NEW RAGNA SS:LOVE, SECRETS AND BETRAYALS (PART 7- PAGE 23)(INCOMPLETE) - Page 4

Originally posted by: mattieram

Interesting start!! Cant wait for the rest!

Originally posted by: NANDHU92

nice update

waiting for RagNa FB

Originally posted by: lolor

emotional update...for what reason kalpi left Raghav????

Originally posted by: premap

Good concept. Thank God! Kalpi has only sacrificed her love for Rags for his own good.. I didn't except to 'cheat' Rags ever ! Thanks for making Kalpi , a sincere lover ! Btw, your English is quite good and we are thankful to you for writing in English. Thanks and please do continue.

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On 14 FEB, VALENTINES DAY😳😳

One boy is sitting on his one knees and holding one girl's hand (obviously you all know who they are!!!right!!!) saying" I know you must be knowing what I am going to say and even I know your answer but then too I want to ask, you know everything about me, you know why I am rude, arrogant, and every time angry, you know what I have to deal with in my childhood, you are the only one I have shared my feelings with, my every pain, secrets, deepest fears everything, I had not even share my thoughts and feelings with my brothers or babhis, you made me learn that I have heart which can feel emotions, happiness, love, care, everything...I never believed in god but u made me believe that there is god whom you can ask anything and everything, now I believe that there is god because he gave me you back again, I never thought that I will ever believe him but you made me believe him by making me ask him' you', your life, my life, you don't know when you were in hospital and in I.C.U, I thought my life is leaving me, after mom and dad I never thought I will get emotionally connected to anyone than myself but no you made me weak..."He said looking straight into her eyes and his eyes showing sincerity, love and affection for the girl in front of his eyes, his eyes unknowingly and involuntarily flowing with happy tears...

"Yes you made me weak that much weak that I want to get close and emotionally connected to one soul and that soul is you, you know that day when doctor said that your survival's chances is less I thought I'm losing my reason to live than I remembered that you have told me that when we ask god to give us something with pure heart he will give us that, that time I asked god for you and he gave me, I never thought that he will ever listen to me as you know my and gods friendship is not so good but anyway he gave me back my life and I'm happy..."after saying this he kissed girl's knuckles. That girl is listening each and every word with her moist eyes capturing his love in her heart because she knows after this what she is going to do will break him to that extent that he will do nothing but will hate her...and she ready for that, because she also wants that he hate her to the core so that he live peacefully...she closed her eyes and is listening his each and every word with pure love in her heart only for him...

"You know that you have changed me completely...you made me learn how to smile, how to give respect to others, in fact you made me "The Hygiene Freak" eat roadside foods...but I love it as that time you were there with me...you changed my life completely, you changed my relation with my brothers, you made me patch up with them, you made me positive in life to think positive to see life in positive view. I really want to thank you "saying this he stands up on his feet and hold the girl's upper arm and pull her towards him...the girl hold his shoulder for balancing herself. The boy lean his face closer to her face the girl was still in the effect of his lovable words that for a moment she forget that she have to leave him, loss him, broke him...the boy leaning his face closer to her cheeks, kissed her left cheek and pull himself up to see her eyes, feeling his feathery kiss on his cheek she was pulled out from her dreamland and remember she have to control herself and not let her emotions control her but she can't help but feel the rush of blush arising from her neck to her cheek and she can feel her cheek becoming red.

She look at his eyes that was showing love and only love for her and her eyes started becoming watery remembering she have to leave him but couldn't help began feeling the warmth of his love in her body...

He looked in her eyes and said "I don't know how to express how lucky I'm to have you as my reason to live ,my reason to breath, you know you are the only one for whom my heart started beating, whenever you are near me I just want to look in this big black eyes of yours and get lost in our world, when you are not with me I feel like I'm not breathing ,my eyes only want to see you ,my ears only wants to hear your sweet melodious voice, my heart only want to hear your heart beat, my hands only wants you to take possessively in my arms close to my heart and feel that you are with me every time". Saying this he kissed his right cheek.

The girl is feeling overwhelm with his each words and feeling his love for her through his words and making difficult for herself to leave him...she looks into his eyes remembering each and every moment they have spent together their fight, her anger, his anger, their hatred towards each other in starting, then their understanding, friendship, trust, concern, care for each other...her eyes is becoming more and more watery and at last the hidden tears made their way down to her cheeks but before they go further down ,the boy lean in and sucked her tears away, the girl closed her eyes feeling his touch and love through those gestures and unknowingly moan "ra..gh..av"...raghav smiled against her skin listening his name from her mouth "His name never sounded so beautiful and peaceful when other called him but with her his name sounds like a melodious tune to his own ears" he thought and hugged her tight as if hiding her from the outer world and keeping her only for himself, the girl willingly goes in his embraced, feeling safe and secured not only from outer world but also from her own self who is cursing her within for going weak in love but her heart knows she wants this memories because after leaving him this memories will help her to breath till she is alive, so keeping her mind's yelling sound aside she forget herself for the last time in his arms...for sometimes both remain in that embrace feeling pure peace wash over them...one feeling that this peace will remain life time and one fully knowing that this is the last time that they are feeling peace in each other embrace...But who know what happens in future. What god have decided about their future...(and me too hahaha).

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So guys here ends first part...sorry once again if disappointed

positive negative comments are welcome and yes guys now I want to become greedy so next update after 40 like and 20 comments(What to do I'm greedy that to a big one)