Feel My Love-RAGNA-part 2 updated on page5(7/6/2015) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome in ragna family dear.
nice cs
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi dear welcome to the forum 😊 and interesting cs 😛 update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome to our cute and sweet ragna family and nice cs
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Firstly welcome to RangLand aka PussyLand for us Nasty Reader like myself 😉😆 where the madness never stops 😳😃...
Secondly , Love how you incorporate all the cast into a RagNa story cannot wait to read what you have in store for us 😉😉...Love the mini start do continue soon 😉😉
Phew !!
My Kamla Bai is mute 😲😲
😆😆...Oh I luv it 😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome welcome hearty welcome!!!!
Wow really looking forward to one more story about RagNaaa!!!!!
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Welcome dear. Waiting to hear more from you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you so much for the likes and comments that you all have given me...
This encouraged me to write the next part
ill continue soon! 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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UPDATED!!!!

Thanku people for all your comments and sorry I could not reply! But yeah here's the update jaldi jaldi se please lev ur feedback!!! And criticism is always welcomed Smile

PART-1:
RAGHAV AND KALPI'S LIFE HISTORY:

IN USA,
Sourthern coastilne-Raghav surfs the day with his buddies,laughing and looking light-hearted.All the girls in beach were shouting his name and they all admiring raghav's surfing,After his surf,Raghav friend RICHARD invites him for the party."Oh Richard, i am sorry.I hate late night night party's...so leave me and you just enjoy with girls out there.i am going to take shower...bye buddy"
Under shower,Raghav Pov,,"Though i have a family, I am alone here.Being the son of a rich father was not my mistake.But why my brother PRAKASH hates me?????Why he sent me away from my family?????His last words before sending me USA were still inside my heart,"People with money just eat & play -They d'ont bother with dreams.If possible , D'ont even come back"Though i cry under this shower ,I am very happy that my tears cant be seen by others and i will try my best to control my sadness inside of me"
Raghav sits in a cafe & is served by a waitress who speaks to him hindi(Tum hamesha sirf black coffee phethi hu...Kuch aur try karke dhekho..)"No thanks,PRIYA .Mujhe black coffe ki alawa kuch aur nahi chaiyeh.U go and do your work".
Richard whispers in Raghav's ear "Hey man,Priya looks hot right?"
"ohh.hhhooo...I am sorry dude.I am not interested.So just leave it".Raghav started to write his high school home work essay and richard again disturbs"raghav,why you dont hate ur father &brother.They just sent you away from ur family and they dont even bother about you".
"Richard plz...I'm too lazy to hate any one".

IN MUMBAI,
Empire high school,last day before vacation,in physical training room,Prem & 2 of his freinds were heavily punching a social care group student "RAMU"(see frnds😉, in my story ramu kaka had a school boy roll...🤣.)with boxing gloves.RAMU was crying hard and he was begging them tat not to beat him.But PREM was making fun on him by saying"we were the son's of rich family.Even after your garduation u will work as a employee in one of our company.We will be always ur boss.So, always try to control ur tears and always be ready to get hit by us...so bye ramu.Go to hospital & get treatment for all ur hurt and we will meet you after vacation and be healthy to be beaten by us again".
Kalpana's life schedule was totally busy...from 7 am to 12 pm(high school),12.15 pm to 3.30 pm(part time job in a chicken shop).Then 4 pm to 7 pm (part time job -dish washing in a hotel kitchen),then 8 pm to 10 pm(Coffee shop-part time job),then after 10 pm she does her school home work..She is working hard to collect money to go to USA for her sister marriage.Kalpi and her mom lives in a small house for rent.Though she is doing many part time jobs, she always scores good marks in high school.
One day when kalpi was working in the coffee shop, she receives a message from his close buddy Sammy, "tierd!!!!sweet heart!!!!😊"
kalpi replies,"Hey topper,dont even dare to call me as wseet heart.If ur girl friend it, she will breakup with u".Then kalpi hears a voice from the corner table ,"hey kalpi, my girl friend is so cute.so wont break up with me".kalpi with a shock turns towards that table..its sammy...kalpi with anger"U idiot why you always come to my shop at this time and u didnt even order anything and more over u r studing in coffee shop...If my manager sees u,then he will send me out of this job".
"Hey kalpi.Dont worry.I am just waiting for my girl friend.I will leave once she came here.Kalpi,U r working hard dear,so come and sit here for five minutues and have this umbrella with you.I think it will be raining tonight".Kalpi with smile,"So sweet of u.Thanks for the umbrella and if u gave this umbrella to me then may may get drenched in rain😛"

"Hey buddhu, it will be so romantic.I will be very happy to go in rain with my maya".Kalpi replied as,"I am so jealous of u sammy.One day i will also enjoy with my boy friend.Just wait and watch"
A voice from there back,"Hey what is going on here?Hey kalpana what are u doing with my boy friend.I said many times not to be close with nmy boy freind.Then why are u always doing like this kalpana?" kalpi was unable to control her laugh and she replied to maya,"oh ho maya,I am doing anything with your boy friend.Just take him out.I am having work.Both u guys enjoy...Bye".Maya replied with fake anger"We will always enjoy.U dont worry about us.Come sammy, we will leave " sammy take his bag and waved bye to kalpi and went out with maya...Maya with innocence,"sammy i dont like tat u talk with other girls.dont be friend with tat kalpana".sammy replied with sweet smile,"Honey,u looks so cute when u r jealous!!"
Maya in anger shouted,"sammmyyy...".Sammy again with a smile,"I love you honey, u are my life"maya replied with smile,"ok ok,i forgive you.but dont talk to other girls"
ok i will stop this part here.
Precape-RagNa first meet and there staying together alone😉😉
thanks for all ur like and comments..since i am for south india,i am weak in writing hindi..so kindly forgive me if any mistake in hindi sentence.
sorry for the short update...next part will be super long...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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really lovely update rag is in so much pain
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update. ...
Raghav is so much in pain. ..😭 poor kalpi working so much 4 money. ..loved it. ..Waiting 4 RagNa first meeting. ..😉
Update soon. ..

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