NEW RAGNA SS:LOVE, SECRETS AND BETRAYALS (PART 7- PAGE 23)(INCOMPLETE) - Page 6

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Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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HEY GUYS!! I'm back with other update...sorry for late update as this part was finished by earlier but was not able to update as I was busy(nah I was lazy...becoz in vacation I become maha lazy) so sorry for that once again...

And here I represent you the latter part of the fb hope you will enjoy it...I don't know why but im not satisfied with this fb but still updated...
Sorry if disappointed...no proof reading so if found any mistake don't blame me...
so here it goes...enjoy...
PART 3B:-
FLASHBACK CONT...:-
The girl is feeling overwhelm with his each words and feeling his love for her through his words and making difficult for herself to leave him...she looks into his eyes remembering each and every moment they have spent together their fight, her anger, his anger, their hatred towards each other in starting, then their understanding, friendship, trust, concern, care for each other...her eyes is becoming more and more watery and at last the hidden tears made their way down to her cheeks but before they go further down ,the boy lean in and sucked her tears away, the girl closed her eyes feeling his touch and love through those gestures and unknowingly moan "ra..gh..av"...raghav smiled against her skin listening his name from her mouth "His name never sounded so beautiful and peaceful when other called him but with her his name sounds like a melodious tune to his own ears" he thought and hugged her tight as if hiding her from the outer world and keeping her only for himself, the girl willingly goes in his embraced, feeling safe and secured not only from outer world but also from her own self who is cursing her within for going weak in love but her heart knows she wants this memories because after leaving him this memories will help her to breath till she is alive, so keeping her mind's yelling sound aside she forget herself for the last time in his arms...for sometimes both remain in that embrace feeling pure peace wash over them...one feeling that this peace will remain life time and one fully knowing that this is the last time that they are feeling peace in each other embrace...But who know what happens in future. What god have decided about their future...(and me too hahaha).

After sometimes, raghav broke the embrace but not fully he was still holding her very near to himself and seeing his teary eyes says" Is the speech so emotional that you are crying, you know I have practised these speech from morning how to deliver it and in what intensity and yes I have been writing several pages from the last 3 days but always I thought one or the other thing is missing. "The girl gave a small smile to him listening this, after that there was a pause for sometimes, they were feeling each other's presence, and after a moment of pause raghav looked towards her eyes they were downcast, he used his finger and titled her chin a little and adjust it in a way that they both were looking in each other eyes.

Raghav looking directly in her eyes, he took a deep breath and looking directly and straight towards her, he said it "I.LOVEEE.YOUU.KALPI..." ...breaking their embrace fully ,he pulled himself slightly away from her and opening his arms looking straight in her eyes he yelled "I LOVE YOU KALPANA VITHAL JADHAV"..."I..LOVE...YOU..."he said pointing his fingers towards her, then again kneeling down in front of her, he removed one red velvet box and opening it kept it in front of her, in it there was a simple yet elegant ring having beautiful small white diamond in middle and around that small white stone there were other small diamonds of multi-colour like rainbows, shining in light like a kaleidoscope...,after keeping it in middle of them kalpi standing in one side raghav kneeling in other side and ring in the middle, raghav waited patiently becoming impatient for her answer..

As for kalpi she was just standing like a statue, she don't know what to say, she know she have to leave him but she don't want to, his straight forward "I love you" was still ringing in her mind. She always wanted to listen those magical words from him...she always knew he loves her but then too every girl has a wish to hear those magical words, but destiny has other plans when she wanted to say these words that time he was not ready and now he is ready to take the relationship to other level and even she ready but now destiny is against them...she come out of her thought process when she sees raghav kneeling in front of her and bringing something out from his pocket, and after seeing the ring and his hopeful eyes she was losing herself in his passion and intensity...

"BUT NO "she resolved her decision again and said to herself "NO KALPI YOU HAVE TO DO IT...FOR HIM ...FOR HIS LOVE...AND MORE SO FOR YOURSELF...BECAUSE YOU CANT SEE HIM BROKEN AFTERWARDS SO BETTER BROKE HIM NOW SO THAT IN FUTURE HE LEAVES A HAPPY LIFE"..."DO YOU THINK THAT HE WILL BE ABLE TO LEAVE A HAPPY LIFE WITHOUT YOU" her heart yelled at her mind...Her mind answered" Yes!!he will be happy, he has to be happy"..."HOW WILL HE BE HAPPY IF HE DOES NOT HAVE YOU BESIDES HIM"..."YOU DO REMEMBER ONCE HE SAID THAT WITHOUT YOU HE IS NOTHING, HE WILL JUZT BREATH BUT WILL NOT LIVE...HE WILL LIVE A LIFE OF A CORPSE...YOU DO REMMEBER RIGHT????!!!" her heart yell and kalpi's mind does not have any answer to it, "YOU DO REMEMBER THAT RIGHT!!!,THEN HOW CAN YOU JUZT SAY HE WILL LIVE A HAPPY LIFE WITHOUT YOU KALPI' HOW COULD YOU" her heart yelled again and again mind didn't have any answer, "KALPI PLESE DONT DO IT, DONT DO THIS TO YOU... TO HIM...PLEASE..." her heart yelled to her again. Her heart was overpowering her minds decision, her decision of leaving him was going weak after weak because of her heart and her heart was telling kalpi to tell him the truth "COME ON!! KALPI SAY HIM YOU LOVE HIM AND HE LOVES YOU, TELL HIM THE TRUTH THAT YOU ARE HAVING..."..."kalpi...kalpi...kalPI...KALPI...KALPANA"raghav yelled breaking her from her thoughts.

