own bags & marching towards the terminal where the airplane to California awaited him... Awaited him & his daddy's weird spy girl !!



MARUSHKAA


Edited by mariee - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome maru wow flirty singhania tore his ticket of entertainment hehe
spy kalpi that funny
hayy gentleman chikna helping the beautiful spy lady😆
hhmm rag find kalpi wierd
waiting for their journey t California wat will happen there
update soon
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago

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