NEW RAGNA SS:LOVE, SECRETS AND BETRAYALS (PART 7- PAGE 23)(INCOMPLETE)

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hello guys...luvragna urf vishakha here...I was always an silent reader😊 I wanted to write something but my boards were going tostart so I was not able to do😭 anything but as my examz are over😃 I want to knot down thestory which was cooking in my mind since god knows from how many days and besides I want to give my share of help for saving
this forum so if you all give me permission then I will start my story...only if you'll want..

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and yes guys we will save our home...by any how will not let our forum get closed because now this is the only means where we can enjoy our ragna...so we will save our family...




ohk if you want I will continue😊..
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<div>SORRY IF WRITTEN something wrong..in ADVANCE😉


Index

Part 1- Page 2
NOTE- PAGE 5
Part 2- Page 5
Part 3A- Page 7
Part 3B- Page 10
Part 4- Page 13
Part 5- Page 15
Part 6A- Page 18
Part 6B- Page 21
Part 7- Page 23
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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏 hey carry on dear
We are waiting for your update
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Hi vishakha,
do continue soon ur story..
but also try to comment on other post as well.😃
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Hi vishakha
update soon
and don't forgot to make posts
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Hi dear. Sure you continue writing your story and we will all read the same 😳
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Hi vishakha. ..😃 Welcome to ragnaland. .🤗
I m always ready to reade Ragna story. .😉
Continue soon. ..
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Welcm to forum dear 😳
N waiting for ur new ragna story 😃
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hi vishakha
waiting for ur update
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hi everyone so I'm here with the first part of the story,this story will be ss but if you all like it than I can turn it into ff let see what you because I will go according to your choise😊..
And yes for the time being i'm naming this story as LOVE,SECRETS AND BETRAYAL as I don't collect any other name but if you want to suggest any name you can😃😃..
And yes sorry in advance if any errors or mistakes is there..as I'm not good in English but I had tried my best to write😳..so finishing my bhasan but not like kamala wala because I hate her then also I like to give bahsan so sooryy!!😳😳..
here I present my chotasa bakwas,kahcra story (PART 1)..sorry if disappointed..
LOVE, SECRETS AND BETRAYAL

PART 1

In New York City, where everyone is fast asleep as it is midnight there one man is standing in his room inside his balcony... Hmm...' 'Why?????...was it necessary????Was it???'He thought in his mind. Why you betrayed me ...Why you ditched me???'.'I didn't knew I was so wrong about you, first time in my life I was unable to see the persons true nature "he talked to himself. He closed his eyes and remember her evil smile ,her saying him that it was all lies, that she was not with him never ever, she just wanted to take revenge...JUST REVENGE????? JUST REVENGE!!!!!!...and then his eyes leaked some drops of tear...

"He is always known as a heartless person in front of everyone, after the incident that has taken place in his childhood. But no one know that the rudeness was melted down by someone ,that someone has joined his broken pieces of heart only to once again broke that heart. That someone has forced him to develop emotions in himself only to destroy that each emotions to the last bit till he was unable to develop any kind of emotions ever...No one knew after that broken heart, after the wound in his heart caused by that someone he became all the more rude, heartless, emotionless, arrogant jerk "he thought...

"Why after your betrayal, why after your cheat, Iam here now...why my emotionless heart till now has emotions for you...why my this heart which is broken by you to the last bits Is not agreeing for your betrayal...why this heart is waiting for you saying me that you will come and will heal my wounded heart...why this heart Is saying that you have not betrayed me...why this damn heart believes that you have lied to me that day...why????WHYYY???????????" he talked with the picture he was holding in his hand, and shedding tears of sorrow,pain,hurt..."whyyy????Till today I'm having each and every gift you have gifted me????...why???I'm not able to throw this damn gifts given by you to me...Why????I can't throw this things like you have thrown me out of your life...oh!!! sorry I was never in your life so how can you throw me out of your life...Right!!!??..Today also I'm not able to remove your memories from my heart, my soul????Why??/even today I'm having feelings for you???Why???Even today I hell love youuu...dammit!!!WHY???Even after knowing that YOU!!!YOU CHEATED MEEE???WHY???"the man asked the person in the picture he was holding...Then after few mins he throw that picture on his bed and closed his eyes remembering that dreadful day in which he lost the reason to live..."I love you...but I will hate you...and I will make sure this love will turn into hate ...I will not let you rule my soul and my heart...now n here I promise myself that my this useless love for you will turn into a feeling I myself want to develop in my emotionless heart, after many years and that feeling is hate... pure hatred...PURE HATRED!!!!"and by saying this he started remembering that person he wanted to be the reason of his life, be his love and now that person is the reason of his life but not by being his love but by being his anger,hatred...""""I HATEEE YOUUU... I HATE MYSELF FOR LOVING YOU...I HATE MYSELF FOR FALLING IN LOVE WITH YOU BEFORE 6 YEARS"""saying this, he through his balcony saw full moon and remember that, the person had told him once that she love full moon...and by remembering this he saw moon and yelled "I HATEEE YOUUU..K.A.L.P.I."...""""I ...HATE...YOU...KALPANA... VITHAL... JADHAV..."...saying this he closed his eyes and let his tears of betrayal, anger but more than anything pain and hurt flow from his eyes.."I hate you kalpana, I hate you",he mumbled in his mind though his heart was not agreeing to it but what to do today his mind Is overpowering his heart and love...

COMMENTS POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE BOTH ARE WELCOME.
TELL ME IF I SHOULD CONTINUE THIS BEKAR STORY OR NOT
guys I have thought one more name do tell me if LSR is fine for this story or should I name this story "MY LOVE CAN BE FADED BUT WILL ALWAYS REMAIN IN MY HEART"
OTHERS SUGESSTIONS WELCOME
SORRY FOR SPEECH😆😆
Edited by luvragna - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice ff...why kalpi left raghav?...

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