My heartbeat - epilogue pg68 - 01/03 - Page 23

Originally posted by: sunyy

Angel r u still stuck? Maybe update chapter 1 of broken wings and then something will come to u. 😛

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Kalpi thinks she is carrying Pakhi and Ragav baby

Ragav and Pakhi think Kalpi is carrying her boyfriends baby

Neetu is the only one who knows it is Ragav and kalpis baby.

My gosh... I had planned an intense story.. But am heading towards comedy😆

Originally posted by: sumasridhar

I'm not at all satisfy wd this story so Plz angle forgive me as I'm fan of ur all ff n as but not this one once.again sorry

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

Hi fuzz.

i read all parts nd i found the story is abruptly changed. The the reason is your love to ur story readers nd their love feelings for ragna.

i salute u for change the whole story line just for ur readers. U r just fabulous fuzz.

but due to abrupt change , this story has lost its charm completely. I can understand ur love for the character named pakhi as ur pakhi is different from ema's pakhi..fully agreed i m...but u know the ragna love nd their charm. After what ema cvs had done with ragna just coz of pakhi, the character named pakhi was only can be seen like a vamp from the point of view of ragna fans. Even pakhi's name is enough to rise anger inside ragna fan in a split second nd her presence around ragna...was totally unacceptable by them. Even if we ragna fans wants to be see pakhi as a positive character, it turns out a full failure attempt. U also know that if u adjoined any other character name dispite of pakhi, it can work fully but its only pakhi's name which is beyond our toleration limits...i hope u r understanding what im trying to say.

so the point is, i will try to read story containing pakhi .

u portrayed pakhi's character in a way that i m liking her in this story. Nd one request.,pls do not change ur storyline now onwards. Present ur story in ur way so that it won't lost its original charm.

no harsh feeling for this pakhi nd for the story. I m just putting my point of view before u. My this comment was only in positive manner. Pls if u find ny line of this comment in negative sense, just think it in positive way as i m not good in words.

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

@fuzz

thanks for respecting my pov fuzz.

i wanna say one thing, if u r considering it to rewrite din't know but i think it also won't work coz somewhere background nd plot of the story will be same. Its only my pov.

nd about ragna wedding plot , don't worry. I know u r stressed about the feedback of the story nd charm of it that has lost. But u have the capability of doing it. Just be calm nd don't stress much. Give sometime to urself, it will really help.