Feel My Love-RAGNA-part 2 updated on page5(7/6/2015) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely... Plzz update nxt chappy..
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nice update
u from south me to which state r u ? i'm from ap 😃
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Awesome update dear. continue soon
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omg...the hier's...love it...but i loved woobin more then minho in there...but if its raghav den all better
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Lovely dear 👏 😛 update next part soon waiting for ragna meeting 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Santhi_

nice update

u from south me to which state r u ? i'm from ap 😃


i am from tamil nadu😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asyalover

omg...the hier's...love it...but i loved woobin more then minho in there...but if its raghav den all better


yes.this story is based on heirs...when i see heirs, i was totally thinking about RagNa only.. so i thought to write it😊
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thanks for all ur likes and comments...i will update story by tommorow.
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i am really sorry for late reply...i got stuck in my project work and i was away from my home for past 2 months.so only i was unable to update this ff.and thank you for all ur likes and comments.
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here is the next part...hope u all enjoy it..

PART-2 NEW CHAPTER IN OUR LIFE

Kalpi on her way to home sends voice mail to her sister priya," I feel very happy for Sammy and maya didi...u knw that maya is so cute and sweet, which makes me to tease her to the core...And didi, I am very happy that you are continuing your studies in states and having a perfect life...ok didi, It looks like raining and I will talk to you later...byeee..."

But on the other end, priya is having fight with her boyfriend John. He slaps priya in face and says,"bi*** get out of my house".

Kalpi gets caught in the rain and went under a shop, where the dream catchers in the store front catch her eye and bring a smile to her face and she bought a shining violet coloured dream catcher with the money from her savings.

In sammy's house both father and son cooks dinner together and chat about his upcoming plan to move to the states for 1 month course and Sammy also tells his father, that he did not tell about his plan to goto states to kalpi till now, as she was busy in her part time jobs.

In chairman's house, Gauri was upset as his son Raghav doesn't pick her phone. So she was drinking wine in dining hall. Kamala rushed over there and writes on her notepad,"Prakash sab reached home. So hide your wine glass". Immediately Gauri gave wine glass to Kamala and she hides it back. Prakash went directly to his dad room, "Dad, I am home. Feeling tired. Going to sleep. Good night".

Kamala wraps up the remaining food to take home to kalpi ...
In home, Kamala ask Kalpi to just eat that food without complaints. Kalpi annoyed by Kamala's behavior and she shouts kamala to throw these food out and she don't want to eat any waste food. She stomps to her tiny room and tearfully blames her sister for leaving them to live in comfort on her own. Then Kamala gives her a bank book to send a huge amount of her savings to Priya as she was getting married. Then Kalpi decided that she will attend her sister marriage in states and she will give the money to Priya once she reaches there. Kamala slao agrees for it.

On the other hand, Pakhi is annoyed by her mother Neetu as she announces that she'll be getting remarried and also neetu tells her to be prepared to meet her new daddy sahil.

Pakhi is dragged to lunch along with his step father sahil and his son prem. Pakhi and prem knows each other already as they were studying in same high school and pakhi hates prem because of his rude behavior.

Both pakhi and prem sulk in silence while their parents chat pleasantly; Prem cant control this embarrassing situation. Hence he burst his anger😡 by throwing folk spoons over floor, which in turn leads him to earn a heavy SLAP on his face by sahil. Prem cant stand it anymore and leaves the room.

Pakhi also follows him out and she informs prem that she will be on his side to break their parents marriage. Then prem replies, "I never said that I hated this marriage. Then why should I break their marriage for u?????".

Pakhi with smile replied, "If our parents married, the u will become my brother. As I am engaged to Raghav singhania, the he will become your sister's husband..."On hearing Raghav's name prem got anger and leaves that place.

Kalpi works yet another job scrubbing dishes. When her boss asks about her school vacation plans, she answers frankly that she's going to the states and she doesn't plan to return.

Kalpi(pov):"priya getting married means she doesn't intend to return back to india, and that means I'm stuck forever washing dishes and living with mother". Leaving is an escape plan she has been dreaming for the past ten years.

In chawl, Kalpi packs her things and she cleans the cupboard and keeps some blank notebooks for her mom's use. Kalpi goes through one of the used note of kamala and the messages in that note weighs down her note-It's all stuff like "I'm sorry gauri madam"& "please don't be angry, gauri madam" and lot more apology sentences written by kamala. She cries silently while going through pages and writes a message for kamala in a fresh book:"I'M SORRY MOM. I'LL MAKE SOMETHING OF MYSELF AND SEND IT FOR YOU. WAIT JUST A LITTLE...LOVE YOU MOM AND TAKE CARE"

Pakhi plans a trip to states to see Raghav and she is happily packing all her designer suits and sandals to impress Raghav.

Back in his beach front estate, Raghav ignores calls from Pakhi. Richard watches Raghav behavior and ask him to pick up the call. Raghav tells to Richard that, "It's my engagement anniversary in 2 days and I know that Pakhi might be on aiport to board on a fight. I am least interested to listen her conversation. So just chill dude...".

Kalpi lands at newyork airport with a bit of wide eyed little girl in the big-city with nervousness. She is having a page full of written notes which contains English sentences that helps her to way outside the airport and there she spots a girl answering a call in hindi

Pakhi:"Hahn mom, Raghav meri sath hai.apka damad bilkul theek hai. He is so sweet and came to pick me up";

On hearing hindi kalpi was excited and starts to listen pakhi's conversation.
Pakhi: "mom, Raghav is good and his colour became dull beause of the summer tan and he lost some weight also".

But Kalpi noticed that there was a old-aged man(Driver) only came to pick Pakhi. But pakhi is continuously lying to her mom. On seeing this Kalpi cantcontrol her laugh. Unfourtunately Pakhi spotted that Kalpi was laughing on her. She immediately called Kalpi, "ooi, ladkhi".

Kalpi got afraid and turned towards other side. Pakhi again called her ,"arey besharam". This time Kalpi turns towards Pakhi and says, "excuse me. Why are you calling me.I think you miss understood. I don't know hindi".

Pakhi with evil smile," How could a person don't know hindi, can identify that I am speaking in hindi". Kalpi in tension bite her lower lip and in low voice," bappa plz save me"...

Kalpi with courage says :" you are saying lie to ur mom that your boyfriend came to pick you up. But driver is only here. So I laughed on your lie".
Pakhi in anger:"You better be in ur limit. Don't interfere in others personel matters".

Kalpi was afraid and immediately takes her suitcase and ran away from there.


Ok frnds...I will stop this part here..hope you all like it...precap is same as the previous part and I will promise you that I will update nxt part by next week...
Plz forgive me for any grammatical mistakes and do comment on it and don't forget to hit ur like button...
Nxt part will be full of RagNa...

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