RagNa SS: Driver Beti.. Kalpi-; LAST CHAPTER- 16 pg. 65 (June 23)

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Saumya

@SamBricka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

superb update dear OMG raghav is planing some thing.. I wish iss trip pe Raghav aur kalpi gaye hai wapas RagNa aaye... Wish ye trip pe RagNa love shuru ho.. Update nxt chappy soon.. Waiting..

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Priya

@priya_remix

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

No no Next is not Heavenly Jail but we want now next update of Driver Beti part 9!!!! You cannot do this to us!!!

Raghav and Kalpi together at Palghar!!! This is gonna be some fun!!!!

I am so excited. I was so waiting for this chapter and you gave a chintu one!!!! (pouts)

I want more!

By the way as I have taken up the role of your hindi adhyapika(teacher)

myself...your lesson for today is the word

Sangat - company

Sangharsh - struggle!!!

So you need to replace the word Sangharsh with Sangat in the above update!

This was by no means to offend you, but I have an itch to teach hindi!!! After all I have learnt it for so long...should put it to some use right?

Edited by priya_remix - 10 years ago

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Very nice update, both rags And Kalpi are quite strong headed people.after the initial incidents,they had started understNding each a other a teeny weeny bit and thanks to the jealousy and the ego of our great RAGHAv,the equation between them has started changing to a sort of tit for tat revenge mode.and our driver beti had opted for a tiresome source of revenge for her Saab.as a fuel to the already burning fire inside rag's heart,Prem had indirectly hinted his feelings towards Kalpi,Now more than Kalpi Rags is more confused felt betrayed but has some unknown feelings to her!!!!! So will the pal had trip
Clear the confusion and reverse the equation.

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#214

RagNa will kill each other with their plans lol
Both are so stubborn and will not give up
Aww Raghav is so jealous of Kalpi and Prem
I like how every situation he tried to get Kalpi to stick with him
Both thinking about each other before sleeping is so sweet ;)
Oh no! What is Raghav up to now? I hope his plan don't backfire and left Kalpi injured or something
But I'm excited for RagNa trip alone without others
Beautiful updates

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Katty

@Cute_Kate

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Posted: 10 years ago

#215

All these MUs...

Yet... thinking about each other...

And..I think u meant Sanghat and not Sangharsh.. Sangarsh is struggle..

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Raghav ka palgar wala twist kab mileghaa

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Wow, nice update. ⭐️ Looking forward to Raghav-Kalpana journey, wonder what twists are going to come? Just one thing, Sangharsh means Struggle. Company would be Sangat. sorry of I hurt you, thought it may help you in future.😳

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Dear waiting for the update yaar

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ILoveRagNa

@ILoveRagNa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: Cute_Kate
All these MUs...
Yet... thinking about each other...

And..I think u meant Sanghat and not Sangharsh.. Sangarsh is struggle..

Originally posted by: chahat4u
Wow, nice update. ⭐️ Looking forward to Raghav-Kalpana journey, wonder what twists are going to come? Just one thing, Sangharsh means Struggle. Company would be Sangat. sorry of I hurt you, thought it may help you in future.😳

Twists is sure to come up..😛😛😛

@Bold: As I said earlier, I LOVE BEING CORRECTED!😃😃😃 Please do keep on correcting me, if you find any such errors, in grammar, spelling or words... I love learning and being perfect..

Originally posted by: priya_remix
No no Next is not Heavenly Jail but we want now next update of Driver Beti part 9!!!! You cannot do this to us!!!
Raghav and Kalpi together at Palghar!!! This is gonna be some fun!!!!

I am so excited. I was so waiting for this chapter and you gave a chintu one!!!! (pouts)

I want more!

By the way as I have taken up the role of your hindi adhyapika(teacher)

myself...your lesson for today is the word

Sangat - company

Sangharsh - struggle!!!

So you need to replace the word Sangharsh with Sangat in the above update!

This was by no means to offend you, but I have an itch to teach hindi!!! After all I have learnt it for so long...should put it to some use right?

@Blue

Lesson Learned

Hindi Session 2:

Raddh is cancel and rakt is blood...

In this session...

Sangarsh is struggle... and Sanghat is Company... Ok...👍🏼

Ab toh I will write one whole story in Hindi... and so... I will learn it perfectly...Thank You soo Much... Priya Di, Kate, and Charu Di..!

I will correct it soon...

@Priya Di:

@Purple: Of course it will be fun... I have just updated Heavenly Jails... Will update this soon abhi... This is not chintu sa..😕😕😕 I know not as long as PP, or LRR😭 but, It's Big enough.. (I hope😆)

@Pink: Guruji From when can I take lessons from you. 😆

@Green: Yes Ma'am!

@Brown: I assure you, with you reading my stories you will get more chances to use your Hindi ... and let your itch to teach settle down. Thank You Once Again😊

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ILoveRagNa

@ILoveRagNa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: DayAndNight
Lovely updt dear😳 shorter than ur regular longer uodates but i dont mind coz nxt will b completely, RagNa😃 I wil b waiting 4 sunday monday, updt bt then😳
One more thing , i m luving the basic detailing in ur story, the way u eloberate feeling and reaction nd places too, i just luv it😊 Simple yet effective, gr8 job👏

Lol.. maybe shorter then regular.. and yes from next onwards it is RagNa..!!

Italics: It is always feels wonderful to have such comments coming from others, and specially the other writer... Thank You Sooo Much.