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sweet1308

@sweet1308

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

ohh awesome update

he actually let her go controlling his devil while stating he need that she became his

n kalpi unable t get him out of her thought 😳😆

kalpi nearly come close t death n rag saved her wow love this rag😳

he took her again in the hotel n this time he kissed her

update soon want t see kalpi reaction

Edited by sweet1308 - 11 years ago

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ovee

@ovee

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Nice update. Thank god raghav saved kalpi.

Edited by ovee - 11 years ago

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Aria

@Cinnamonn

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

RES I'm excited Neha Update naa😳😳 I love this FF😳😳

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Waiting for it to complete before I comment. 😛

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Neha when will u complete update 😛

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leelu

@leelu0001

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

nice new story neha but pls raghav ko thoda human bano cant see him this harsh n obsessive

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FALAK_SKY

@FALAK_SKY

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

It's really very nice neha...i just love ur stories u r fab yar...but plzz don't show Raghav like this much yar he is our hero our prince charming.. N u hv shown him as devil

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funnyhingora

@funnyhingora

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

oh ur update r superb neha thanks

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darkloveriam

@darkloveriam

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: FALAK_SKY
It's really very nice neha...i just love ur stories u r fab yar...but plzz don't show Raghav like this much yar he is our hero our prince charming.. N u hv shown him as devil
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relax dear

i'm writing raghav character as devil and kalpi as angel so it's obvious somethig like this definatly happen but as i say before this story has a long way to go.

have faith on me and give sometime for story to shape up.

and regarding making raghav character like that if u think i'm doing wring so i'm exrtremely sorry but dark character never suit kalpi