My heartbeat - epilogue pg68 - 01/03

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#241

before the marriage fiasco I really liked Paakhi.

And, I think if she had kept wearing her western dresses and not changed her personality so drastically with all the pativrata drama I would have continued to like her.

It was a good story gone rotten. Cant blame Paakhi for it. Paakhi was a sweet normal girl too busy with her own life. That is OK.

Kamla the cow is a totally diffrent story... I dislike Kamla immensely.

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Aru18

@Aru18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#242

awesome yaar

hats off to u r wriiting..

and like u i also want t get rid of pakhi soon..don't want her near to raghav & kalpi.this pakhi remind me ema wali pakhi..

btw i like u r idea..raghav think kalpi is love someone and carrying his child..its fab idea.

continue soon dear

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Priya

@priya_remix

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Posted: 10 years ago

#243

Fuzzz fuzzz fuzzz!!!! Everytime u write a story u create a buzz buzz buzzz!!!!

Look at this thread buzzing with comments, complaints, praises, appreciations, admiration and all!!!

No matter how many times I warn myself that NO Do Not attempt to read Fuzz's stories as they are left unfinished after some time leaving me restless and wanting for some more!!!

But then ye dil hai ki manta nahi!!! Yes just couldnt control from peeping and then I got trapped in the flow of the story!

Loved the concept and though I wondered why is it running, I realised that you were pressurised to send off Pakhi's character! Hmmm loved loved just loved it!!!! Puhllleeez fuzzz do something na n pleeease complete these ones atleast in one flow without a break!

Now that I am hooked on to this one only God knows how restless I am gonna be till you bless us all with your next update!!

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ArVi-licious

@ArVi-licious

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#244

Thanks for d pm. .. Waiting for more updates

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Fuzzz fuzzz fuzzz!!!! Everytime u write a story u create a buzz buzz buzzz!!!!
Look at this thread buzzing with comments, complaints, praises, appreciations, admiration and all!!!

No matter how many times I warn myself that NO Do Not attempt to read Fuzz's stories as they are left unfinished after some time leaving me restless and wanting for some more!!!

But then ye dil hai ki manta nahi!!! Yes just couldnt control from peeping and then I got trapped in the flow of the story!

Loved the concept and though I wondered why is it running, I realised that you were pressurised to send off Pakhi's character! Hmmm loved loved just loved it!!!! Puhllleeez fuzzz do something na n pleeease complete these ones atleast in one flow without a break!

Now that I am hooked on to this one only God knows how restless I am gonna be till you bless us all with your next update!!

Omg... Look who the cat dragged in 😆 was thinking about having a hissy fit when I saw your like in one of my updates and no comment... In the end decided against it 😆 I shall try... The speed of my updates depend on work schedule and my muses 😉

Edited by angelpureness - 10 years ago

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#246

Angel is Fuzz nickname for farzana 😛

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#247

What a combo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Priya is complaining and fuzz urf Farzana is complaining about Priya.???

Farzana is a lovely name.What does it mean???

And eagerly waiting ,how Rags will find out the truth behind this pregnancy.

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Rubina

@Rubz1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#248

Omg fuzz what has this story turned out...gosh i was just stunned... Couldnt reply before... But i just want to say that ur an excellent writer...par yeh samajh nahin aaraha ki yeh rags dumbla kamla ki tarha kyun behave kar raha hai, make gim realise soon dea but i am eagerly waitin to know ki ab aage kya hoga... Update soon..

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#249

Happy belated birthday sweety... Switymango

Happy Valentine's Day peeps...

I am going for a short leap... To make the plot a little neat and tidy... Lol

Chapter 8

2 months later.

Ragav watches Kalpi walk about the garden, frowning he wonders what to do. He had tried his best as politely as possible to find out if Kalpi's boyfriend was on the scene... All he got from Kalpi was questions... Where is Pakhi? Why did she leave? Is she upset that I carry your child? When is she coming back? He had no answers to give her. He could hardly tell her that Pakhi thought that the child was his and hers... Ragav and Kalpi's... He could hardly tell her that Pakhi left because she does not want to remain married to man who loves another... Who loves her.

And then there was his mother, he could not forget the day he had confronted her, telling her that he and Pakhi knew the truth. His mother had turned ghost white. Sighing he thinks that it is really sweet that his mother would do everything possible to shield Kalpi from the world.

Neetu watches her son watch Kalpi and thinks with a pang of guilt, "In my greed to be a grand mum... To hold my son's child in my arms... I broke his marriage. What am I to do?... No...no... Oh gosh should I suggest it... No...no I don't think so... Oh gosh how will Ragav react? Kalpi? Kamla?... But my grandchild will have two parents... Pakhi has made it very clear to me she is not coming back?... What should I do... Oh this guilt...

stalkers... Sunyy... Mini... Welcome 😆 mini read another new one... Torn.

Kalpi walks about the garden, deep in thought, trying to understand, what went wrong, frowning she wonders why Pakhi left... It was a question that was eating her up... Deep down worried that Pakhi may have not been happy with the idea that Kalpi carry her child... Yet she couldn't understand... For how does a mother abandon her child... Kalpi places her hand on her womb and whispers... Don't you worry... I will love you... And I will never leave you.

Sensing someone watching her, she turns towards the house, squinting as she shields her eyes from the sun... Seeing no one she walks back to the outhouse. Ragav watches her go, feeling like a heel for he hid from her... His heart heavy, thinking, "what a mess? I am having to hide from her in order to avoid answering her questions."

Neetu clears her throat, making her son aware of her presence, she walks up to him. "Ragav I was thinking. For the sake of the child, what if you and Kalpi got married," neetu says. Ragav looks at his mother in surprise, his heart jumping with joy, "yes please. Help me make her mine... Only mine... Now and forever." His mind thinking, "gosh mum, i did not realise we have the same worries... Kalpi becoming an unwed mother." He asks, "do you think Kamla maa and Kalpi will agree? I mean... I am much older and will be a divorcee too." Patting his arm, neetu says, "leave it to me. I will handle everything." Ragav hugs his mother and heads to the study, his heart anxious and happy to get his love.

Once alone, his mind attacks... She doesn't love you

His heart defends... I love her

His mind attacks... The baby isn't yours

His heart defends... The baby will be mine once he or she comes into this world

His mind attacks... What if she never loves you

His heart defends... Keeping her happy and safe from the world is enough for me

Edited by angelpureness - 10 years ago

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#250

Me first 😃 omg another tangled web. U r the master of deception. So Neetu will get them married . 😛 but will this web of misunderstandings be cleared. Ek aur update yaar. 😃

Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago

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