Raghav said "where are you lost girl???Come on answer me, my knees are paining you know!!!!???? "he said while making a puppy face...

Kalpi smiled seeing his face wiped the last trace of tears that were threating to spill out any time and moved her hands forward towards raghav...YES SHE HAS TAKEN THE DECISION NOW,FINAL DECISION THAT IS...AND NOW NO ONE CAN CHANGE IT"...

By seeing her hand in front he immediately looked into her eyes and saw the much awaited feeling i.e. love in her eyes for him yes only for him... He smiled and immediately placed the ring in her ring finger, the ring fitted her like a second skin and look like that the ring was made only and only for her...kalpi smiled seeing the ring in her finger...raghav stand on his knees and without warning kalpi throw her arms around him as if holding her dear life...raghav stumbled few feet because of the surprise hug and the intensity of the hug, but successfully managed to balance both of them...and hugged her back with more passion and intensity. His hands roamed on her back which was half bare, he feeled goose bumps all in his body, he had hugged her many time but as a friend but today was different everything was different their passion, intensity, love ,care, concern everything. And he loved it.

He was busy feeling his love's soft body against his hard body but kalpi was all in her other world she was not feeling what raghav was feeling but the much more stronger than that, she always used to forget herself whenever she was in his safe arms but today she wanted to melt in his arms, wanted to dissolve in him...she closed her eyes and everything was crystal clear what she wanted...,everything and see was happy with her decision...she was hugging him with her one arms around his neck and one arms around his waist ,holding him tight, and then she remembered each and every moment spend with him AND...

The much awaited moment for raghav, he heard her saying him "RAGHAV I...LO...VE...Y...O...U...""I LOVE YOU TOO RAGHAV " .and here she said it what raghav was dying to hear but thought she is feeling shy right now, so let it go, but she said it what he wanted to hear..

"I love you kalpi " he mumbled near her ear and kissed on her neck lightly...on the other kalpi hearing it hugged raghav more tightly than she was already hugging and because of his light kiss shiver ran down her spine, she was feeling something different...some tingling sensation I guess she though and she hugged him ever so tightly with all her might and hide herself in his chest...leaving no space between them..."I love you too raghav" she said...while both close their eyes to capture this moment in their heart forever. And tear of happiness flowed from their eyes...and a small smile playing on their lips.

They stayed like that like forever, enjoying their moments, remembering their journey from hatred to love, from distance to each other's peaceful and safe arms. And then it happened like something struck to kalpi and because of that kalpi opened her eyes and pushed raghav with all her might, due to sudden push, he was not ready for it and in result he was lying on the floor and groaning in pain.

"Kalpi what the hell????Why did you pushed me" he said and then looked up on kalpi's face. Kalpi was having an smile on her lips and raghav was confused as what happened to her. Raghav started saying, "Kalpi..."and the rest of the words trailed of as, kalpi interrupted him and said, "RAGHAV...IT'S..."

END OF FLASHBACK

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SO GUYS HERE FB ENDS ANF FROM NOW ON THERE WILL BR LESS SCENE OF RAGNA AS I WANT TO SHOW EACH CHARACTERS CONNECTION TO EACH OTHER SO FIRST IT WILL COME FROM KALPI'S SIDE SO HOPE YOU ALL UNDERSTAND...
In show also I wanted to see the love and support of family for kalpi but they never showed it nicely and thoroughly...atleast I think soo...so I will show the support and connection in my way in this story...
Hope you'll understand...
Please give your review for this chappy...
Next will be updated soon...
Till then...bye...enjoy...
Edited by luvragna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Wonderful update dear..loved it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
👏 Wonderful update kya feel diya esko i loved it
Now i seriously wanna know y kalpi left him 😆😆 i know you will say it when story move a little but 😡 u created this anxiety and left us b/w
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
awesome update
eager to knw why kalpi left him
the speech part too good
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
wonderful update its so emotional confession of love and debate kalpi had finally solved and she accepted
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Nice update dear.. Poor Raghav.. Kalpi why she did this.. Plz update nxt chappy soon waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow lovely update
Ragna's emotions was beautifully written... Jus loved it
Curious to knw why kalpi left him

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: charvi3

Wonderful update dear..loved it😊

THANK YOU DEAR..

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